a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 41

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Shit whenever I wish for beyond commitment to be updated its always that in my PM

Do you even realize how emotional it was :o

And it was definitely not what I imagined :o you wrote so well dear hats off

And you updted even in exams _/\_

Dying for next update :o

Update soon.

Thanks for PM 😃

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Finally Sharon spoke for herself. ..

Awesum update

Di u hv written it really very well😊

Very excited to read next update

Soo plzz update soon

Thank you for PM😛

Originally posted by: Khizar_SWARON

res

okay stop giving shocks to me

or anyone else

it's too much

I really thought a confession but a fight ? 😲

and that too a big one

I really wanna know whats gonna happen next

So please update soon 😃

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

what an emotional update... so well penned... sharon is so right...

plz update soon... 😊

Originally posted by: keechu91

aniii...

wow wonderful update...

i loved both swayam and sharon...

the emotions,pain ,guilty everything was superb..

u penned everything in well suited way...

and thanx for pm ...

sorry for small cmt..

with love

keechu di

Originally posted by: firefly..

Hey Ani,

Thank God it was only Sharon's diary only, I was so much preoccupied with so many thaughts..phew!! You're truly an awesome writter..the protrayal of Sharon's thaught into the diary was a pure treat to read.

Let's see how Swayam's feeling changes after this. Update soon. Love u for this supercool update.

Love,

Sree 🤗

Originally posted by: Mansi98

Nice update👏

Loved it

Bt it was very emotional😭

Sharon is so right😊

He was nt der😡

Its nt her bt his mistake😡

Then y is he complaining about it😡

Cant he understand tat she loved him all dis years😡

Still jese bhi hai mera swayam hai😳

I so love him😳

Nw dis story is at a huge point😊

Update soon😊

N thanx fr d PM😊

Love

Mansi😊

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

hello

once again a very nyc update

swayam read the dairy and now he is guilty

and guilty is shown in the form of anger

he feel betrayed he questions sharon

but somewhere i feel he is not wrong from his pov

he does expect that hus best frnd shud share everything with him

but sharons outburst was something unexpected

that portion was aptly written

wud love to know wat wud happen next

who wud make the first move to mend things

update soon

love

shini

Originally posted by: anubhutijain

Hello! Nice update...at first when I actually read d last chp.i juz kept on thinking whats swayam holdin in his hand...thank god wasnt sumthin serious type...nice update...hope they b togetha soonnn...I gpur pm n scrap...thanks fr it 😊 update fast n pls pm...😊

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