a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 70

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ritz15

Oops !! Shayad m late in commenting...koi nii 😛
well finally sharon confessed after sooo longgg
Dii really ur writing has improved a lottt
👏
waiting fr d next update


comments bandh kar diya karna fir se...

thanks for this one
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 23

"kyunki mai tujhse pyaar karti hoon... I love you..." she closed her eyes tightly...

Swayam smiled at his innocent cookie...

"finally..." he whispered with a huge grin as realization dawned about Sharon that what she has done...

She opened her eyes looking at him grinning and struggled to come out of his grip...

"kya hua cookie????" he asked with concern as he saw tears streaming down her cheeks... Sharon didn't look at him but looked down trying to wipe her tears... Swayam quickly held her shoulder and made her sit on the bed and himself kneeled down in front of her... he cupped her face and wiped her tears...

"cookie??? Kya hua??? Do you regret saying what you said now????" he asked softly...

Sharon gulped her saliva but didn't reply...

"I know cookie .. tujhe yehi lagta hai na agar tu mujhe apni dil ki baat bol degi to I'll start taking you for granted..." He asked with the softest eyes possible... Sharon looked down to meet his eyes... for the first time she felt swayam understood her without her saying it...

"aisa nahi hoga...i promise you...mujhe pata hai pichle kuch salon mein maine aisa kuch nahi kiya jisse tujhe mujhpe yakeen ho... but trust me mai tujhe yakeen dila dunga... baas mujhe ak chance de..." He asked softly...

Sharon nodded with a smile...

"please don't regret this cookie... Pata hai mai ye pehele samajhta nahi tha...mujhe lagta tha humare apne humare har baat samjh jate hai... par aisa nahi hota... its very important to let them know that they are important in our life..its important to remind them eery now and then ki hum unse pyaar karte hai...right???" he asked as if explaining to a kid... Sharon nodded... Swayam smiled widely...

"to fir to har roj yaad dilayegi na??? mujhe...that how much you love me..." Swayam said in a teasing tone...

Sharon glared at him... " haa aur joota jhadu bhi parega..."

Swayam dramatically sighed...

"kaliyug a hi gaya... Patni pati ko jadhu maregi..." Sharon giggled hugging him tight...

Swayam stood up and picked Sharon in his arms and tucked her on the bed... he kissed her softly on the forehead... "good night..." Sharon kissed on his cheeks leaving him smiling widely...

Swayam laid down beside her looking at her closed eyes with a smile... He didn't even realiz when time was passing by... He carefully followed each of her movement in sleep...from time to time she would pull the covers more over her shoulder leaving her feet in freezing cold... Swayam got up and each time her feet came out of the cover he covered her carefully...

Swayam watched as she threw her hands and legs over the bed sometimes landing on his legs and stomach and he stayed still so that his cookie's sleep doesn't get disturbed... He kept smiling throughout the night as Sharon made faces while sleeping and from time to time removed the hairs falling over her face and kissed her forehead each time...as the night passed Sharon slowly kept moving towards him unless she was hugging him tightly almost on a verge of choking him to death...

Swayam didn't complain and gladly wrapped his arms around her...

Swayam kept looking at her throughout the night and as the morning rays entered the room he shifted to the bathroom to get freshed...

In the meantime Sharon woke up on the bed rubbing her eyes and looked around to search for swayam...

"good morning cookie..." He came taking her by surprise... She smiled at him like a kid with sleepy eyes and wished him back...

Swayam sat in front of her and kissed her forehead... " I love you..." He whispered...

"I love you too..." for the first time Sharon said in own her own... Swayam's eyes turned intense as he leaned in to take her lips...sharon didn't move back but instead put her hands around his neck pulling her closer as the shared their second kiss , this time both knowing each other's feelings...

As they broke apart Sharon kept her head on his shoulder and swayam kept stroking her hair...

"aaj ke din ghum lete hai... shopping ghumna..anything you want... and tehn aaj sham ki flight se we will go home..." He said looking at her ... Sharon was taken aback... they were about to return after a couple of days...

