RIGHT OR WRONG~~A SANDHIR FF- PART 7 PG 74 ON 3/1 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjaliAnand

Awesome update dear...loved it very much...pls continue asap 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Hey amazing update continue soon eagerly waiting😊

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i will try to give today!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...I'm commenting for d first time on this forum...like d first time evaa...actually skul k kaam se fursat hi nhi milti ...den i hav opted fr science n extra coaching bhi h apart frm ttns...so u cn very well imagine ki is ff ki kya importance h mere liye dt apart frm reading it I m commenting also...pls post d next part!!!
Plss yrr...you r such a fab writer...hr ek emotion ko itne achhe se pen down krte ho..apke ffs ko itna follow kiya h...always together...part 1 n 2.. dono...then miserans...aur ab right or wrong...
Sb me se row sbse interesting to row hi h...being in class 11 I feel connected to this story coz in dis ff sandhir bhi 11-12 k hi h...pls iska next part dedo..itte dino se w8 kr rhe h sb...plsss!!

Aur at2 bhi jldi post krna...;)

^Love Harshita:)^
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harshita.29

Hey...I'm commenting for d first time on this forum...like d first time evaa...actually skul k kaam se fursat hi nhi milti ...den i hav opted fr science n extra coaching bhi h apart frm ttns...so u cn very well imagine ki is ff ki kya importance h mere liye dt apart frm reading it I m commenting also...pls post d next part!!!

Plss yrr...you r such a fab writer...hr ek emotion ko itne achhe se pen down krte ho..apke ffs ko itna follow kiya h...always together...part 1 n 2.. dono...then miserans...aur ab right or wrong...
Sb me se row sbse interesting to row hi h...being in class 11 I feel connected to this story coz in dis ff sandhir bhi 11-12 k hi h...pls iska next part dedo..itte dino se w8 kr rhe h sb...plsss!!

Aur at2 bhi jldi post krna...;)

^Love Harshita:)^

thank you so much dear!! i will update ton8!!!
i am not getting sufficient time to sit down and send pms to all wid update!!!
thanks again !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: harshita.29

Hey...I'm commenting for d first time on this forum...like d first time evaa...actually skul k kaam se fursat hi nhi milti ...den i hav opted fr science n extra coaching bhi h apart frm ttns...so u cn very well imagine ki is ff ki kya importance h mere liye dt apart frm reading it I m commenting also...pls post d next part!!!

Plss yrr...you r such a fab writer...hr ek emotion ko itne achhe se pen down krte ho..apke ffs ko itna follow kiya h...always together...part 1 n 2.. dono...then miserans...aur ab right or wrong...
Sb me se row sbse interesting to row hi h...being in class 11 I feel connected to this story coz in dis ff sandhir bhi 11-12 k hi h...pls iska next part dedo..itte dino se w8 kr rhe h sb...plsss!!

Aur at2 bhi jldi post krna...;)

^Love Harshita:)^

thank you so much deaR
i am glad u feel connected!!!
i am trying to put up real experiences !!!
i will update ton8!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
UPDATING IN MINUTES
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hey guys!!!kan pakar k sorry!!!i know i am super late!!!!per yeh raha update!!!!sorry!!!i hope u like dis!!havent proof read so bare wid my mistakes


part 5 : " truth "

To Paar De(both the boys held their grls hand and danced together followed by odrs)
Sabhi Hadein
Gale Lage
Kabhi Nahi Hone De Sehar

Iss Raat Mein
Beete Umar Saari Umar
Aa Raat Bhar
Aa Raat Bhar
Jaayein Na Ghar
Aa Raat Bhar

All were dancing together !!!!vids once bumped into parth who turned around after making faces !!!he was dancing wid sanyukta freely!!!
Vids stomped her foot and went to drinks section!!!
She took a orange juice and started sipping looking at sanyu and parth!!!!
Rd was dancing wid friends and even pulled jiggy!! he smiled at everyone and when it came to sanyu ,he stucked his tongue out and inreturn got a kick from her!!!!
Sanyu smirked and walked out from dere to garden as her phn vibrated!!!
Rd too followed her...he stood at his place as he heard her convo !!!

Sanyu:ji...ha ha mei kal hi ajaungi...ha school hai per mei aungi!arey koi bat nhi!!nhi parth ko nhi laungi!!khud ajaungi mei!!tum tension mat karo!!!ok!!waha pohoch k mei phn karungi tum ajana!!!ha bye!!!
Rd went from dere and searched parth!!!
Meanwhile sanyu entered the house and met jiggy...

