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Posted: 10 years ago

The description to the sunrise was like Suban Allah, it was like I can visualize and feel of the first ray from my finger tips to my hand and arm. Beautifully decribed, Sunrise is one beautiful moment of a day.

Awe not only Khushi and Shashi me too was moved with the beauty of the building.

Aman is Khushi's bhai, their conversation was lovely. Arnav and Khushi, what to say? They always lit a spark.

The lovely bond of Aman and Khushi was cute; I did feel why I don't have someone like him in my life. God I would really want in future my kids to share a wonderful relationship between them...sigh which is a long way to Go...

Do you love cats, because even in DWE there is a cat at the library Khushi works? And I love cats but I'm scared of black cats though...I don't know why may be because in all the ghost story they always show black cats...chidhood fear, that is...

The part between Khushi and Saleem was bang on...the way she handled was too good.

Khushi does not approve of Arnav's way and she knows what he is trying to do. And true Arnav's behavior is wrong, not all girl will run behind money and lavish life.

But God the house was very beautiful, The places you chose for this story is very awesome one.

Lol bichara Saleem Arnav warned him, well, he needed it and I also know Arnav too needs someone to warn him.

Fourth part Arnav get's it all wrong of Khushi's appreciation towards him and sends her gift. Khushi's answer to him was very good but it angered him.

But he did wrong in walking up her door at such a state. Even then Khushi took all blame on her, just because Aman looks upon Arnav as his older brother. Arnav did felt regret and is thinking upon his action. And seeing Khushi in new light.

Their paris trip was lovely other than the Blare incident, that is nightmare to any girl. But Arnav was there at the end to save her.

Arnav and Khushi's talk, this is one of the part in the whole SS was what I loved the most...So beautiful...

You know I never knew the true meaning of wearing hijjab, all I had known or said was it is important for Muslim lady to wear it. But the true meaning you gave left me in awe. But sad some are like Khushi mentioned which I've seen mostly in my life I encountered with. They never know why actually the hijjab is and now I know from you. I'll definitely say to anyone if such topic comes in any time of my life. And I loved the line which said Allah listen to the caller not whoever it is or whatever the things is...

And splendid moment is Arnav praying after years and Khushi witnessing it even the single tear rolling down his eyes.

Arnav and Khushi's confession part was brilliant. Like the way Khushi put forth the believing of Love. True yaar, through Khushi you have made me know what actually love is.

Oh forget to tell Khushi's decribtion of her future husband to be parents was so nice, you know it felt like I'm telling my parents my choice of husband like how I want my would be to be...I guess many would have felt the feeling.

Arnav talking with his father was heat touching moment which I will never forget the word of Khushi about Parent's.

The way Arnav's family came to Khushi's and met her was very great. Anjali's word on how much she loves her brother expressed in every word and I loved Khushi's question which not 99% do most certainly when a proposal comes.

Shashi and Garima's talk with Khushi on lightening few details on Arnav and Aman's talk with Khushi truly shows how much he had changed and I loved Khushi's reponse or to say your way of writing the last line.

This SS is one beautiful thing, which will be in my heart for forever, an insight to Good Muslim or to say Good Human Being.

Only thing I don't understand is the time of prayers, because it varies...and I'm confused on when and which time what prayers people to for God.

Anyway as said a little word and thought of him to God will reach to him and he will definetly hear everyone. Only needed for us to remember him and the rest he will do. Thank You for wonderful story which truly made me to look inside me and see everything in light. Not every stories gives message but for me your story gives me the exact message and hope which has started fading from my heart but now I want to be the person before I got lost from the path to God. Not that I did not believe him but it is not like before after terrible accidents happened in my life and family. But now I got it and I'll follow through it. I truly mean it; this story is very wonderful and meaningful story.

Veil From My Heart too lifted from certain things and I'm very glad it did.
Edited by vs_2706 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vs_2706


The description to the sunrise was like Suban Allah, it was like I can visualize and feel of the first ray from my finger tips to my hand and arm. Beautifully decribed, Sunrise is one beautiful moment of a day.

Awe not only Khushi and Shashi me too was moved with the beauty of the building.

Aman is Khushi's bhai, their conversation was lovely. Arnav and Khushi, what to say? They always lit a spark.

The lovely bond of Aman and Khushi was cute; I did feel why I don't have someone like him in my life. God I would really want in future my kids to share a wonderful relationship between them...sigh which is a long way to Go...

Aww glad you liked it sis. Sunrise and sunset are marks of the start and end of the day, Very important and beautiful moments too😊 Aman and Khushi's bro/sis relationship is something that all siblings want but can't voice usually due to ego. Inshallah we all have kindling relationships with our own more than anyone else.

