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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

Jenny, thanks a ton dear for writing such a beautiful story. This update again was just out of this world.

The talk between Navin and Arnav went about as anyone would have expected. Navin being the protective father had his daughter's interests as his main concern and Arnav being the man in love, had to prove that his love and commitment was, is and will be sincere.

Now since Arnav agreed not to meet Khushi until his divorce is finalised, is there going to be some "lambi judai" between the lovers or circumstances (in the form of La) will make them meet anyways.

"At the risk of sounding seriously cheesy", he said with forced lightheartedness, attempting to pass off an embarassing fact as a joke, "I sometimes wonder if you were an angel especially sent down for me".

I always felt that way Jenny, that it was some angel who sent Khushi to Arnav and that too first time on Aarav's birthday.

"I've always liked Khushi a lot and you know that. She's like a daughter I've always wanted. Although Lavanya and I never had any problems, so to speak, you know how her personality was. Very reserved. With her, I was never able to reach a degree of closeness, I'd always hoped for with my daughter-in-law...and Khushi...Khushi was very dear to me even before you came in the picture".

So this clears another doubt we all had earlier this week. Aastha and Lavanya shared a superficially cordial relationship.

From the beginning Aastha has always been a friendly person either be it with Madhu or Khushi or Sujatha, people have generally liked her and got along well with her. So if Lavanya and Aastha were never close (considering the fact that Arnav is her only son, Aastha always looked for a daughter in her bahu), it shows that Lavanya as a person was either not very friendly or did not care much about other's desires.

I am sure, later in this story, Aastha and Khushi will form a very strong bond which both of them would cherish for their entire lives.

Khushi getting angry on Arnav for not proposing to her properly and then Arnav's confessions, all this made such a pleasant reading.

"What can I ask you? You've already given me everything without asking. All I can ask is if you'll let me stay in your life so I can spend the rest of my days in trying to give all that you want, all that you deserve. So Khushi, will you let me remain in your life? For the rest of my life?

"My love, I don't need to ask you anything(in any language) because, I'm sorry, but your answer doesn't matter. It doesn't matter whether your reply is yes or no. As far as I'm concerned no is not even an option. You are already mine. Period.

How can sexy Raizada come up with such words? Hai Maar daala!!!!😳

From today, whenever I hear the song "Jaadu teri nazar", I am damn sure I am going to remember "Saffron fields" and Dr. Raizada. I used to love this song a lot, but from now onwards my love to this song has only increased.

And then finally the nightmare. I just don't want Arnav or Khushi to get hurt in any way. I hope things are not going to be so bad afterall. 😭

Also I hope Arnav reaches Cleveland back safely.

I have never been to Caladesi Islands, so just looked up on the net for some pictures of the place. Thought of sharing with all the readers.



Thanks for pictures of Caladesi Island, Kavi :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007



Thanks for pictures of Caladesi Island, Kavi :)


You are welcome Jen. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ewe ... Mrs. Raizada ?!!! 😲😕🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the conversation between arnav n navin.. honest to themselves. Poor khushi is stuck. Nw wats with the night mare. I think d touch journey has started. Please make arnav safe
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant Chapter.
If I haven't mentioned it before let me reiterate...I feel like l am a silent participant in a real life occurrence.
This Chapter I feel was a lot about Arnav and who he is as a person. He is true to himself first and foremost and from that his loyalty to Khushi as his "love and life" and then the family members who are an extension in their relationship.

Impressed with how the conversation between Navin and Arnav worked out.

Astha on the other hand confused me again after I thought she was pretty much settled with Khushi Arnav equation. I guess she is easily influenced by conversation of the day and goes with that flow. Loved Arnav's lines...

"On one hand, you like Khushi 'a lot', on the other, you keep dropping hints of hopes for a reconciliation with Lavanya. What do you expect me to do?, he continued with a sardonic smile, "Move to Utah with both of them". 😆

"But I didn't bring her into my life, serendipity did. One has no control over who enters one's life and who leaves it...".

I think the conversation between Astha and Arnav in this Chapter is my favorite. Very open and touching...confused mother and a son whose heart is happy.

Also, love the way the mere sight of Khushi or her text sends Arnav into a whole different realm of calm, melancholy, mischief and tenderness.

The dream is definitely a warning of an approaching storm...need one guess??

The teaser...the storm has arrived...😲

Jenny, this was a brilliant chapter. Loved reading it and have read it several times. 👏


Edited by bkamber - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
can't wait for next chapter Jen...
La & Aastha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Im sure its lavanya here as mrs raizada n she will be shocked by the knowledge of khushi's presence as other women in arnav's life...nice teaser nw waiting fr update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update. Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice chapter...but afraid of wat is coming next...thanks for pm...waiitng for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
You trying to conphoose me, Jen?
Is it Aastha who's come to see Arnav regarding Lavanya?
The wait for the next update seems interminable now! 😕

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