Daddy's Hands #2: Chapter 24 on Page 80 (April 28th 2016)

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Priya SINGH

@FLOREY

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

its was emotinal n comforting ye vulnerable!

good job... dr

cont soon

thnk for pm

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Samyuktha Krishnan

@samyukthakrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

awesome!! i though ki parth Randhir ko call hi nahi kiya hoga. But that also didnt happen. Why was Randhir hell bent on not accepting the fact that he was the father?

"Okay," she told him. "I just... I just want my mind to calm down. It's telling me if I do this, I'll get attached to you again."

He looked at her, as if he was searching for something inside her eyes.

"Sanyukta,you're not attached to me already?" he asked, sighing

He was tight.She was already attached... how could she fall more attached than this?

these lines were awesome... i just loved it... you are an incredible writer Di.

love

samyuktha😳

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

sari bt bd me first of all a tight hug to u 🤗

congo di thread two woopie rite now i m sooo hppy i cnt tell u aap se b zyada hppy hu thread 2 k lia 😆 😆

bt seriously u deserve it ab aap ye maat kehana dis is all bcz of the readers the whole credit only goes to u u truly deserves u write so awsme dat we cnt keep ourselves away frm it hatts off di 👏 👏

btw mje party chahiye thread 2 ki khushi me 😉 😉

i hope aap aese hi bhut sare threads banate jao r hum padhte rhe luv u di a lot u r the bst ⭐️

now cming to the updte i m dumbfound i hve no wrds for it mi kuch b kahungi vo kaam hi hoga updte ki beauty k lia[/B

[B]the updte was so emtnl one dey so wanted to be wid each other bt the cruel.circumstances were pulling them away the bst part for me was the sanyu broke down when she realized abut shradha dat was so painful the pain n fear of loosing sumone is unbearable n for a mother we cnt even imagine its depth 😭

bt thankfully rd was dere for her he was soothing her so luved dat scene dere bond is out of dis world they r each other lyf reason to live

i also luved parth he is a true frnd he was alwz there fir sanyu when his luv n her family disowned her he is a nyc guy now i can understnd sanyu inner turmoil she cnt hurt parth he is the one who was alwz dere for her the biggest support system she cnt betray him dis will surely not done

rite now evrything is a great mess they cnt help it they hve to go where dere destiny will take dem rite now their priority is to save shradha

the kiss scene was amzng it was so meaningful it depicts dere need to be together i lyked rd the way he is handling sanyu taking care of her amzng

ahem ahem so the much awaited updte is on its way ab to curiosity k level super high ho gya h pta ni

how i m going to hold on myself

bt hve to patiently wait so will be wtng do updte soon wese ye kehne ki bt ni h aap hume kabi wait ni krte ho u r so sweet

once again congo di n remember i want party 😉

luv u a lot alwz keep smiling my cutiepie alwz be hppy di 😊 😊

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Anupriya

@anuaskif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Hey Deariee... It was absolutely mind blowing.. I mean you do magic with words dear...

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Archana Kannan

@archakan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

wow awesome update dear... i don't know why i feel like parth ne RD-Sanyu ko alag kiya, i mean DNA reports kaise -ve ho sakthi hain???? Anyways really loved this part yaara...eagerly waiting for next part... pls update asap dear...

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rashi7

@rashi7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

o god!!! randhir u messed up everything... hope u mke up fr it soon...

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

you really are making me tense! You always keep me curious to what's going to happen in the next chappy! OMG! THEY CONFESSED THEIR LONG HIDDEN LOVE! That's so damn awesome! Randhir soothing her, is something which touched my heart! And now he is repenting on his deeds, of not trusting sanyukta! This story is so hell of a combination of alot of emotions, and it really has touched my heart to such an extent, I can't stay without first searching for your pm in my pm list, before anything else! That's how strongly I am bonded with your story! Thanks a tonne for pm'ing! I am really looking forward to reading your next chappy! So continue soon! Keep writing, love you always! <3

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swathi sen

@SWA1992

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

sry for the late reply... my doubt is how the dna test become -ve??? i think someone played in btw..

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SanDhiraddict

@SanDhiraddict

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Congratulations for the new thread.👏👏

This is very emotional update. I don't know about others but THIS is the chapter for which I waited long.Chapter with Physical warmth is OK and goes well with but I am more attached to the emotions in a story. This is one such good chapter. Loved it.

I never craved for reply on my comment. I find it pointless to get an answer for reply sake. Same with my comments. I only comment when I feel like I have something to say or express or if someone long for it to get going. So to me it is perfectly alright if I dint get a reply. I take it as you read it and dont find anything to agree or disagree or simply you dint get time to reply (which is the case most of the time.)

Keep updating your story. That is much awaited by me.

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DreamAchiever9

@DreamAchiever9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

It was an intense update... Each and every word was placed with so much delicacy... The metaphor in the lines... The emotons were penned so beautifully and perfectly it seemed as if each and every scene was happening in front of my eyes like a short story... Fabulous writting..
Loved the update... ur updates always leave me craving for more

P.S. Congrats for the new thread... u deserve it

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