a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15* - Page 22

Originally posted by: anubhutijain

Awesome update ...d way u explained their kiss was... juz luvd disss update thanks fr d pmmm 😊

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan

ani...🤗
such a superb update
you never fail to impress ua readers
wid such wonderful chain of words
coming to the update
swaron's first special kiss
did i really read it
or am i dreaming...
loved how sharon said he needn't justify that moment
they watching horror movie
seems even swayam was afraid
loved it how sharon said sharon shekhawat
after correcting sharon rai pakash
hope swayam sooon find wat this ajeeb sa feeling is
the bone crushing hug@last
was much needed
thnx 4 the pm
do update next part soonish

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

lovely didu!!

I loved the way u described every moment!

haye, finally!!

Awhhh and the starting!!

Lovd it!!

U are tooo gooodd didu

(I know bada comment nahi hai, really sorry.. mood nahi tha)

Originally posted by: snehaswaron77

update plz...& hope more swaron romance is lined up for us...

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

Did they just kissed :o *_*

But for Swayam they still are just friends :3

Loved how he kept on insusiting on not to watch horror movie knowing Sharon and her fears well ^_^

It was interesting update with quite changed from previous ones :D

Update soon

Sorry for late comment

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Reserved.

^Unreserve^
I havent read the last four parts yet but looking at the update I understand that SwaRon are best friends are married...Cool :)

But they both behave like "Friends" They kissed in the moment...The kiss was beautifully described with the setting...And Swayam finally felt a spark ...Sharon understood him so well :) Really amazing part...Update soon :)

PART 6

It was another Sunday and swayam Sharon didn't have to go to the academy today... swayam had completed some works of his father and uncle's company... he knew he was the only son of the house and before beside the academy he used to look into the company's matter seriously...

"cookie chal aaj dinner k liye bahar chalte hai..." swayam came into his room , sorry their room and spoke...

Sharon was cleaning their cupboard ... as she heard swayam speak she turned around and jumped...

"haa chalte hai na...chal gang ko bhi bula lete..."

"nahi aa payenge...rey nil aur Vicky ko kahi jaana para aur sare girls yaad hai aj koi spa ya kuch aise hi jaane wale the... Tu ne jaane se mana kar diya..."

"arrey haa mujhe to yaad hi nahi tha...achha aj musky ghar pe hi hai...use le ke chalte hai..."

"thik hai jaa bata ke aa use..."

Sharon moved to muskaan's room...

"musky jaldi se taiyar ho jaa...mein tu aur swayam dinner k liye jaa rahe hai..." Sharon patted her back...

Muskaan was in a fix now...she didn't want to go because she wanted swayam and Sharon to spend time alone...

"nahi Sharon di... Meri tabiyat thik nahi hai...tum log aaj chale jao,... fir kabhi sath mein chalenge..."

"kya hua tujhe...thik to haina tu??" Sharon asked with concern...

"relax Sharon di... Kuch nahi hua hai...pure week ka college ka pressure...ek din holiday mila to bohut lazy feel kar rahi hoon...poora din so lungi to thik ho jaongi..." She smiled...

"okay...fit hum bhi baad mein chalenge..." Sharon said...

"array nahi...tum dono aaj jao na... maza hoga...waise bohut din ho gaye bhai ka wallet khatam kiye hue...haina???" both broke into a fit of laughter...

Swayam and Sharon was having a great time dining together...

They were laughing and pulling each other's legs...

"cookie tere face par kuch laga hai..." Swayam pointed towards her lips...

"kaha..." she rubbed some other part of her cheeks...

"nahi waha nahi..." he pointed it closely...she again made a futile attempt...

"uff tu ruk mai karta hoon..." he bend down over the table a little and rubbed the chocolate away from the corner of her lips carefully... sharon's breath hitched and she clutched the side of her dress tightly...

After swayam was done he wiped the hands with a tissue and smiled at her casually ..

"ho gaya..." Sharon smiled back at her trying hard to stay normal...

soon they finished their dinner and came out of the restaurant laughing over something suddenly the smile from swayam's face vanished looking at the person standing in front of him... Sharon frowned seeing swayam's expression change and followed his gaze and stood rooted to the ground...

A girl was standing there looking at swayam sharon...sharon was numb seeing her...an unknown fear of losing swayam forever gripped her heart...before they could register what was happening the lean girl came and hugged swayam tightly...

She was radhika... swayam met her in his MBA classes and liked her... Radhika was well aware of that but never paid any heed...

"I am so sorry swayam...at that time was so confused that I ignored you... I was a fool trust me... but I have realized that I couldn't get anyone better than you... I am really sorry swayam...I really am..." Swayam didn't hug radhika back...she was the same girl whom once upon a time swayam liked... He stood there with a confused expression...

Sharon looked at them with tears brimming in her eyes...she could feel herself standing between swayam and his happiness... as she was about to move away to give them some privacy swayam caught hold of her hand and pleaded her a no through his eyes... Then he jerked radhika away from him and pulled Sharon close to himself and spoke...

"hey radhika...what a pleasant surprise... By the way...meet Sharon... Sharon shekhawat... my wife..." he looked at Sharon and smiled and held her waist...

All three of them stood in the empty parking lot as a silence took over the situation...

Precap:will Sharon leave for swayam's happiness???or something else is waiting

surprise and shock awaiting for you!!!!! leave your likes and comments...

love , ani

wow swaron dinner time...

loved it..
musky is really sweet yr..

bt why is radhika back...

nd shock...why ...no shock plz...

thanks 4 d pm

ok nw that wat sumthing interesting :)
nyc part
update soon

Heyaa app kya likhte ho...seems like m watchin sherlock holmes aur suddenly kisi ne climax par rok diya...plsss jaldi update karnaaa aur lamabaaa vaallklaaa plsss...thanks fr d pm!..😊