Do you love cats, because even in DWE there is a cat at the library Khushi works? And I love cats but I'm scared of black cats though...I don't know why may be because in all the ghost story they always show black cats...childhood fear, that is... Lol I do have a like for cats, but I also like dogs. I guess I like cats more because the Prophet PBUH did. Aww blackcats are just as good as any other. Some people take their superstitious made up stories a little too far and creating unessacery fears. 😆

The part between Khushi and Saleem was bang on...the way she handled was too good.

Khushi does not approve of Arnav's way and she knows what he is trying to do. And true Arnav's behavior is wrong, not all girl will run behind money and lavish life.

But God the house was very beautiful, The places you chose for this story is very awesome one.

Lol bichara Saleem Arnav warned him, well, he needed it and I also know Arnav too needs someone to warn him.

Yep slimy saleem. Many guys play this very easily with girls, but girls are also at fault sometimes acting too naive and innocent. Every girl should use a firm voice when being approuched by men like these. It reminds them of their mother and older sisters.😊


Fourth part Arnav get's it all wrong of Khushi's appreciation towards him and sends her gift. Khushi's answer to him was very good but it angered him. Arnav and his famous anger lol

But he did wrong in walking up her door at such a state. Even then Khushi took all blame on her, just because Aman looks upon Arnav as his older brother. Arnav did felt regret and is thinking upon his action. And seeing Khushi in new light.

Their paris trip was lovely other than the Blare incident, that is nightmare to any girl. But Arnav was there at the end to save her.

Arnav and Khushi's talk, this is one of the part in the whole SS was what I loved the most...So beautiful... Thank you very much sis.

You know I never knew the true meaning of wearing hijjab, all I had known or said was it is important for Muslim lady to wear it. But the true meaning you gave left me in awe. But sad some are like Khushi mentioned which I've seen mostly in my life I encountered with. They never know why actually the hijjab is and now I know from you. I'll definitely say to anyone if such topic comes in any time of my life. And I loved the line which said Allah listen to the caller not whoever it is or whatever the things is... Alhamdulilah I'm very glad that I could share the true meaning of the hijab to others so others can know too. Many people turn to the media to get info, when asking a Muslim girl would be a better insight. Allah has given us all a mind to think with and learn. And the only way to do that is to talk to people and do explore yourself.😳

And splendid moment is Arnav praying after years and Khushi witnessing it even the single tear rolling down his eyes.

Arnav and Khushi's confession part was brilliant. Like the way Khushi put forth the believing of Love. True yaar, through Khushi you have made me know what actually love is. Yep as much as some say they love their boyfriends/girlfriends etcetc and it's true love, it's not. It's just hormones. It's only love after they have married them and years have passed. Because before marriage when they leave their boyfriends/girlfriends and change them, where's the 'love' then? Which is why you can never know someone until you marry them and live with them. Love is very sacred and so should be thought about carefully as Satan can make many think/feel this attraction is love before marriage and make them do things they regret. May Allah protect us all from Satan and allow us to see the difference between right and wrong.😊

Oh forget to tell Khushi's decribtion of her future husband to be parents was so nice, you know it felt like I'm telling my parents my choice of husband like how I want my would be to be...I guess many would have felt the feeling. Everyone has this feeling, but usually put their expectations too high so when they don't find/get after marriage they feel disappointed. Have simple expectations so one can appreciate the small extras that come along the way. Inshallah we all get the partners that we hope for.

Arnav talking with his father was heat touching moment which I will never forget the word of Khushi about Parent's. Parents are highly important in Islam which Allah tells us in the Quran many times. There is the saying...Children should give their parents all their love and care, because they'll only understand their parent's true value when seeing their empty chair...

The way Arnav's family came to Khushi's and met her was very great. Anjali's word on how much she loves her brother expressed in every word and I loved Khushi's question which not 99% do most certainly when a proposal comes. It's important to know as much as you can about the person from trustworthy others (like their mother, sister, father etc) so you can get the true insight of who they are. Questions, especially the correct ones, are key to getting an honest view of the potential partner.

Shashi and Garima's talk with Khushi on lightening few details on Arnav and Aman's talk with Khushi truly shows how much he had changed and I loved Khushi's reponse or to say your way of writing the last line. Thanks😳

This SS is one beautiful thing, which will be in my heart for forever, an insight to Good Muslim or to say Good Human Being.

Only thing I don't understand is the time of prayers, because it varies...and I'm confused on when and which time what prayers people to for God. A Muslim has 5 daily prayers which are obligatory. Fajr, Zuhr, Asar, Magrib and Esha. Fajr is the prayer before sunrise. Zuhr is the prayer after the time of Noon. Asar is prayer midway between Noon and Sunset. Magrib is the prayer after sunset. And finally Esha is the night prayer.

