*Updted* Vidarth FF:Indecent Proposal (Collab) chapter 11(pg 31) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Moony87

Extremely Sorry for the late update.. This part is dedicated to Shree and Rae.. Both the birthday girls. Hope this turns out to be a worthy gift from my side.. 😕

awww thanks so much for the dedication Moony ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

CHAPTER 6

Try Try Till You Succeed

"Come again?" Parth said with a clenched jaw and a borderline temper. hawwttness personified!!!

"Hmmm??" Vidushi looked at him with mouth stuffed with spring roll. Hehehe she's such a cutie pie even when she's being messy like this!

"Arrghh.. Finish it off first", he said shaking his head.

"Hmm kya kahaa tumne?" Vidushi managed to speak in between finishing it up.

"Maine kahaa?.. YOU said something about my Talents" He snapped.

"Ohh.. That.. Yep, basketball, loyal friendship, capable captain, good human and you SUCK BIGTIME at being a boyfriend" she shrugged stuffing another spring roll. WOOOHHOOO YOU GO GIRL!! Finally, show mein toh nahi, but at least she tells him the truth somewhere! I've said this multiple times before but I absolutely love your portrayal of Vidushi's character! She's reckless, strong, determined and funny at the same time! Love it to the max!

"What??!! How dare.. Aur tum kitna khaati ho Vidushi?" Parth got distracted from his question as Vidushi had taken another spring roll on her plate. Ex-cuh-use me???? Did he really just say that to her? What kind of a boyfriend is he... and he wonders why she thinks he sucks at being a boyfriend

"Hmmm??" Vidushi said stuffing it in her mouth.

"Arrrghhh.. Finish it off first", he said getting super pissed at her overstuffing love for Chinese food. Overstuffing love 😆

"Hmmm.." She nodded her head.

"Band karo ye hmm... hmmm. Kam se kam do spring rolls ke beech saans to lo." He said as she was again reaching to have another one on her plate. She unafraid to be herself in front of him... That shows how confident she really is in herself. I don't know why he's complaining so much, he should be glad that she's not being all diet conscious around him.

"VIDUSHIII.. Mere liye bas ek spring roll.. Saare khaa gayee tum", he accussed her, baffled. YEAH That's my girl!! Don't even leave that one for him Vids, eat that also and show him! After all he's done to you he doesn't even deserve that one spring roll (sorry all my anger at the current Vidarth track is coming out)

"Kashyap ji, Aapke paas bas ek life line bachi hai", Vidushi laughed as she imitated the KBC moment. 😆 Haha what even? She's so adorable sometimes...

"I can't believe this.. Tum 4 sentences ke beech mein 3 spring rolls thoons gayee. Moti ho jaaogi tum", he said finally eating the spring roll. 😡 PLEASE TELL ME I IMAGINED HIM SAYING THAT!!!! Parth you're digging a grave for yourself right now and it's going to be very hard to get back out of it!

"Hence Proved, You SUCK at being a boyfriend", she said getting off the chair. She didn't scream, she didn't get offended... what world is this? Oh right, this is the world where Vidushi's character is actually portrayed in a DECENT manner... (once again my anger at the show is coming out... forgive my sudden outbursts).

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"Ouchh..", Vidushi squealed as Parth had pulled her back making her sit on his lap. WOAH WOAH WOAH!!! Vidarth senses are at their highest point... I sense some seriously hot romance and knowing you Chandu, you never fail to please Pushing aside the plates, he yanked her face towards him with an angry glare. Ignoring the angry glare bit and only reading the part about him pulling her face towards him 😳 He was bearing her for the sake of his friends and she was hell bent on making him loose. Bullshit yaar... bearing her for the sake of his friends.. psht was she the one who told him to extend the contract from one month to two... NO!!! So who's bearing who right now??

"Come again?", he gritted with a sharp pull that pressed their noses together. This is a whole new level of sensuality... pressing noses ☺️Holding his glare, she exhaled against his lips and snuggled his nose with hers. Oh my gosh... this is possibly the cutest action I've ever seen used on Vidarth... It's not "hot" like some of your other scenes but still it gives me almost the same feelings as if I was reading a super heated kiss! Parth's breathe faltered and his grip in her hair tightened with the intensity in her eyes that now clouded his brain. I take back what I said... this is getting damn hot!! His lips shivered in unexpected thrill as Vidushi looked at them. His gaze darkened as she narrowed her eyes at him and smirked. Arrgghh I'm actually getting butterflies in my stomach whilst reading this and it's damn uncomfortable but so nice at the same time. GIVE ME MORE!

"You.Suck.At.Being.A.Boyfriend."... Vidushi's lips parted in a sigh as Parth kissed the corner of her lips. HE DID WHAT NOW? Did I miss something because the last time I checked he was "bearing her for the sake of his friends"... is this how he bears her? Maybe he's just finally succumbing to his feelings for her instead of hiding like a scared little boy (anger... show... I'm sure you understand by now).

