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Posted: 11 years ago
One of d most emotional chaptets i've read till date...it was awesome... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is too heart breaking.
i hope things will be better for them after this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deeps👏
It was indeed a much awaited mahaaa update😛, I so loved it.

A total emotional one😭

Superb dear, finally arnav meltdown, when he realized he may loose her again, ohh... he loves her so much, he can put a mask of anger but his heart gave a reply, that he cant breathe without her, cant see her in pain.

He is totally panicked seeing her in a vulnerable state, he is so shocked that she is protesting to his touch too.

I so felt bad when she said that they would have raped her, poor girl she would have gone thru so much, my heart went out to her.

Finally arnav will give their love a second chance, he will have to bring her out of her depression and iam sure it will take lot of efforts and patience on his part to bring back the old khushi, it is not an easy task, specially when she is not allowing him to come near to her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Gr8 update deepthi. A master piece... Loved to the core... A maha episode in all way... Loved aman, anjali and nani..hope aman agree to anjali's thought of adoptation soon... Finally arnav came to know khushi's lonely battle..loved khushi's flying kiss to arnav while going to DM..god this lady has so much surprise in her kitty..loved his panic to find khushi first his office next hospital and then finally patrol office..yaar its very much difficult to see khushi's pain..brilliant piece of writing there deepthi...so beautifully described what arnav went through seeing khushi's pain..its so painful.. No words coming..hats off.. A grand salute to u deepthi...and the scene in his bed room wrecked my heart... Loved convo between arnav and anjali there..loved arnav to the core..really he is a gem.. They both deserve so much happiness in there life..hope they find soon as arnav already made a decision to bring old khushi back..his loving khushi back..thanks a lot for the pm..await your next update.. Love u a lot dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovedrops



haha... bahurani... I don't mind you saying you love your deepu mom more than me... becasue me myself loves her more than you.. more than anyone in IF...

And what???? you and Khushi will share.. my Arnav... As per now Khushi is back in his life... he won't even listen to anyone.. even me... he only listens to Deepu... but first let them back... it's been long time since seeing them together... Arnav and Khushi as.. Arshi...


K MOM every1 is saying here i love Mom More bt i can say only WE LOVE YOU DEEPTHI AS A PERSON U R...
n Mom knows we {Khushi N Me} are going to share our love for ur son Arnav..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lalarukh


still under the spell of update ...fantastic and beautiful...from starting till end...

payal khushi convo on nk...all lovely and light hearted but the moment khushi told her will ask ur jeeju...ufff deeps...kiya pain i felt her ...cant tell u...how much easy relation she was dreaming at that point...will tell ur jeeju to smack his butts off....aweee...khushi ...we r absolutely fine...y i felt pain here again too...her every discussion is having that missing him touch in that...:(

loved the fact that khushi understand anjali that much...again all characters so much beautifully linked with each other here...if anjali knows khushi so do khushi...khushi know anjali will not do something hidden from aman...wow thats her character...awesome...
loved nani aman anjali convo...nani disccussion on adoption...so true no more history needs to repeat...not another arnav betrayed in family...wow simply fantastic...i loved anjali point...baby needs to be accepted by all family members...how sweeet...big social message here deeps once again from urside...and aman he is fabulous asusal...he thinks that anjali still repenting...which she is but also...loved the fact that khushi the one behind this also...she showed her the peeled the real life of arnav once on road begging...ufff...she decided to give life to atleast one kid...deeps ,love u loads for ur such mature approach to social issues ...ok wt was that sharp elbow in his guts...aweee aman hope u fine ...lol

ufff loved the flying kisss ...hehehe...oyee and pagal...wt a fantastic feel ...her sms messages to him...and his loud wait...deeeps kitna fit likha hay yaar... so he smiled but then a thought hit him that cant be his khushi so bold...he was confused from last few days thinking who is real.??...aweee khushi she trying her best no doubt...to bring him back in life...wt abt ur ownself girl...:(

i loved that post delivery guy and arnav gup shup...hehehe...hilarious...do u know where his husband...right in front...lol...lol...loved it...

