Arshi FF: Fighting Fate (TVK 2) Thread 4 - COMPLETED - Page 21

Awesome update Deepthi!!! Loved it 😊

So many things to say to each other... but they are still playing the 'cat and mouse' game... one comes forward and the other retreats.

[QUlovely...she still affects him..

Did he say the last words or was it hits thoughts?

Painful, the chapter shows her mask being uncovered by him.When his anger is fading from his soul, his heart is showing the true state of his soulmate. And it's not something that is relieving to his soul. He is shocked, pained and heartbroken to see her like this. For him, it is like his Khushi's soul has been masked by another person's. Glimpses of her true self is making him restless and its not far behind when he will completely tear her cover.

But I understand her reluctance to base their relationship on pain, sorrow and pity. She wants it based on love, trust and much more.

Originally posted by: lalarukh

deeps out standing update...i am short of words in ur praise...mujhay woh song yaad araha hay right now...yeh kahan aagaye hum youhin saath saath chaltay...arnav and khushi reached which stage of life ...standing ovation from myside friend...for writing it way par excellence...their inner turmoil ,beautiful...his observations,beautiful...and she on floor ,struggling her fears,beautiful...hats off deeps ...just simply hats off...

loved the way i found a damn professional khushi in restaurant...how beautifully ...she is on her toes...keeping her team intact ...working...side by side...she not forgetting her aim of winning him back...in his room with coffee ...and that heart she drew ...it was all so beautifully written...it seems literally not reading but infact seeing it ...the way she took the drops of coffee and relishing it for a moment...it all written outstanding...and asr seeing the coffee with heart..his anger right there...ignoring it...demurring the heart and her service...ufff kiya words hain yaar...fantastic

his observation is written beautifully...he noticing her hardwork,her struggling ,paler skin ...tired body still having a professional touch in her voice and commands...tooo good...loved the way u have written arnav watching her every step...and the way he he stood up and went towards her...where is khushi?...ufff amazing...

loved the fact that he didnt let khushi apologise...loved the way he handled the rude customer...he need to be shown the door ...and he didi it...care and concern dripping from his every move...

ufff loved the positivity which r keeping in khushi...though hurt at heart seeing coffee cup as it is... but seeing heart there ...her hope alive again...my goodness...deeps awesome girl...uff asr back in action...he knows how to play hs cards...if u not capable sign the papers...my God...he is true asr...

I dont remember asking for an explanation!

Right, you didnt. And I realized you wont ever!...wooow tooo good.

If you think my life, my decisions, my thoughts and everything else are revolving around you and only you, then GET THE HELL OUT OF THE FANTASY WORLD...

Decide Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada, Do I need to be IN or OUT of my fantasy world?

him asking and her replying...and his statement and her questioning...my goodness...they both balancing out each other...they both on roll here :)...

ufff deeps stading ovation from myside for night scene...i loved it loved it and loved it...khushi inner turmoil...her depression phase ...and arnav inner turmoil seeing khushi like that...breathtaking scenes...written out of this world...fantastic ,superb...👏...i loved it to the core...u have brought out emotions excellently here...i am in tears,its written so beautifully...dil kerta hay to keep reading it again and again...and believe me...every time it gives same intensity,same pain,same concern for both...khuahi and arnav...one bearing it and other going through it..

pls accept this small token of love from me...thank u so much for giving us such outstanding story and arnav khushi ...

ufff u have written her condition breathe taking..never read something written that way par excellence...i loved the way u have shown her turmoil...her depression..a girl who is there all smiling wt goes with her in her weak moments of night...ufff i am teary..

.Leaning onto the floor, curling her legs to her chest, she felt unmotivated, defeated and every thought that crossed her mind became painful ordeal yet she was too lost to understand the trail of thoughts her mind is playing speedily. Her sullen mood intensified with each passing second escalating to incapacitating bouts of depression and she lied on the floor frozen not caring the cold floor that slowly started biting to numb her entirely.She pulled the duvet lying on her side and pulled it over her tucking it securely under her chin, her eyes staring out into the darkness through the window, if only she knew she was indeed staring at him.

ufff i am in tears seeing arnav ...equally struggling with his obeservation..on otherside ...he was going through nothing less ...seeing his life his love ...like life less on floor...ufff deeps outstanding yaaar

He narrowed his eyes in confusion as this mystery mist of Smiling-Khushi is drastically wiped off and replaced with Grieving-Khushi. Her mind numbing icy unshed tears whipped his face as his own pooled behind his lids.He wanted to run to her to check on her but remembering how terrified she got hearing his voice in the darkness, he didnt think it is a good idea to startle her once again with knocks on her door at this hour...his observation...brought him to big point...

pls accept these flowers...as i am having no words in ur praise right now...mayb wt i wanted to say these flowers can deliver to u ...

she again back in masking form...and he again back in observing form...

bloody attitude..😡.but alas arnav..😕.when u know the real of her...😭wt must be ur condition then...😲seeing her on floor ...ur floor slipped from beneath ur feets ..🤢🤢🤢. iss lyn mai kya emo's use kiye maine... hehehehe

Show me more than what you chose to show me...Something real, Something YOU...ufff tooo good...😕🤢

Gong in a right direction!

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

oye Lala ji kuch bacha b kisi aur k lye.. pls aayindaa mera naam b add kr dou apney cmnt mai aur likhna ye cmnt Lala ka kam bt meraa zydaa hai...lol😆😆😆

tusi toh nicest way dhoondhtey rehtey ho Meri Deepu Mom ko pataaney k lye... hehehehe😆

Originally posted by: lalarukh

hehe sair ...ok done...from next time ...i ll write a line ...that mine and sair point of view r same same...so pls consider my comment as her also...lol...and pataana aur woh bhee ur deepu mom ko...tooba kero she will be after me with bat in her hand...she simply hates buttering...lol

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

ok Lala Maaasiii hehehehehe Deepu Mom se kahengey aaajse meraa cmnt Lala Maasi kregi.. aur mai toh bacha hon abhi puri baat kaha kr paati hon,, bs Honeymoon mai bsy hon😉😉😉

You are a gifted writer dear. Allah has gifted you an amazing ability to make a place in people's hearts with your words... your power on writing emotions and pain is commendable... Today, I am gratified at my decision for joining IF...

Coming up on the update, it was emotional and heartwarming. Arshi pain is becoming unbearable for me and you have depicted their emotions perfectly... This story just overwhelmed me...

Each heart has some pain only the way of expression is different...Some hide it in their eyes while some hide it in their Smile...

He cannot see her in pain neither she can see him aloof nor detached from her...Both are masking their emotions... Khushi hiding her pain in her smile while arnav is masking his emotion behind his anger...Both are hiding their true-selves from each other... Kya banega in dono ka...

What I can say more, it was a stupendous chapter... Her guilt for ruining his reputation, his protectiveness towards her... Everything is just made me so emotional. An Outstanding update... Looking forward to the 'Maha update''. .thanks for pm