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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

This story is becoming my fav all of the series, good job.

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

Mindblowing chapters 11 to 18...can't wait to read more...thanks for the PM

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

awesome !!! khushi's pain is so unbearable.. can't see her breaking like this.. arnav is having no idea what is happening to his khushi?? loving this story a lot..

thanks for mail 😊

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

superb update...

khushi's mu increasing...

aranv trying to fix things...

gupta's go to hell...

arnav brought khushi to introduce that lady...

khushi super shocked...

eagerly waiting for more...

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: RizArshi
Oh why oh why did you stop here? Why this kolavery di?
These were some awesome chapters. They were so gripping. The Guptas treat Khushi so badly. They don't even know how much they are hurting her. I loved Arnav in all the chapters. He did everything possible to make his Khushi happy. But to his bad luck Khushi again misunderstood him. I am so glad that he told his family off. They so much needed it. Someone should do this to the Guptas too. At least Payal should understand and stop this bias treatment by the Guptas. Babuji was the only person who seemed genuinely concerned about Khushi. I hope after meeting the lady Khushi will get some respite. But the question is will Khushi be able to meet her? As always the chapters were brilliant.

Risat... If Dhanush had asked Smita would have updated tonight itself!😉

But till then...Enjoy...

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

You know you made me slip out of my chair 😆🤣

Oops!

That was never the intention...😉

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: rulama

Risat... If Dhanush had asked Smita would have updated tonight itself!😉
But till then...Enjoy...

And this will keep me busy till the next update 😉

Shukriya Guruji

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Oh God! I was away for work for a couple of days and missed the entire new OS!!! Wow!!! Simply Wow!!!! Read all the 18 parts in one go and this OS has made it into my top favorites of all time!!! I love how you weave a story, Smita!!! You describe relationships so wonderfully!! People don't need words to show feelings...it is in their eyes and behavior.

Loved each and every word of your story. Arnav being silently in love with his wife and Khushi who does not have a security or assurance from her husband which has made her doubt the relationship she shares with him.

Please do not finish this one soon after the couple's resolution...show us the glimpses of the strong relationship they share...continue this one...it is that GOOD!!!! ❤️

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@SarunArshiIpk

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Congrats on new thread. Why dint you write the original ipk. You are such an amazing writer. I loved all the parts. I'm hooked onto all your stories. They r do beautiful. n last part was cliffhanger.i want to know who is that lady

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

As happy as the first chapters were, these were filled with all Kushi's angst and fears of not being wanted. My heart simply went out to her. Actually to both of them as in trying to give them space to get used to each other, Arnav has made Kushi doubt their relationship and his feelings for her. Poor Kushi, her world came crashing around her. But these 2 are not communicating and talking to each other, instead trying to guess what is going on in each other's head. If only, she tells him how she feels So he can respond accordingly. Who is this dark haired woman? This cliffhanger is going to be the end of me, pls update soon.

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