restaurant vs khushi...my goodness deeps...part 2 has started to build up that pain thing inside...the way u have written his pain,his tiredness in emotions the fear of lossing her again...his panic state...ufff ufff ufff...
my heart started crying from here...back ground ur vm constantly in mind...banjar hay sub banjar hay...mera yaar mila dey saiyaan aik war mila dey saiyaann...ufff :(
his phones calls on her number...his message ...where r u dammit...
khushi please come back...aweee...:(
his feeling towards going hospitals...his feeling of living a life alone away from family...needed supporty at that time...aweee deeps ...itna acha likha hay...kaha kaha nahi ous ney dhoonda...loved the way he touched her pic in passport...noticing no expression no smile on her face...ufff....i cant tell u deeps how beautifully u have written pain here...craving here...sense of lossing ur precious some one here...i am speechless ...arnav is gem...he is love...i wanted to give him name as love...ufff...

i loved it the way he finally reached patrol office..loved it how he said .my wife khushi singh raizada...ufff and wow...and that khushi...ufff never felt this much pain after listenng to him uttering khushi here...loved the way u have shown him noticing her weak condition and i can well imagine...how weak his heart felt here ...it is obvious in his saying khushi...

ufff deeps khushi condition ...her all insecurities ...her all fears...depressions all comes out ...u broke down me in tears at the point where she was telling arnav...bw i didnt take a sip of water...it must be drugged...:(...ufff deeps ...wt she had gone and wt is still going through...ufff her pain is unbelieveable...but arnav...his all observation...his all confussion all cleared up crystal clear...with that one push...dont touch me ever...aweee arnav i love u ...u such a gem...u dont need any explanations...as hur punaay per tera naam likha hay ...he got it ..u got it all...how he took her fainted weak body...stressed out...the flash back doc discussion...him bringing her home ...there home...no further thing needed...its decided...she is there where she should be...loved anjali and his convo...he has learnt wt he has to do...how to take next step...loved the puke scene...i mean the way he takecare of her...ufff its breathe taking...and in the end...her tears and his tears...she in his lap ...cuddling her like baby...its me ...its only me posy...ur b& w...ufff and wow ...swaying and hugging her
pls dont cry pls dont...wt do i do with u khushi...dont love me so much that it only hurts u...🤗👏...deeps i love u for creating such excellent character of asr..arnav in short love singh raizada...such sensible man in love...he never wanted explanations...the confussion he was having it also solved by his sense and sensiblity :)...ufff deeps ...tussi great yaar...no one can touch ur writing skills ...no one can...as u always know how to hit which chord of heart and when ...excellent writing skills...

p:s i wanted to say my and sair feelings r same same...so pls consider my comment as her too...:)


love u Lala Maasi.. bt i have no shame while acpting that i have no words for this update..
evrytym i said dis update was more than our xpectation bt again Mom magic wand ghumaati hai aur meri eyes mai gangaaa jamuna saraswati.. even local river Jhelum n DAL LAKE b behnaa shuru hota hai..
Edited by ShahSAIR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Guys, Check below...</font>

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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">I couldnt thank you all enough for supporting me and giving me this proud moment...You guys are the best and I am so blessed to have you all in this journey.</font>







PS: <font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Lala, if it wasnt you, I wouldnt have found this...You go girl for always taking care of me...Love Ya...</font>

congratulations deepthi..you deserve much more than this... We all love you..aise bahut saare unchayian ko aap chulein yahi hamare duva hain..love u so much..
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Posted: 11 years ago
It is a assume update.
loved it.
it is truly an emotional one.where every emotion is justified .
loved the way you narrated their emotions,agony, distress.
the best thing in your writing style is to describe the emotions aptly.
how arnav was confused and felt lonely, when he didn't see kushi.
kushi's reactions, justified her state of mind.
fantastic and fabulous update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are right this chapter was a sea of emotions...

My throat feels clogged...

How would one explain what he feels when his heart is wretched out of his body...

This is the same expression I was going through when I read this chapter...

U r a fabulous writer, the connection which I feel to this story can't be expressed in words & all the credit goes to ur writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was so emotional. The witty part of khushi at the start was so refreshing but somehow that went away with what happened to her next.. Hope Arnav will get her recover soon

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