arshi ss: Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away,chapter 1-19

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kizh72

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Maarning Maarning ma smilewa on facewa!
Rhea, wonderful! Waiting to read the rest of it 😊

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: indi52
"Really, sab khush honge?" ASR's lips had started to twitch a little at the extreme right.

okay, i could have finished reading in fifteen minutes but that line up there... well i had to spend a lot of time trying to understand exactly what you meant. by the way, the asymmetrical right dip of lip is permanently mine, i hope you know.

very light frothy happy and sexy chapter. of course it is going to chapter two... i want to know exactly how it goes all the way to anjali's idea. and how the laad gov falls head over heels for madam jamuni kurta, also she, i want to see her in a state over the man whose touch makes her eyes wide,

very nice... see you soon.

and thank you for saying it was us that inspired you... i am super touched.

I just finished replying to you first comment Indi di.. And here you are staking claim on a certain harvard bitwa.. My hands are off.. very safe distance from that assymetry.. only for your sake.. samjhi aap?

oh so you want to see all that Indi di? But writing about IPK means I most probabaly should forget what happened in this chapter and talk about random stuff in the next one. Maybe bring in a few rude guests, teddy like goons and some detectibhiya.. thats what will pull in all those audience, hai na ? 😆

Right now am more worried about how to find the time to even write another chapter.. let alone what to put in it.. am very glad you felt light and happy.. I might have to curb that happy feel.. with Arnav and Khushi I have a tendency to get to carried away with the happiness...

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
OMG this is awesome, fantastic start.
It's been a long time reading funny and romantic arshi story.
I feel so good to read Khushi Kumari Gupta pagal par cute dialogues and Arnav's madness.
Khushi is indeed crazy, her idea is crazy but very interesting. She is planning to married off Arnav to a simple girl to give her jiji and jeejaji a chance of eternal happiness, so cute thought. Khushi lives in sapoon ki dunya which is totally filmy.
Arnav reaction was expected but only he oculus cope up with the madness called Khushi
Wow Anjali proposed khushi's name. I think Arnav will said yes but Khushi will require a little emotional blackmailing in which Anjlai is master for saying yes to marry Arnav.
The dialogues are written wonderfully.
How is Shyam? Is he negative or positive?
Update next chapter soon.

Javeria you know how I keep asking you for happy stories. Now am writing one of my own 😳 . I like it when it is light and happy so most probably that is how this story goes.. Do tell me if everything starts going too smoothly and then I might add in some mamiji drama..

Yes totally filmy is Khushi.. and how cute is that? ASR has to fall for such a pagal don't you think? For Shyam most probably he is exactly like the Shyam in the show since in my mind I started off exactly from the kuch kuch hota hai scene.

Thanks a lot for liking and a nice rather long comment made my day. 🤗

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: arhi_crazy
That was a beautiful start.
eagerly waitn 4 more.

Hi arhi_crazy.. am so happy to see a new reader.. Thank you.. and hopefully you will enjoy what's next.

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kizh72

Maarning Maarning ma smilewa on facewa!
Rhea, wonderful! Waiting to read the rest of it 😊

Hello Hi Kizh.. You remember this was the last scene in my VM on the nazar laaye na song.. meetha meetha tu khara khara main.. since then I have been pondering over the possibility of their marriage coming up here.. Thank you.. happy you have a smile on facewa and are excited about what is next.. some mamijee rona dhona for sure.. bye bye Kizh..

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Rhea, you are a blessed writer my dear.. The narration flowing effortlessly, each and every fine detail being taken care of, both of them absolutely in character, Great observation of that matching hues of the match makers... who are made just to match each other themselves..

For a sec thought asr was heading to the farq kind of confession with the khush.. Loved the lighter vein it started out with and ending quite on a romantic high.. good that you had let Anjali's tube light glow for all our cribbing..:)

Loved it is an understatement rhea..

look forward to where this is all headed..

Congratulations again..

Edited by Horizon - 11 years ago

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Indu I am very grateful at receiving such a nice comment from you. Thrilled you liked it so much. And am desperately wishing that I can keep the story interesting enough to actually deserve all the good things you said.

I remember you had mentioned to Sohara that you can only see Arnav and Khushi like they are in the show. Same here. So trying hard to stick to the IPK we know by heart. Thanks a lot.. am convinced this is the best comment my writing is going to get. 😳 And of course am sure everyone tells you this all the time.. you should try writing a story or atleast some os .. I wasn't too interested, but now this seems very exciting.. hehe I am getting to get Khushi and Arnav married off happily.. what more could I want as a writer?

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Very Nice aarwen.👏

You took the scene and wrapped it in a new look .Love it.This was the scene when he egts worried for Khushi's worries and her Paagal pan which makes him nuts about her.

Cute.update soon

Edited by MehreenB - 11 years ago

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Sanz.
:))

Thank you Sanz. 😳

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aarwen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: MehreenB
Very Nice aarwen.👏
You took the scene and wrapped it in a new look .Love it.This was the scene when he egts worried for Khushi's worries and her Paagal pan which makes him nuts about her.

Cute.update soon

hello mehreen your color changed?

Happy you liked it. This whole phase during payash's wedding had a such a happy feel to it.. I always smile just thinking about it. Hope you like wherever the story goes. Thank you for reading.

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