Sanyu:hey..
Jiggy:so kuch der aur phir mummy papa ki anniversary!!i am excited to see their faces when they will see the rings!!!
Sanyu:hmmm I will click the pictures ok!!!
Jiggy:ha!!acha phir batao yeh chain kisne di hai!!!har waqt pehente ho!!!
Sanyu:ha!!this is close to my heart !!mere bhai ki presence feel karwate hai!!
Jiggy:matlab???u can call him yeah phir milne ja sakte ho na!!
Sanyu:kash kar pati!!!!she smiled sadly and kissed her locket!!!
Jiggy:rehta kaha hai tumhara bhai???
Sanyu pointed up!!!
Jiggy:upar???per upar to terrace..oh I am so sorry !!!he hugged her immediately!!!

Sanyu:its ok!!!
Jiggy:he will be proud u know to have a sister like you who keeps his given locket wid her always!!!he smiled !!!
Sanyu smiled and hugged him !!!

Sanyu:thanks!!!mei apko bhaiya bulayu????
Jiggy:ofcourse chutki!!!
Sanyu:ap mujhe yeh naam se kyu bulate hai???
Jiggy:aise hi!!!
Sanyu;pata hai wo ankit bhai bhi bulate the!!!
Jiggy:acha huya na!!
Sanyu smiled and left him!!!

Parth came dere!!!
Parth:so milap kis khushi mei???
Sanyu:tu vidhushi ko date kar raha hai isliye!!she hi5ed wid jiggy!!!
Parth;wat nonsense!!!!mei pagal hu kya???
Jiggy:nhi nhi she is good!!!
Parth:ha ha mujhe pata hai!!!!he threw a glance at vidhushi and made weird faces!!!sanyu laughed at him and jiggy joined them!!!!

Soon it was 11:55 !!!already most have left !!!!
Rd;bhai wo laye na!!
Sanyu:ha ha!!
Rd:tum hai kaise pata ki kya hai!!!
Jiggy:arrey use dikhaya na!!
Rd;kyu dikhaya!!
Sanyu:meine dekh liya isiliye!!!
Jiggy:ab tum dono chup raho!!!chutki tum yeh rakho aur rd tu yeh rakh!!
Rd:kaun chutki!!!
Sanyu:mei kyu???
Vids;sun k lagta hai ki bheem wali chutki!!!
Sanyu:ha wahi hu darling!!!she blew a flying kiss to her!!!
Vids immediately stood bsde rd!!
Sanyu:kya???dar gayi!!!
Vids:nhi!!wo mei to !!
Parth;guys focus!!!
Rd:ha to yeh ring kyu rakhegi???
Sanyu:kyuki bhaiya ne bola hai!!
Vids;ab yeh bhaiya kaun!!!
Jiggy:mei bhaiya..yeh chutki yeh rd tum vids and aur wo parth!!clear !!now shut up and move to terrace!!!mei aur parth cake leke ate hai aur vids tum wo cards and rd aur chutki yeh rings!!!
Vids:ok!!
Rd:yeah ok!!!

Dey all moved to different directions!!!!
Rd:listen jab mei kahunga tab hi ring dena!!!
Sanyu;nhi!!jab bhaiya kahega tab!!
Rd;wo mera bhai hai!!!
Sanyu:ha to!!unhone permission diya ki mei bhaiya bulau!!!tum chaho to tumhe bhi...
Rd;no way!!mujhe koi relation nhi rakhni tumse!!!duffer b section wale!!!
Sanyu:same here idiot a section wale!!!

she mocked him in his way!!!
Rd huffed and stopped in the last step to terrace!!
Sanyu was bhnd him and bumped to him!!!

Rd:uff duffer!!
Sanyu:to tum idiot yaha ruk kyu gaye???
Rd:bhai ko ane do fool!!!!
Sanyu:oh ha ha !!!

Dey waited for few more minutes and jiggy and parth came wid cake and candles!!!vids came wid cards!!!
Jiggy:ok now switch of the lights rd!!
Rd:ok!!

he switched them off and people on terrace looked around due to the sudden dark!!!
Parth immediately put the candles on cake and lit them!!!

Sanyu:lets go...she beamed in excitement!!
Rd:arey meri mom dad ki anniversary hai tumhari parents ki nhi!!
Parth:rd tum..
Sanyu:parth wo phn dena!!!mei record karti hu!!!!vids yeh ring lo!!!
Jiggy:arey tum hi rakho uske pass bohot sare cards hai!!!
Sanyu:to parth tu rakh!!yeh le!!ab chalo its time!!!

