Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #3 OS 7 (7~31) Link to #4 Pg 1

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cocoamob

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Self respect and honor are every individual's birthright, irrespective of financial or social status in society. Khushi very intelligently showed Arnav just that by taking him to her humble home. This was much more effective than a million words!

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..Anita..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Arnav has to do a lot to make it up to Khushi

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IPKlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

Uff!!! I can't wait for more!!! Please update soon! I can't wait for Arnav-Khushi track to begin soon!!😳

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8Lucky88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

was not expecting this in the story but quite a different angle you presented which is awsome..you are so creative with your thoughts l love reading you work

continue soon

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rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: IPKlover
Uff!!! I can't wait for more!!! Please update soon! I can't wait for Arnav-Khushi track to begin soon!!😳

This is Smita...

This is me...

And you still want more????

😆 😆

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badfaith4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

That was some lesson Khushi is teaching Arnav.

Bhuaji was awesome.

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Tammie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Nice! Let Arnav squirm for a while!

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Congratulations on the new thread ladies!

Can I just say how happy I am to see this OS series get the kind of response it has been getting. I am supposed to be completely inactive here but I can't help dropping by specially when I know that if I don't I will be missing out on some seriously beautifully written Oses over here!

"The Other Woman" is proving to be one of those stories that you just cannot miss.

Love, love, loved the way Anjali was scolded by Shyamji. The guy was so on the money when he set her straight and asked her to fight her own battles and leave her maternal home too. While Shyam took the direct approach our super strong and super awesome KKG took the indirect approach in putting Arnav in his place. The way Khushi made him meet her simple and loving family was a slap on his face for accusing them of selling Khushi off to rich men so they could make ends meet. I cannot wait for more when ASR would be further brought down a few notches from his high horse for the way he asked about her going price.

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

ASR must be thinking kash yeh dharti phat jaye aur main usme sama jaun. Khushi and her family's hospitality only made him feel small in his own eyes. This is possibly the best way to take revenge on anyone. Nice update :)

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roopathomas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Very nice story.. In this you have written anjali's character exactly as I have thought her to be in the serial... I love how you portray khushi in all your stories...

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