a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 71

So finally Sharon confessed ..😃

Luvly update...
Aww swayam staring at sharon whole night...
Swaron secnd kiss...;)
Swayam teasing sharon...
Finally dey r behaving lyk couples...
Update asap
Thnx fr pm

Aww... this was a such an adorable and lovely update. Swayam has finally managed to understand Sharon's thoughts. The way Sharon was sleeping and Swayam observing her...hayeee😳😳 Loved teasing Swayam and blushing Sharon.☺️.

Wow chappychappy
Loved it too much

Thanks 4 . D pm

n i read it all in a go :)

Vry nyc update

hey, I know I have become one silent reader but can't help it as my busy work schedule doesn't allows me to read and comment or like.. Coming back to the story, I m loving the way u r unfolding the story.. be it that confession or the Shimla tour or be it them watching yjhd or anything, I m just loving it.. Last chapter was kinda cute for me.. Ahhh finally she confessed, but I loved the way u penned it down.. her (cute) sleeping description was lovely.. that kalyug wala line was funny.. The teasing wala part made me go to the awww land.. as I saod it before the chapter was cute.. nd yes waiting for u to update the next chapter of this as well as 'It...smile'.. sooo happy to read your third ongoing ff.. its lovely and a treat to read... Arrggghhh ' how can 'nothing lasts forever' end.. but anyway I loved its epilogue.. sorry won't be able to comment on each ff nd won't be able to actively comment on ur works... waiting for the upcoming chapters..


-cheers
cherry

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Oh please no thanks to me -_- i just gave slight idea

Major work was to put in words making it cute ^_^

i loved the teasing parts ^_^

Honeymoon extension :v :v

She is so open to confess now ^_^ I'm so happy

Their second kiss *-* first after confession

Finally behaving like married couple _/\_

Did he sleep or passed on whole night observing her wife :p so lost in love

:3 Sharon, i can imagine her shocked :p listening to the sudden news :v

Looking forward to how swayam is gonna tease her more ;)

Update soon :(

I wanna read next part :'(

Thanks :')

👏

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

Haawww Finally after lots of demanding and threatens madam updated... 😆

Loved it as usual ..👏

But u were saying that u are going update something else na 😉, Then what happened????? I was waiting for that... 😆..But its ohk..i can wait more... This is beautiful one...

Loved the way swayam teased sharon...aww she is blushing, So cute ☺️

Loved the talk between swaron they are really tooo cute... Swayam is too naughty😆

And the special sleep only swayam can do.😆 what he was doing, admiring his lady love ...😳 Thats so sweet of him... Im admiring this guy now😆...he is so sweet...and lovely 😉

Really good see their love is reciprocating 😃.. She is openly confessing now... Thts great😛

And their second kiss which reminded me of first one...thats was a pure bliss...😳

But y they going back??😕

End was so funny😆

Pervert and swayam 😆

I love the last line as sharon's wish to throw him out of universe...such a nice idea...😆😆

Update fast...

Waiting

Keechu

Originally posted by: ujwalv

superb update😊

nw they r actually behaving like a married couple..

loved it..loved teasing part..naughty swayam..😛 😃😆

awesome update..

☺️

yaar 2din pehle kyun ja rahe hai😛

kuch plan to nahi hai..surprise😉