"kyun?? Hum to 2 days baad lautne wale the na???" she frowned in confusion...

"kyun??? Tujhe honeymoon se 2 days pehele lautna pasand nahi hai??? why kya karna chahti hai???" he smirked at her...

"what non sense..." Sharon looked away in embarrassment...

"don't worry cookie... hum lautne k baad bhi kar sakte you know... What you want to do in honeymoon..." Swayam said trying hard not to burst out into a laughter...

"mujhe kuch karna nahi hai...you are such a pervert..." Sharon said in disgust...

"array baba...ek bohut important kaam agaya...that's why... Waise gussa hone wali kaunsi baat hai..." he paused and then continued... " to tu sach mein nahi chahti hai kuch karna????" he hid his smile again...

Sharon hit him by a pillow... " pervet..." She muttered...

"array isme pervert hoNE wali kaunsi baat hai...??? I was talking about having Chinese... tujhe khana tha Na??? wo to hum laut k bhi kha sakte hai... kyun tujhe kuch aur laga kya????" he asked with the most innocent face possible...

Sharon wanted to throw him out of the universe at that time but ended up smiling and blushing hard...

SO SANCHI GAVE ME THE IDEA OF THE CHAPTER...SO SAARE THANKS USKO BOLNA...AUR AGAR I MADE IT TOO CHEESY(WHICH SHE DIDN'T DO) TO BREAD MEIN LAGAKE KEECHU DI KO KHILA DENA...COZ SHE THREATENED ME TO WRITE THIS DOWN...


LOVE ANI

Edited by flyinghigh_ani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh please no thanks to me -_- i just gave slight idea
Major work was to put in words making it cute ^_^
i loved the teasing parts ^_^
Honeymoon extension :v :v

She is so open to confess now ^_^ I'm so happy
Their second kiss *-* first after confession

Finally behaving like married couple _/\_
Did he sleep or passed on whole night observing her wife :p so lost in love

:3 Sharon, i can imagine her shocked :p listening to the sudden news :v
Looking forward to how swayam is gonna tease her more ;)

Update soon :(
I wanna read next part :'(
Thanks :')
Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haawww Finally after lots of demanding and threatens madam updated... 😆
Loved it as usual ..👏
But u were saying that u are going update something else na 😉, Then what happened????? I was waiting for that... 😆..But its ohk..i can wait more... This is beautiful one...
Loved the way swayam teased sharon...aww she is blushing, So cute ☺️
Loved the talk between swaron they are really tooo cute... Swayam is too naughty😆
And the special sleep only swayam can do.😆 what he was doing, admiring his lady love ...😳 Thats so sweet of him... Im admiring this guy now😆...he is so sweet...and lovely 😉
Really good see their love is reciprocating 😃.. She is openly confessing now... Thts great😛
And their second kiss which reminded me of first one...thats was a pure bliss...😳
But y they going back??😕
End was so funny😆
Pervert and swayam 😆
I love the last line as sharon's wish to throw him out of universe...such a nice idea...😆😆
Update fast...
Waiting


Keechu
Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Di awesome update
Loved it
Loved it wen swayam was staring at sharon at night wen she was sleeping

Swayam teasing sharon ...LOL...!!

Update the nxt part soon
Nd thnx for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update😊
nw they r actually behaving like a married couple..
loved it..loved teasing part..naughty swayam..😛 😃😆
awesome update..
☺️
yaar 2din pehle kyun ja rahe hai😛
kuch plan to nahi hai..surprise😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally 🥳

LOVE it 😊

"array isme pervert hoNE wali kaunsi baat hai...???
I was talking about having Chinese... tujhe khana
tha Na??? wo to hum laut k bhi kha sakte hai...
kyun tujhe kuch aur laga kya????" he asked with
the most innocent face possible..." 🤣 🤣

Awsum chp 😊
Edited by SHA_85 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
They r actually behaving like a married couple...soo cute
Awsumm part
Thnk uh for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
aawww... adorable update... finally srp confessed... lovely... hoping fr more cute scenes ahead... 😃😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
unresed on 127 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/122058673
Edited by --Keechu-- - 10 years ago

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