Arshi FF/Saffron Fields#10/ Link thread 11 Pg 1. - Page 31

I've just got around catching up on Saffron Fields until the latest chapter. It's so amazing how you penned down the picturesque locale of Kashmir. It gave me a feeling of being there. If I ever I visit Kashmir, I'll probably be recalling the backdrops from your story.
I relished every single chapter and am in awe at the preciseness of character portrayal of Navin, Sujata and Ashtha. The behavior, line of thought, protectiveness is so befitting as to how parents care for their children.
About Chapter 28 - Navin was predictable and his concerns are typical traits of a protective father. For Khushi's sake, Arnav maintained a cool demeanor while providing his views on marriage. I'm happy that Navin/Sujata are willing to give Arnav/Khushi a chance to their relationship.
The textual exchange between Arnav and Khushi to and from the island was entertaining.
Khushi's DREAM - the fire, the burning fields, the colors is indicative of something unpleasant. Hopefully Lavanya's arrival even if it causes a rift in their relationship is temporary.

"He was dressed in dark jeans, aviators and a white, collared, button up shirt with it's sleeves rolled up to the elbows. And as if that was not enough, a salty breeze blew against him, gently ruffling his hair and plastering his shirt against his stone hard abs."

Wow it was fabulous update..
Y suddenly a dream here tht too bad one:(

The first thought after finishing reading is.. The entire course of the update was extremely natural (ofcourse the whole story up until now is quite that but it was very poignant in this particular update ) right from the convo between the two men , the heated exchange between a concerned mother n her son ( life is such that most of the important events dont happen even though we try hard n want to do things in a righteous way.. Well, after all we are mere mortals) , the lighthearted flirting , the most loveliest proposal which i hv ever read ( i loved it tremendously cuz of its immense naturality.. The moments become all the more precious when the emotions come out with a sense of ease n these kind of emotions are the ones which are the purest of the pure.. Main bas fida ho gayi Jen. Utterly heart fluttering!) , the lighthearted flirting n the anxiety of the separation...

Great update!

That was a great talk...so true to Arnav.

You know what? That conversation was not bad all. Honesty is the best way to go and Arnav was completely upfront and honest with Navin. This is what made Navin appreciates the guy who his daughter is in love with. It will be hard for them to keep that promise to stay away from each other though and I hope the parents do not chastise them for it. I love his response to Kushi's question. You just made my day with Tarrion and Jadoo Teri Nazaar - 2 of my favourites. If he is a Games of Thrones fan, then I am claiming him all to myself.

Every thing is fine ...but still I feel restlessness ...love this story

Wonderful update.