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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
Khushi needs no words, her actions defended her well.
This was a brilliant way of telling Arnav who she really is.
What a revenge, Khushi!

Well said...

Brilliant update as usual dearies..👏

Edited by toeditor - 11 years ago

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Arnav is feeling guilty after seeing goodness, naivety and warmth of khushi's family.
waitn to see how repents 4 his hasty actions.

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Hey smita di, we have seen ASR hurting khushi and then repenting in many stories.
How abt u write a story where khushi hurts arnav intentionally/unintentionally (whatever u like) and then repents.
Its a request di. Please consider it. :))

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

nice update

tahnks for pm x

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@--MISHTEE--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Awesome update

C 🥳 NGRATS ON NEW THREAD

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hydsri

@hydsri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

wonderful update. I'm glad Khushi made Arnav go into her home to see for himself what ever she told him.

Thanks for update. Khushi cannot cave in and if the last scene was anything to go by, Arnav has a lot of work ahead of him.

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Smita, Rashmi, I love this daily updates. Thank you for updating few parts everyday. I keep on checking this thread multiple times everyday to see whether you have updated new sections :-). I like all the stories you write and your writing style.

It is nice that Payal is also working and helping her family out. In IPKKND, Payal did nothing to help her family

Arnav met Khushi's family. Buaji is as always fantastic. Buaji was worried Arnav does not have proper income that is why girls are not interested to marry him :-). Continue soon...

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

That was too generous from Khushi that she has invited him into her house and has well behaved with him despite his behaviour and attitude that he has shown to Khushi.
Arnav needs to repent on his mistakes