Jiggy nodded and entered wid rd wishing dere mom dad happy anniversary!!!
All clapped and parth switched on the lights!!!
Jiggy kept the cake on centre table ...
Harsh and renuka stood dere smiling!!!
Vids went and gave rd the cards!!!

Rd:mom dad yeh sab apke liye!!!u guys are the best!!!he hugged dem!!!

Harsh:this is lovely!!!!akhir mere bte hai dono!!
Renu:acha??jaise tumne paida kiye hai!!!huh!!!thank you so much beta!!!she blessed jiggy and rd!!!

Jiggy ok ok now yeh lo apke ring...
rd too gave to harsh!!!
Harsh:per yeh sab...
Jiggy:offo dad!!!apki shadi k waqt apne nhi pehnaye the to ab pehna lo!!!!common!!!!
All clapped again and harsh slipped the ring and renu too!!!
Sanyu was video capturing everything!!!

harsh and renuka cut the cake and fed each odr!!!!
sanyu smiled as years back she too witnessed her parents to smile like dem!!!!
she came back from trance when renuka shook her!!!
renu:kaha kho gaye...
sanyu;kuch nhi aunty!!!
renu:to yeh lo!!! she fed her the cake and inreturn sanyu to did the same!!!!

sanyu:happy anniversary!!
renu:thnk you!!!acha ab ise time mode pe do aur chalo !!!family picture time!!!
sanyu:per aunty mei to apki family ki nhi hu...
renu:ofcourse ho beta!!!come come !!!
sanyu fixed it on time mode and stood wid parth !!
parth wrapped his arm around sanyu and odr around jiggy!!!
vids was on odr side wrapping her arms around rd and looking at parth and sanyu!!!

d picture was clicked and all clapped !!!!the n8 went on wid celebration and around 2 sanyukta wid parth's family entered their house and immediately flopped on beds!!!


next morning...

rd was coming out of his house wid his bike when he saw sanyukta walking alone in school dress!!!
rd:parth kaha hai ???
sanyu:wo chala gaya!!!aj bara pyar aaraha hai tumhe???
rd:nhi wo to bas ek sath jate ho to!!!
sanyu;to tum jao na!!!!ajeeb ho!!!
rd:to chalo ek sath chalte hai!!
sanyu:excuse me!!!tum apni darling vids ko leke jao!!mujhe nhi jana!!!mei chali jaungi khud!!aur yeh ehsan kis khushi mei!!!
rd:tumne itne ache video kiye isi khushi mei!!!
sanyu:oh thank you and now leave!!!
rd:ha to mujhe bhi shauk nhi hai!!!
he sat on his bike and whooshed away whereas sanyu sighed in relief!!she quickly took u-turn and headed towrds bus stand!!!

she got up in the bus and took a seat!!!
she was heading towrds her own house as it was his birthday!!!parth's parents didnt give permission to go to her house as it might affect her again but she wanted to spend the time in dat house!!!

she remembered how she used to celebrate his bdays!!!how she used to iritate him wid balloons !!!she laughed at her thoughts !!!!
she was reminiscing all when the bus came to a halt!!!
sanyu looked around and came down the bus!!

she started walking !!she stopped infront of a flower shop and took a yellow flower!!!
she touched the flower lovingly!!!she then took a bar of chocolate and entered her house which was now maintained by thier servants!!!!
the watchman smiled and she touched his feet!!!
watchman;khush raho!!!!jao andar sab wait kar rahe hai!!!
sanyukta nodded and headed inside!!!!

she was greeted by their loyal servants and she entered her brother's room!!!!
she placed the flower infront of his photo and sat down wid chocolate!!!!she was going to start her convo when she heard shoutings !!!she hurriedly came out and saw their servants moving out!!!
she too came out and saw jiggy standing dere...
sanyu;bhaiya ap.. yaha ..per..
watchman:ap ise jante ho!!!
sanyu:ha per ap sab itna shor kyu kar rahe the???
watchamn:wo yeh ghuse aarahe the aur phir apka nam le raha tha!!mujhe laga koi kharab banda hai jo apko ...
sanyu:ji nhi nhi!!yeh ache hai!!!yeh meri parosi hai !!jiggy bhaiya!!!
watchman:oh acha sorry sorry!!!
jiggy:per tum yaha yeh...
sanyu:chaliye andar!!!!
she held her hand and took him directly to ankit's room!!!
jiggy;is he ur..
sanyu nodded and jiggy smiled!!!
jiggy:per tum yaha???
sanyu:aj bhai ka bday hai!!!per ap..
jiggy:wo tum jo bus se arahi thi usimei mei tha!!!tumhe utar te dekha school uniform mei isiliye meine picha kiya!!!per parth ya aunty uncle k sath bhi asakti thi!!
sanyu:hmm per parth thora bimar hai !!use pata hai mei yaha hu aur wo ana chahta tha per meine mana kar diya!!!phir aunty uncle nhi chahte ki mei yaha ake phirse affect hu per dil nhi manta ki is din yaha na au!!!she touched ankit's photo!!!

