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neha

@neag

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#241

You stop at the cliffhanger...?. who is she... A sister. .?

Loved the update

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Meera

@khushiforever

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Awe poor khushi is so heartbroken
And who is that woman to Arnav? I hope not girlfriend,I highly doubt it
Ohh please do continue soon

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#243

I feel so sad for Khushi but feel relieved at the same time. Eagerly waiting to see how Arnav manaofy khushi.

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Oh god. I hope khushi ki misunderstanding jaldi se dur ho jaye! she is so upset!

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#245

wht kind of peoples r gupta's? dey doesn't care about khushi. Wht if d same thing hd happened wid payal?

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pia surve

@piaviviandsena

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

nw m also scared who is d lady? i hope arnav will nt create more problem by mking khushi meet dis grl!

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Jayanthi

@jayanthinag

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Writers should have one quality like making the readers impatient for waiting for the updates because of the gripping updates(this is my thinking). And surely you are one of those kind of writers for whose update I am impatiently waiting to read.

I have read all your stories. My Favorite stories are Keeping khushi and this story.

Hats off to you. 👏 👏 👏.

And one more quality in your stories I like very much is that there is no negative character or violence.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

what a cliffhanger
loving the story
awesome

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Superb updates...

Cliffhanger... who is the lady???

can't wait for the next updates...

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#250

"Teri galiyon me na rakheinge kadam "
Did I ever sing this song for you ?
No, never..I can't do without your stories..😳

all the OSes were as usual fantastic and brilliant piece of writing,
but this one is the best..
loved this story,
so wonderful that I couldn't stop myself to give you both

Take care of yourselves.

P.S.
Did I hurt you both? I have sent scraps and pms too but no replies from your side that's why I am asking you both. If it is the reason then believe me it was unintentional. Sorry.

love, hugs.

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