There are many other prayers that can also be performed, but these are not compulsory. They are more like bonus prayers. 😳But the 5 prayers I have mentioned are the compulsory ones. Many ask why Allah needs us to perform these prayers, however it is not He who needs us to prayer. It is in fact us who need to preform these prayers, so we remember Him, give our time to think about Him and ask our hearts desires as well as share our sorrows and problems with Him.

The longest prayer is Esha (evening prayer) which takes no more than 20 mins ( unless one is very particular with their prayers alhamdulilah). But the fact is when Allah is doing so much for us, letting us breath, see, walk, talk, smile, work, play...Can't we spend a few minutes of our day during these times to thank Allah at least? Is Allah asking us too much? Or have we become ungrateful thinking we have thanked Him enough for all the blessings He grants us everyday? Tears come to my eyes sometimes when thinking about how much Allah has looked after me, given me parents when some have none, given me eyes when some can't see, given me the ability to breath when some have trouble. I wonder what have I done to deserve it...and thats the point. I have done nothing. Allah is the Most Merciful King there is, who loves his servants (us) so much that He simply waits for us to turn to Him, and Him alone, just to thank Him with a small amount of our time. Subhan'Allah. :')

Anyway as said a little word and thought of him to God will reach to him and he will definetly hear everyone. Only needed for us to remember him and the rest he will do. Thank You for wonderful story which truly made me to look inside me and see everything in light. Not every stories gives message but for me your story gives me the exact message and hope which has started fading from my heart but now I want to be the person before I got lost from the path to God. Not that I did not believe him but it is not like before after terrible accidents happened in my life and family. But now I got it and I'll follow through it. I truly mean it; this story is very wonderful and meaningful story.

Veil From My Heart too lifted from certain things and I'm very glad it did.

Subhan'Allah I'm glad sis that my story has toughed your heart that way. I'm sorry for the long response but when someone asks me questions I get so passionately involved that a speak from the heart. 😳 Thank you for this beautiful comment and please do ask me any questions you have. I will always answer to be best of my knowledge insha'Allah.😊

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Originally posted by: SS88

It's so wonderful to read about Arnav's changing behaviour. He brought his family back together, re-established his relationship with God and has now done the right thing by Khushi. Khushi is the kind of person we all need in our lives, not necessarily as a romantic interest. Maybe as a parent , or a sibling or a friend. Someone who pushes you to be the best version of yourself. Lovely story, Zara.


Thank you so much sis. *hugs*
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Beautiful update.
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fabulous update
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Another beautiful piece of ur writing dear..beautifully written
Loved eveybit of it
Love the way khushi able to change arnav for better nd to see the life in better way
Waiting for epilouge
Continue soon
Ps:- i send the buddy reqt dear..do pm me when u updt..
I would love to read ur other works too
Thanx
Sush😊

Edited by ArshiHolic_Sush - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful... Simply loved it

Arnav has changed for good & he even brought a marriage proposal to Khushi...

Seems like finally Khushi agreed to the proposal after much thinking ..

Very beautifully written...

Waiting for the epilogue
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superb update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
next update awaited😃

sorry for late and short reply..busy with bffs wedding
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Today as I comment on this story its not going to be about Arnav and Khushi, I have done that before and I will do that in the future. Coz for me this story is beyond the boundaries of Arshi love saga.
This story for me has shed a new light on the muslims. Not that I had any discriminating or anti-social or degrading or narrow-minded or whatever you call it, such views towards them. I have never been judgemental or prejudiced towards any person or religion. But my knowledge of muslims has been limited to what I have watched in movies/shows, read in text books etc etc. So going through this story has made me understand them better, their beliefs better and it has made perhaps an everlasting impression on me. Whether its the logic (I couldn't recall the exact word I had wanted) behind wearing the burkha or the prayers that allah will forgive or marriage or forgiving others and every other things mentioned that I failed to pin-point right now. The beauty behind them has left me in awe. Suddenly I feel as if I had been oblivious to who muslims really are. And I am so very thankful of you for writing this piece and enlightening me. Now if in future if the situation arises I just maybe able to help them, coz otherwise evev if I had wanted to I would have truly failed due to my lack of knowledge.

You know my mother has time and again told me that muslims are far better than others coz only they are still holding onto their roots. I now know why she thinks so. Our traditions, values, customs need to be respected and preserved. True we need to move with times and discard the unhealthy ones. Coz they aren't meant to bind us with chains but set us free. But that doesn't mean we completely let go of even the good ones. It all depends on our perspectives of how we see it. Whether you agree or not they do shape our characters, our thinking, our outlook towards life and everything around us.

