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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#681

It was a nice update Jenny...I am glad that Sujata taking Navin words going to talk with her daughter... every mother on Sujata's position behaved like she does..I found Khushi's parents feelings and emotions are close to reality... So it was lavanya, who came to Arnav's clinic...and they're going to talk on much awaited topic...here, I want to read la's POV.. and what's going on in aman & anita lives... when their love story is going to start... I'm eagerly waiting for this moment...very nice update dear...thinks

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#682

While I'm happy for Arnav Khushi...I feel extremely bad for Lavanya :( :-/ But I'm sure that is the kind of reaction that is expected with the sort of writing that you do. You have to show the story from not just two sides but three... and you've been doing a tremendous job at it. 👏

And I have a feeling in the future updates I'm going to be feeling a lot more worse for Lavanya :( Here she's finding hope when she should be looking forward to moving on...

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Spoonai

@Spoonai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#683

Res

Finally update is here?!!! Loved the update.

Well, I really do respect Sujata thoughts and her indifference to khushi and the whole situation, she is just being the protected mother and want the best for her daughter. And she do feel scared, what if Arnav did the same to her daughter, what if Arnav n his wife make up what abt her daughter? And mostly, Arnav is a married man and tht too with a decease kid. Everyone hve their own opinion and it's right in their role of the relations they share with each other. Where as Navin, he still believe tht khushi did tried her best which she did but was knock down by love. He still has tht faith on his daughter, where as Sujata is a hurt mother and she is seeing tht dramatic change in her daughter which is a natural respond from a mother to feel hurt, anger n insecure.

Still worried abt khushi dreams,does it hold any significance?

Can't wait for lav n Arnav conversation!!!

Plz continue sooner!!! Can't wait :(

Edited by Spoonai - 10 years ago

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#684

Superb update loved it thank you for pm.

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#685

What a fabulous story.. How well u r showing the turmoil and feelings in each person.. Absolutely lovely ..

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#686

Gosh LA is back, I hope things don't go haywire!!

very nice update

thanks for pm x

happy dusshera to you and your family x

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manusmithcl

@manusmithcl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#687

Excellent chapter...Whats Lavanya upto? and somehow I cant see her as a villain here...going thru divorce when one person is still in love and other moved on is the worst scenario...

you have woven each character perfectly...

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#688

Awesome update Jenny!!! I am scared that Khushi's nightmare might come true lol!!! Cannot wait for the next update!!!!

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rvas

@rvas

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#689

Happy Dushera to you too..loved the updated...really felt her insecurity after that dream but did not love his response though ( even though his reaction was possibly totally in character)... Really loving this story

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kushikumari

@kushikumari

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#690

And so, lavanya comes with a well thought out plan...

and why not? the trouble she went to, to get arnav in the first place... she can't just let it all be for nothing? especially when he still makes her heart flutter 😃

is this a sincere attempt to win arnav back, or is it going to be just as manipulative as the first time? and is arnav going to be as clueless?

-kk