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arsalarahman

@arsalarahman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

ok, so i was wrong... really like this shyaam babua

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Arshix144
Congratulations on the new thread ladies!

Can I just say how happy I am to see this OS series get the kind of response it has been getting. I am supposed to be completely inactive here but I can't help dropping by specially when I know that if I don't I will be missing out on some seriously beautifully written Oses over here!

"The Other Woman" is proving to be one of those stories that you just cannot miss.
Love, love, loved the way Anjali was scolded by Shyamji. The guy was so on the money when he set her straight and asked her to fight her own battles and leave her maternal home too. While Shyam took the direct approach our super strong and super awesome KKG took the indirect approach in putting Arnav in his place. The way Khushi made him meet her simple and loving family was a slap on his face for accusing them of selling Khushi off to rich men so they could make ends meet. I cannot wait for more when ASR would be further brought down a few notches from his high horse for the way he asked about her going price.

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Khushi just poured gallon of guilt in Arnav's heart.

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

WOW!!

Silence is the biggest punishement one can give and also one can get!!

Kushi did the right thing in being so silent!!

Brilliant! and i so loved this shyam! wish our shyam was like that! i meant the snake!!

Awesome and so good way of writing! as always loved it!

So excited to know how their paths are going to cross again and when is the time that arnav will fall head over heals for kushi! so excited for that moment!!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Excellent.

By keeping quiet and forcing him to meet her family, she humanizes them, makes him associate a real persona with the names, so that when he thinks back about his accusations, he can see for himself how wrong he was. He had accused his family of pimping her out and this was the best way to make him see the error of his ways. Very maturely done.

Also I noticed that you brought out the contrast between the two families. Shantivan mein kisine paani bhi nahin pucha aur yahan pe aav bhagat chal rahi hai.

I think we need to see some Raizada scenes before love story ki ishuruwat ho. Arnav when he goes home should have to face his family as well. Anjali should also hear a few more home truths. Some how I do not think she gets it the first time. batti thode der se jalti hai😆

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rana5

@rana5

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Stuipid, stupid Arnav. I hope you make him suffer more.

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Natasha08

@Natasha08

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

awesome update

khushi took him with her to show him who i she is

loved it

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Awesome update...

Gupta's hospitality made Arnav more guilty... He wanted to apologize but Khushi didn't give him a chance... Well he deserves this hard time for what he accused khushi of...

Loved buaji and Arnav conversation...

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

PARTS 7-11

This is a 1st ever story I have read were I completely agree with ShyamjiAnjali & Arnav no doubt had a terrible past but they look ppl everyone with the same chasma.. 🤓

1st of all they need to accept thre past only thn they will be able to embrace the future.!!

PPl often don't realize just asking one qus can save a relationship..rather thn being judgemental & assuming things.. 🤔

What khushi did was so perfect!!! It Letting Arnav knw tht she comes from a simple family.. But I also feel tht Arnavji has never known wht is a "family" like.. he lives in his past thts y assumes ppl of the same like Arvind Mallik 😵

P.S: 2nd Sept ko electricity gayab thi in Mumbai u knws 😕 Thts y I was gayab too.. 😛

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Today on 3rd I had been to Lal Baugh cha Raja k darshan.. 😳 You knws him na.. (also real life me thodi busy thi..so late ho gai.. 😳 )

Chota Info:
Lalbaugcha Raja(Marathi: ) is the most famous Sarvajanik Ganapati kept at Lalbaug, a prominent locality in Mumbai during Ganesh Chaturthi festival.
It is believed that this Idol of Lord Ganesha is Navsacha Ganpati (Marathi: )(which means the"one who fulfills all wishes") and hence over 1.5 million people visit this Ganesh Pandal daily during the 10 day Ganesha festival.

Aaj Ganpati Bappa was looking very handsome in Red 😎