#3 ArShi Collab FF||Loving The Beast*Chap 19* pg 125*Th4 link pg1 - Page 73

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Posted: 10 years ago
ajeeb hai dono...
excellent update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
next update awaited😃
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Plz give next thread soon...
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Plz open new thread soon...
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Mother India is not well... She should only open new thread!😭
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Originally posted by: Meenu_Luvs_ASR

<font color="#9900ff" face="Courier New, Courier, mono" size="6">Mother India is not well... She should only open new thread!😭</font>


Oh!!! What happened to her?
Is she ok?
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Posted: 10 years ago
I open new thread finally..sorry for the delay
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The beast (Arnav) is changing to a prince gradually with Khushi love. Brilliant update👏
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Yay little of the past is revealed!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dear Nickysweet

I am new to your FF and return to IF after a long hiatus

your FF is very interesting, definitely dark & thought provoking even uncomfortable in parts (Rohan's consumation of his wedding night was horrific & far more worse than ASRs assault on KKG)

but I am enjoying reading each part as it unfolds currently
😊
yes I do admit to initially reacting strongly to some of the content ( to be fair you had given fair 😊warning) -
especially the assault on poor KKG in the washroom by ASR really shook me up, followed by her brutal kidnapping and

yes - I would call ASRs forceful consumation with KKG in your FF rather shocking
especially when KKG was so ill and in a weakened state due to starvation & unconscious, it is deplorable when any man does that to a girl in a vulnerbale position and the ASR in IPKKND would never do that even in his dreams,

so I admit it was quite a shock to me to see ASR as a marauding bandit in your FF (someone like Shyam😡 yes, even when he became MR nice and befooled the Guptas as their oh too good to be true PG,his eyes lusted KKGwhenever he looked at her) I mean when ASR tore her string of pearls the first time he grabbed her at sheesh mahal, even then he could never do that

but ASR in IPK never lusted KKG or looked at her with lust, yes he was genuinely baffled😲😲, rattled😆 and sometimes defeated by her sheer audacity😆😆 and of course he was entralled, lost in her beauty and innocence😳😳and hated himself for the weakness so well depicted in the Diwali 2011 scenes,

however kudos to your courage and boldness of the script in your FF-
👏👏👏man it takes guts to write what you did on a public domain

I could see how the idea formed in your mind,
maybe -that unfortunate scens on the eve of Payals wedding when ASR saw KKGs mistaken betrayal with Shyam on the terrace,

ASR was heart broken😭, going back in his vortex of pain, anger and hatred he forced her to marry him, there was nothing to stop ASR from being really negative in hatred and anger and yes

he could have consumated their wedding night exactly as you described in the FF and in fact ASR could have starved KKG, tortured her and taken her to some remote place where he could have repeatedly vented his anger and hatred by forcing himself on her as you have described in the FF

As a writer myself I am always experimenting with the "what ifs" and looking at a track that suits the different memorable scenes, moments dark and grey and light ones to make them such a powerful combo ASR-KKG. I know IPKKND is a family show and the CVs would never show the main male protoganist being so violent and crude & negative with the female counter part

so I am enjoying your version instead and interested in seeing ASR transforming into the prince which he is from the blackguard he is now,
Nicky dear so dont get bogged down by public opinion, you will negative press all the time - thats life😆😆janta hai, janta ka opinion hai, ki farak padh dein😆take heart from the fact, dozens reply your FFs and read it still😊
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