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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: mistyrains
So I was listening to the song, whilst reading this beautiful piece again, before typing out the comment and its quite safe to say, that every time I come upon this track, I'll be reminded of a pretty, bejewelled face contemplating on all that has been and all that will be. Like I mentioned earlier to you, this drabble of sorts, left me a little weepy eyed, for the deep-seeded sadness it brings along with it.

Very poetic very detailed ( the henna part, especially ), very eloquent and just amazing, as always! <3 :)

I'm hoping that all those Res' posts will be edited with more such beautiful pieces :)

Thank You so much! That part about the song reminding you of this Khushi makes me so happy and glad :)

The henna part is one of my favourite parts as well :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: LadyR
The first few lines led me to believe Arnav had deserted her, but as I read on, it was a beautiful awakening within Khushi, she simply loved him... He is Hers !!
In my mind she's deciding her own fate... She's forgiven him, which makes her strong a valuable attribute she has...as the weak don't know how to forgive ...

Would love to read Arnav's POV and your choice of song...the lyrics in this song simply define the chapter in it entirety.

@Bold - Exactly what it is in my own mind. She is finally deciding her own fate and taking her life in her own hands. She can fight with Arnav, forgive him, hate him, love him but all on her own behest and not because of someone else...

Thank You so much for your comment! The next part should be up soon and it has invariably become from Arnav's POV but the song will remain the same throughout the story...with just different stanzas of it highlighted...as it is, the song inspired the story more or less :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: BroknAngel
Beautiful. After al his accusations anger she can't hate him... bcd love is much bigr dan hatred..

That it is - love is way bigger than hatred.

Thank You for commenting! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Rohinid
Nice.cont it dear :)

Originally posted by: PixieFlame
Interesting, do continue! :)

Originally posted by: Nirjhoramanisha
Nice story. Update next part soon. If u can pls pm me.

Thank You so much! :)

I will PM all those who have commented here when I update the next part :)

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abby2181

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Really well written. Would love to see a follow-up to this OS.

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: shr1234
Oh Rae!
I'm not at all eloquent and all the words of praise, now seem ghissey- peetey. So a tight hug for you! Please do write more :)

Awww! Thank You so much! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Its always a pleasure Rae, to read something you've written.
I was a bit scared in the beginning thinking Khushi was leaving Arnav and running away.
(But maybe that was your intention)
But then loved her realisation that in spite of everything he was still Arnav ji.
Hers to love and cherish.
Would love to read the second and third parts.
Will be waiting for the continuation of this story!

The starting was such that it begins with Khushi's realisation that she needs to take her own decisions for her own self, take charge of her life and her wants and desires :)

Thank You so much for your comment and words of appreciation! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Japonica
Oh my word, that was so exquisite, AT! You have to continue and put him, her and us out of our misery!
That description of K taking off her jewellery was a fantastically evocative piece of writing- that one act contained the story in itself.
You really are a brilliant writer.

Thank You so much! Its one of the few times I am writing from Khushi's POV and as her as the protagonist in a shorter format so I am glad you liked it :)