Faintly brushing her lips, he looked at her and hushed, "Even Now?" Even how? For what? Do you think that by kissing her you're going to suddenly become a better boyfriend.E

"Hell.Yes", Vidushi sighed. And with that Parth merged their lips into a torturing slow kiss. ... I'm not imagining this right? 🤪 I fear for my mental health because all this tension between Vidarth is driving me MAD! And this torturing kiss is torturing me more than it's torturing Vids. Stroking her chin with his thumb, he parted and brushed her inner lip with an intension I think you men intention... to irritate her with the slow space. But with her, his every intension backfired. PERFECT DESCRIPTION! Really by now Parth should have learnt that there's so much more to Vids than meets the eye. Vidushi responded by sharply pulling his lower lip and that screwed him up. Groaning in frustration, he angled her face and pulled her into an open mouthed kiss. You're screwing me up right now. I lose more and more faith in relationships the more I read your work because the chances of me having a relationship as HOT as this is absolutely 0!! Venting out all the unexplained frustration into the kiss, he kissed her aggressively. Good thing it's absolutely freezing here because if it wasn't I probably would have started sweating due to the amount of heat right here. Unexplained for she, for some reason, infuriated him, made him uneasy, would take him to an edge and would always tip him off. This is so beautiful Chandu. Not only is at an amazing description of Vids' affect on him, but it's also a beautiful combination of words. Really really really like it.

"Mmm", Parth growled in anger and held her face firmly, stopping Vidushi from breaking the kiss. Please don't stop... just stay like this forever and ever and ever and ever and ever!! Vidushi clutched his arms tightly trying to catch her breath. As her nails dug deeper, Parth broke the kiss. NOOO!!! KEEP KISSING!! Damn yaar Moony no matter how long you kissing scenes are they never feel long enough for me and they always make me CRAVE MORE!! Eyes loaded with passion and breathe mingled with desperation, he cussed "Damn You Vidushi" and bit her chin hard. Outstanding description of his eyes and breath... desperation and passion, wow you're just too good! Tipping her head back, he slided his lips down her arched neck before engulfing her into a passionate hug. This just reminds me of their "date" on the show and how he was kissing her neck and hugging her tight (I chose to ignore the fact that he was drunk and being a total ass). Taking in her scent, his senses, for some unknown reason, relaxed. Beautiful!

Unknown myriad of emotions engulfed him as Vidushi tightened the hug and stroked his hair at the nape. Woah, the starting of this sentence is on point! Lovely use of words there (I had to look up what myriad meant though 😳) Need of approval and praise overtook him and he eagerly whispered, "Even Now?" Awww this was really adorable... Parth's vulnerability finally peaking through his tough exterior. And i love how you make him long for her approval... He's really just lonely, needing someone to take away his pain, but sometimes it's easy to forget that when he acts like such a jerk all the time. Breaking apart, he looked at Vidushi with desperate eyes. At this moment, all that mattered was her answer. Same as what I said above. You write scenes like this beautifully as well... where Parth's exterior is slowly cracking and he learns to let Vidushi in. His heart thumped as Vidushi's lips brushed his ear, "YES. Nice Try but you didn't Succeed".

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Vidushi hopped off from his lap and started walking towards the door. Parth followed her with a disoriented mind trying to figure out what saddened him more Her walking away or Her disapproving him? Feeling slightly more biased towards Parth now all of a sudden. And I love how he's subconsciously so affected by her but he hasn't noticed it himself yet. This is the girl he's supposed to hate, but right now it doesn't seem that way at all.

"Anyway, Thanks for the date. The food was nice. Night." Vidushi said pulling over her hoodie and reaching for the door. And his mind answered "BOTH"

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Vidushi gasped as she felt Parth's palm against her stomach. HUH? Was not expecting that at all... Her grip on the door tightened as her back thudded lightly with his chest. Sheessshh yaar, why must you make thins so hot between them. I only just got over their last sizzling scene together and now this (but I'm not complaining... you know how big a fan I am of your romance scenes). Pulling down her hoodie, Parth stroked her knuckles while kissing her ear. Again, something totally new! I honestly thought you had explored every possible romantic scenario, all the lip bitting and battling of tongues and what not... but you've come up with something totally new once again. Loosing herself to his touch, she let go of the door and sighed as she felt his lips nibbling her ear lobe.

"Where I fail as a boyfriend? Tell Me." He whispered taking them closer to the door and bolting it. Locked doors... ☺️Vidushi moaned lightly as he kissed her neck. No words, too busy blushing. She managed to speak as he bit her pulse, "Figure.. and.. Calorie.. consciousss ... guyz .. SUCK.. aaah.. Big time". DAMN RIGHT! I really hate guys like that too 😡

Vidushi smiled as Parth turned her around and looked at her with a murderous rage. "What did you just say?", he gritted. Fanning his anger to a volcano level, she smiled and said unflinchingly, "Figure and Calorie conscious guyz SUCK big time. Boyfriends like YOU love.. But they only LOVE their girlfriend's FIGURE." Well... that's a first. Never really pictured Parth as that kind of guy, and I know that even here he's not going to be, but it's interesting to see Vidushi's take on his character.

"How dare you Vidushi?.. This is what you think about me?"