So hats off to you for writing this piece. A lot of respect and gratitude from my side. I really tried to put all my feelings after reading this, into words and I don't know if I have succeeded even one percent.

PS- I am sorry if my comment offended anyone. Thats purely unintentional. I have tried hard that my words aren't misinterpreted.

PPS- Forgot to mention, acorrding to me its not our but what we believe in and follow is what defines us, name is just a part of that identity not the identity itself. I hope I am making sense. Afterall whats in a name right? So for god's sake stop fussing around a name. Its fiction and Aenav and Khushi are just a medium of portraying the characters and bringing forth the writers view. So focus on that.
I can't believe after all that you have described about being muslim they are stuck on a name!
Edited by nerdy_Nisha93 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nerdy_Nisha93

Today as I comment on this story its not going to be about Arnav and Khushi, I have done that before and I will do that in the future. Coz for me this story is beyond the boundaries of Arshi love saga. Aww thank you!😳


This story for me has shed a new light on the muslims. Not that I had any discriminating or anti-social or degrading or narrow-minded or whatever you call it, such views towards them. I have never been judgemental or prejudiced towards any person or religion. But my knowledge of muslims has been limited to what I have watched in movies/shows, read in text books etc etc. So going through this story has made me understand them better, their beliefs better and it has made perhaps an everlasting impression on me. I know how the media dress things up their own way and pick on things that 'make news', however I find it hurtful when people believe it all forgetting the majority of muslims round the world are not like that at all. Each religion have their own few individuals that do not represent their religion at all. I would rather someone come up to me and ask, rather than believe what they read and see on tv. Though this story I wanted to spread a small insight of the reailty of Islamic beliefs and how they're meant to be, insha'Allah. Thank you for saying this story has helped you understand a little better.😳 I rather you understand seek more knowledge as we are all given a brain for a purpose, to learn and seek knowledge of truth.😊

Whether its the logic (I couldn't recall the exact word I had wanted) behind wearing the burkha or the prayers that allah will forgive or marriage or forgiving others and every other things mentioned that I failed to pin-point right now. The beauty behind them has left me in awe. Suddenly I feel as if I had been oblivious to who muslims really are. And I am so very thankful of you for writing this piece and enlightening me. Now if in future if the situation arises I just maybe able to help them, coz otherwise evev if I had wanted to I would have truly failed due to my lack of knowledge. Yes it would be brilliant for knowledge to be learnt and spread as that's what makes us all grow as a sociaty through understanding. I always hope those who find this story interesting, look into the Quran and Hadith itself to see where I'v got these from, as this way of life is there and much more. Curiousity and eagerness to attain knowledge to better one self is a key aspect everyone has inside, but takes time to discover.😃

You know my mother has time and again told me that muslims are far better than others coz only they are still holding onto their roots. I now know why she thinks so. Our traditions, values, customs need to be respected and preserved. True we need to move with times and discard the unhealthy ones. Coz they aren't meant to bind us with chains but set us free. But that doesn't mean we completely let go of even the good ones. It all depends on our perspectives of how we see it. Whether you agree or not they do shape our characters, our thinking, our outlook towards life and everything around us. There's the saying that believing in Allah and Islam is like believing in the sun rising. Not because we see the sun rising, but because of it, I can see everything else alhamdulilah.😊 All religions are good, however in Islam we believe everyone should research deep into their own religions, have questions and use logic. That includes everyone. Muslim, hindu, Christian, athiest etc. Anyone can say 'I believe in something', but it's the reason that makes you believe it even more and helps let others see the reason too. Knowledge of your own belief is the best knowledge there is; especially better than blind faith.

So hats off to you for writing this piece. A lot of respect and gratitude from my side. I really tried to put all my feelings after reading this, into words and I don't know if I have succeeded even one percent. I am very very humbled by your comment. thank you so much for spending the time to read and write.😊

PS- I am sorry if my comment offended anyone. Thats purely unintentional. I have tried hard that my words aren't misinterpreted. Yes over the internet words can come across differently to different people. However in my opinion I found your words justifiable in your opinion. Thank you for being respectful.

PPS- Forgot to mention, acorrding to me its not our but what we believe in and follow is what defines us, name is just a part of that identity not the identity itself. I hope I am making sense. Afterall whats in a name right? So for god's sake stop fussing around a name. Its fiction and Aenav and Khushi are just a medium of portraying the characters and bringing forth the writers view. So focus on that.
I can't believe after all that you have described about being muslim they are stuck on a name! A very small few yes, but hopefully they've got the pint now.😆 Thanks for understanding. 😊

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