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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#691

well arnav dint voice it that he never loved lavanya... was he having some feelings for her..??

i think khushi is insecure...and arnavs answers dint helped her much

i hope return of lavanya doesn't detach him form khushi...

love it...fabulous update as usual..

continue soon...eagerly waiting fo future updates

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#692

For a moment, I was worried over Navin's health. He seems to be the link between Sujata and Khushi for now, and that fact aside, I wouldn't want him to have any effect on his health owing to the matter of Khushi and Arnav in hand.

So Lavanya's here...what will unfold at Muse?

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#693

Beautiful update... Loved it... ArShi convo was brilliantly showed Apu... Loved how he comforted her... She needed it so badly... Also Mrs. Gupta's disappointment is very much understandable... Any mother would... Loved this wise Mr. Gupta... And finally The Other Woman is back in the frame... The awkwardness between them is palpable... Just because he remembers, Lavanya should not build castle in the air... I hope she would be wise enough to understand & let go... Waiting for more... Thanks for the pm...

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Awsum update di..beautifully written

Loved it👏👏

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#695

i don't know i hate Lavanya here...in spite of knowing that she too lost something dear...i find her to be too selfish...she had a chance to live a good life with Arnav instead she chose to cheat him...blame him and ditch him...and now when she feels that she wants what she lost she is back to make amends and there are so much secrets she has never revealed to their loved ones that all chose to blame Arnav ...

i have a bad feeling i just hope Arnav and Kushi don't loose what they have built.Kushi being the one with morals and who feels guilty being the other woman might just try and give Lavanya a chance she does not deserve.

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#696

happy dussehra Jenny!

very nice chapter. loved the convo between arnav and khushi.

Trouble in cleveland! will wait for next chapter.

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Beautiful progression with this story, Jenny. And lyrical narration...your forte, no matter which of your stories on A and K we look at as proof points. Excellent characterization too, at this stage I am imbued in the nervous tension thatArnav andKhushi feel, depressed at their separation and devastated by Lavanya's appearance on the scene...and how! What will Muse reveal? Look forward to the next installment with near panic...poor Khushi has to deal with a cantankerous mom as well as a nearly-divorced lover! Well...waiting for the update.

😛

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#698

awesome chap...beautifully written ...how beautifully u have written on selfish and selfless...its amazing :)...both love each other extreme...

navin and sujata convo on khushi awesome...

uff lavanya is still after him ...wt she is up to now ...waiting eagerly to read that ...and wanted to see how arnav going to handle lavanya now...

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#699

marvelous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#700

Jenny what was that... that flick and he remember... what the hell was that

Shit shit I am really very afraid, I refuse to sympathize with lavanaya, I refuse to see her sadness, I refuse see her POV...

I am afraid... Arnav hadn't loved her right!!! what the hell happened in the muse... if I am thinking what you are thinking that you are going to write then I will soon lose my ability to think

Shit I am blabbering, see I am shaking... SHit I hate this lavanaya

If anyone here is to be called the other woman then that is Lavanya

she was Never a good women or wife, she was a lair... Jesus *gulping*

I really... had they did that in muse... like what couples do!

What flicker she saw in his eyes, I will punch her face😡

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