(ON HOLD)Vidarth FF: Sinner and the Saint .. Imp Note Page 67 - Page 50

Originally posted by: shreyad27

Nice 1 yaar 😊 continue soon

Originally posted by: dewcute

finally...some one updated😛

this one was damn funny didi..😆

me wasn't sure about you will write on vidushi or not

but you did,you gave a cute vidarth scene😳

loved the teasing section of parth and randhir

the way parth got teased was🤣

but didi a doubt are you planning to pair up another girl

instead of sanyukta with randhir?🤔

i loved the update!

continue soon🤓

will you?

update soon and take it as a warning🤪

jiya😎

Originally posted by: umachanumolu

Omg this is peaks of teasing... Nd i jst luvd it.it's very nice yar.

Next part asap

Thanks fr pm

Originally posted by: Pihu1596

Hey Moony,
Ik Ik I haven't yet commented on ur previous work BT I m really sowieee 4 dat...I don't come online BT believe me when I got email dat ur FF is updated I was most excited :)
N as usual it was damn hilarious...completely Rib tickling.
I loved d Dalai Lama

Originally posted by: krits67

haye marjawaan...
kiya update h yr...
mind blowing...
nd yaa m upset thi bhd jyada thi but iske baad m kya koi bhi nhi ho skta yr ...

itni achi update the way Randhir ki teasing nd Parth wali wah maza aa gya ...

luv u yr
nd thnx mujhe ye dedicate krne k liye...
aur yr ye songs kahan se chun k lati ho...
ooppssii...
ye khud k invented hote na
mst invent krti ho
aur haan yr spiderman ka really koi song h kya
btana jrur m sun na chahungi
aur randhir wala to kya song h yr mtlb kya modify kiya h tumne us song ko just luv it...

nd u knw update pdhte wqt na mere ghr wale sach m mujhe pgl hi smjh rje the kyuki I was laughing heads off

but then unhe jb sunaya to najara dekhne wala tha
By god mujhe kabhi nhi lga tha ki hm sb itna jyada kabhi bs skte h...
literally a soon aa gye the sb keh rhe Kitni cute h ye story
aur ab meri sis to fan ho chuki h tumhari yr


ab plz haan jaldi update krna
wait mt krana aur haan
pm me

luv u

Originally posted by: anuaskif

Unres *in a new post*

YEH KYA THA ??????????? Matlab ek mahine baad update kiya toh kya poore mahina ka humor ka dose ek hi update mein pack kar diya 😲

Poora ka poora boys hostel kya sirf Parth par hi nazarein gaadhe hue hai... everyone at their sarcastic best...

"Wo kya hai na.. Humne Ek ladki bheegi bhaagi si dekhi hai.. Lekin aaj pehli baar Ek ladka bheega bhaaga sa dekh rahe hain.." Sahil teased.

Arre wah... yeh Sahil toh ladka sayanaa ho gaya hai... itni baatein kahan se seekein usne 😉

Signaling the others to keep silent, Randhir inquired "Nahi Yoyo.. Ye girls hostel ka style hai. Kyun Parth?.. Sahi bol raha hoon na main?"

"Hmm.. Yeah" Parth said still dazed. Shutting his eyes tight, Parth banged his fist on his forehead as the room echoed with wolf whistles.

I luved Parth ka reaction. Bechara mare ki kya kare 😆

"Yehi ke.. .Leaving the Dungeons of the Sutra of Kaama.. You'll go straight to Dalaai Lama." Randhir chuckled.

Matlab yaar... kabhi toh Randhir ko SH mein bhi itne sense of humor ke saath dikhana chahiye. Kitna mazaa aayega ... but this style is more like Param isn't it.

"CHUP HO JAAO KAMEENO", Parth roared from the corridor as the laughter grew louder.

Mere hostel ke dino ki yaad dila di yaar. I can visualise this boy from my group jise hamare hi group ki ladki se Louveee ho gaya and humne uski kitni band bajayee...

Parth looked scandalized as Vidushi rhymed the lines, "Aisi lines hain usmein?..D.. Door hato .. Juniors aa jaayenge"

"Arey aise kaise jaane doon. Kitni mushkil se tum mere haath aaye ho. Darte kyun ho?.. Darwaaza band kar doon?" Vidushi giggled. Removing her hands, Parth broke free. "Mujhe na tum logon se baat hi nahi karni hai.. Wo log chidhaate rehte hain aur tum daraati rehti ho"

"Daraa kahaan rahi hoon.. Main to seduce kar rahi hoon" Vidushi winked giving a flying smooch.

Wow !!!! kya ladki hai... kaash har ladki jo pyaar kare woh itni himmat rakhe and aisa sense of humor bhi rakhe... uska boy friend toh scandalised hi rahega zindagi bhar.

"You mean.. your laptop is.."

"BAKWAAS MAT KARO MAYA. LAPTOP IS A THINGGG" Vardhan roared.

uff Kaash !!! aisa humor SH mein dekhne mile... sab ke sab Sunny Deol ban ke rehte hain.. life mein maze ki kami hai sabke

Library mein baithe the Randhir SIR jeee

Main Rahul samjh ke bhid gayeee

Mujhko O SIR jeee Maaaf karnaaa

Galti Mhaaare se ho gayeee..

Mujhko.. O..

yeh toh ultimate ho gayaa yaar... matlab Randhir ko kyu pel diya bina baat ke... Parth ke saaath mazaak karne ki aise sazaaa... "Bahut Na insaafi hai"

Yaar baar baar post ke beech mein bahut effort lagta isliye saare Rofl's ek saath de rahi hu

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Originally posted by: Gudakesha

"Yehi ke.. .Leaving the Dungeons of the Sutra of Kaama.. You'll go straight to Dalaai Lama." Randhir chuckled.

"To... Parth Kashyapp.. Ahem Ahem.. Solve the puzzle.. Tip Tip barsaa Paani.. Kahaan jaake Aag lagaaai??!!",

Hahaha.. too good. These are my fav lines.

loved it moony...

Finally Parth took revenge on randhir.. LOLZ..

Originally posted by: pari1995

wow finally u updated di

awww it was awesome hehehe first they were teasing parth

and then rd

hahahaaha maya and vd part was awesome

i love maya in ur ff

pll iss bar update soon

and yeah thanx for the pm and scrap

loads of love

pari

Originally posted by: aimy.

Princes of FITE! :D
Lol.Bechara Parth. The way he was complaining was so cuute. And Vidushi is so good this way. Protective,concerned!!
And our princes of FITE and their taunts were the best.
Loved the update didi!! Was awesome!

Originally posted by: prushasil

🤣🤣

WH...AT... WAS T..H...A..T!!???

🤣 I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING! IT WAS SO DAMN FUNNY!!! PARTH KI TO MAST UDAYI IN LOGO NE! THEN WO MAYA KA WRONG NO. PE TIME PASS...IT WAS JUST TOO AWESOME!! VARDHAN KA PUNISHMENT🤣AND THEN RANDHIR!!!! ITNE MAST MAST DIALOGUES... KAISE LIKHTI HO ITNE AMAZING CHAPTERS????????