"Actually.. YES"

And that blasted the volcano. Pushing her against the door, Parth held her hands in his iron grip and took her lips in a ruthless kiss. ANGRY HATE KISSING IS OFFICIALLY THE BEST THING EVER!! I thought I loved your romantic wala kissing, but this anger fueled kiss is like 10 times better! Biting her lower lip hard, he crushed her wrists more as her words whiplashed him. Pain and pleasure mixed... possible the best combination ever thought of. Smiling into the kiss, she parted her lips and responded with equal fervor. As she responded, the same vortex engulfed Parth and he let go of her wrists cupping her face. Vortex... woah what a description! Tell me honestly ok, do you sit with a dictionary when you're writing or is your vocabulary just that amazing!

"You think I am so shallow? I'll love you even if you become triple of what you are now." He said earnestly. HHHUUUHHH?? HE'LL. LOVE. HER... I'm sorry but I have the right to be freaking out right now. He practically confessed that he feels something for her when he was hating her just a few seconds ago! I feel like the world is spinning around me yaar!

"YES.. Triple size and still in love with me??!!.. Ha.. Filmy line. LIAR", she smirked dismissing the honesty that shone in his eyes. Did she not just realise that he said the "L" word?? Why am I the only one who thinks this is a massive deal?

Parth growled and mashed their lips again. Parth is so animalistic... even on the show he's always dragging Vids here and there and manhandling her. Sometimes it's hot but most of the time it's really annoying (it's hot in this case though). First of all she was being difficult and on top of it she was being judgmental about him. Sucking her upper lip, he rasped, "I said those words because I thought you would be someone conscious about your figure. Normally girls are." What a wonderful conversation to have with someone while practically eating their face off 🤣

"TchTch Tch.. Another point where you SUCK. You thought... That's OK.. But you thought so wronggg.. And then you keep your girl friend in the same bracket with other girls. You are getting worse and worse. Hahahahaha the duration of this relationship is going to be absolute torture for Parth. Vidushi is going to be one hell of a girlfriend to keep happy 😆

Parth Kashyap... I, Vidushi Kumar, sleep like no one's watching and I EAT like no one's around. I don't kill my desires to attain perfection." That last line 👏 SPOT ON! I'm actually going to remember that so next time someone asks me why I behave a certain way I can say this to them!

With that she pushed away Parth, who just stood there numb and gob smacked by those words. Probably because he finally realised that Vidushi is not like the girl he assumed her to be. Opening the door, she walked out of the lab. As she walked out, his sanity returned like a thunder struck him. So he was insane this whole time 😆 I think I like insane Parth much better than sane Parth.

What just happened? Shit, I kissed her?.. I'll love you.. Bloody hell.. Where did that come from? Hahahaha finally he realises exactly what he said before. It came straight from your heart Parthu, that's where it came from.

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"Parth" Vidushi's voice came from the corridor. Forgetting everything Parth rushed out of the lab and stopped as Vidushi stood at a distance with her arms crossed over. Now this is adorable. He's got back his "sanity" and realised everything he said to her. But he still rushes to see her the moment he hears her calling. His breathing accelerated as she looked strong as well as beautiful standing below the bulb.

"I thought as a custom, We should exchange some good night pleasantries. So, apart from the food, the whole date was a disaster. YOU being the biggest disaster. 🤣 🤣 🤣 hahahahaha best line I've read in this entire update... I love how she's so carefree like that and not falling over everything Parth does. I mean at least here the girl has a backbone when it comes to Parth. But then, we have 2 months now. Let's see, if you can even earn a Diploma degree in being my boyfriend.", She smirked raising her chin. Like i said before, she's going to be one hell of a girlfriend 😉

"Till then.. Try Try Till you SUCCEED" Finally! I was waiting for a reference to the title throughout the whole chapter!, she challenged showing him a royal thumbs down. With that, she stuffed her hands into her back pockets and walked out of the lab block swaying her hips. LOVE her attitude! Girl has some serious sass.

Moony you're truly a GEM. I loved reading every word of this OS and I can't wait to read more! Best part was obviously all the hot kissing scenes. I think we can officially name you the QUEEN of HOTNESS! Now all I can say is "Gimme more!!!!"

Hope this review is good enough.

Love, Rae.

Originally posted by: BeyondDreams

Resss
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*Looks up n sees no comment...* matlab I'm FIRST..🤣
*looks down and raises chin up in the air proudly...*
I'm first... Did I tel that?

Ok enough of Drama...
This is my first Comment on this fic n I'm First...🤣

I loved the story so far... It's was ah-mazing...
Sweet and spicy...

Loved it too much..

Next comments Mein I'll write more abhi I gtg...

Love
ayesha...(naam toh suna hi hoga..)🤣

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

loved it yr.. oh god..vidushi is too much yr... nd poor parth..don't know he loves her .. haye he kissed her to show that he is a good boyfriend.. nd vidushi girl I like you.. so she agreed for 2 months.. thanks 4 d pm

Originally posted by: prushasil

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It was awesome like all the other chapters! loved it! seriously! vidhushi is just too much yaar! parth kuchh bhi karle she will not let him go so easily! update soon! don't be late the next time!😊

Originally posted by: zahranaseem

U simply nailed it!!! Awesome update