I am sorry sakshi for not commenting on previous chapter, bhul gayi thi mai :X
Tum toh bada mast likhti ho yaar, ekdum cool jaise! I really liked that part where after getting up sharon imagined their night moments and blushed, that was so cute and then swayam remarked her upon wearing his shirt and the way she got pink was veryy awesome!
Then stupid woman in the lift lol seriously people have more interest in other person's lives rather than concentrating over them but liked the way swayam ended the fight by saying about their mentality. But the lift scene was nicee, so comforting their presence is, ahh bliss to read!
Then the rain romanceee! Ahaan hotness le ayi tum toh ;) It was a very well written and described intimate moment, the way she clutched on his shirt tight and then both of them ignoring the water level and kissing was hot. It was a very different scene and i must say good imagination sakshi, yet again *claps*
Cricket hahaha yeh game har pati patni ke beech aata hai lol XD sharon gave him karela ughhh hahahaha then she fell oops. Ab how swyam will make up to her ;)
Update soon!
Love you TKD 😉