jiggy:ohhh !!!!koi bat nhi!!to hum dono milke celebrate karenge na!!!!he sat down and both started normal convo !!!it was almost 1p.m..!
sanyu:bhaiya abhi nikal na hoga!!!2 baje tak ghar pohochna zaruri hai!!!
jiggy:ok ok chalo!!mei bhi ghar hi jaunga!!!!and dey both left!!!!

after an hour dey reached their house!!!
parth was dere standing wid his bike waiting for sanyu!!!
sanyu:chal!!
parth:u ok!!
jiggy:arrey mei tha na!!!
parth;ap??
sanyu:ha wo bad mei..abhi chal andar!!!bye bye bhaiya!!
jiggy:yeah bye!!!

jiggy entered his house to see rd sulking over something and throwing his shoes!!!
jiggy:kya huya gussa kis bat pe hai????
rd:arey mat pucho!!!wo sanyukta hai na apki chutki!!kal meine phn pe suna ki wo kahi ja rahi hai chupke!!aj subah bhi meien use dekha school k taraf ja rahi thi per school pohchi hi nhi!!!jab robert sir ne uske baremei pucha to meine bataya ki wo arahi thi per ayi nhi aur phir parth aur mera jhagra ho gaya!!i mean meine to sach hi kaha na!!!phir!!!pata nhi us larki ko parth k family ya uski khud ki family kaise sambhalti hogi!!!!huh!!!
jiggy sat bsde him and showed him a photo on his cell!!
jiggy:yeh hai sanyukta ki asli family..uski mom ,dad aur uska bhai !!per rd inmei se koi bhi is duniya mei ab nhi hai!!
rd looked at him shocked!!!
jiggy:hmmm aj uska bhai ka bday hai to wo apni ghar gayi thi chup k taki mama mami pareshan na ho !!!jaisa tu mujhse ya mummy papa se pyar karta hai usse kai zyada wo karti hai!!!!samajh raha hai ki galti kiski hai???
rd nodded and immediately ran to parth's house!!!!
Edited by chowanisha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res
unres..
first... stalking pays off...
i was so waiting for the update... loved it... awesome..
sanyu is such a strong girl.. vidushi i guess she likes parth... i love the cute fights... beautifully penned update... Amazing and plzzz update sooon..
Edited by TheKanwalKaur - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss ye resss kabhi unress nhi ho sakta 😆
Moi isss resss ko kabhi unress nhi hone degi yennnaaa rascala minnnd ittt😆
Btw sirf sorry se kaam nhi chalega chalo sit ups karo chlo that tooo 100 times
The update was okay okay to nhi but brilliant n perfect zaroor tha
Hehehe vids j n sanyu n jiggy pulling parths legs
Eeeks chutki my fav but not more than chhota bheem awwwieee i so love him haaaye kya fight karta h nhi
Nhiii rd ko bhaaai ye nhiii ho sakta ye padhne se pehle main so kyu nhi gayi
Ufff chalo bach gaya rd but beware dude kahi raakhi na baandh de tab to beta devdaas ban k reh jaayega
Ahem ahem rd is taking interest in her matters
Awwwieee i love sanyu n jiggy bond
Ooo she went to her house
Eeeks jiggy followed her
Arghhh i was expecting rd
Yaaay finally usko pata chal gaya yipppeee
Moi dancing on jumme ki raaat
Haaaiiinnn update khatm mtlb wo bhaaga uske saath update bhi
Kyu kyu kyu why why why
Arre moiko uska reaction padhna tha
Ab kya hoga
Imma expecting a hug
Ghosh moik liye this was chhotu update baakiyo ka pata nhi
Ek kaam karo din me har ghante ek update dete jaao okay
Moi ne unresss nhi kiya h yennna raaasacalaaa
Minnnd ittt
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH
BADA WALA
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH
Edited by pritha072angel - 10 years ago

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