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Posted: 10 years ago
What can I say Zara I am going to sound like a broken record here but hey I have enjoyed this refreshingly different story immensely. More than anything the thought that has gone to displaying the perfect example of how a perfect muslim girl should express herself in today's modern society is quite impressive.

Khushi's thought process showed alot of courage and self respect on her part, specially when Arnav put forward his sudden proposal unlike the super dramatic characters who start shedding tears because of the intensity of their attraction to the guy in question and run to him with open arms, this Khushi refused the proposal and guided arnav towards doing it the proper way.
It was beautiful to see her being responsible for uniting Arnav with his family, sure he made the decision made she was definitely his guide here, someone who showed him the light and I couldn't be happier. Infact she has gained herself alot of sawab for changing someone for the better. The whole family proposal was described so darn well that I could feel the warmth and mutual affection between the families all the way from the other side of the world sitting infront of my PC ( rather the laptop sitting on my lap😆).

I cannot believe this journey is coming to an end but I know that all good things must come to an end, just thank you for sharing this wonderful journey with us and reminding us to constantly pray for what is good for us in the long run and not for something specific.❤️🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshix144

What can I say Zara I am going to sound like a broken record here but hey I have enjoyed this refreshingly different story immensely. More than anything the thought that has gone to displaying the perfect example of how a perfect muslim girl should express herself in today's modern society is quite impressive. Thanks so much sis. Very glad you're liking it. I'm writing Khushi in a way of what I would do, if I ever came across such a situation. Women should know that marriage isn't a subject that should be taken lightly and should understand it's importance before leaping into it.😊


Khushi's thought process showed alot of courage and self respect on her part, specially when Arnav put forward his sudden proposal unlike the super dramatic characters who start shedding tears because of the intensity of their attraction to the guy in question and run to him with open arms, this Khushi refused the proposal and guided arnav towards doing it the proper way. Exactly.
It was beautiful to see her being responsible for uniting Arnav with his family, sure he made the decision made she was definitely his guide here, someone who showed him the light and I couldn't be happier. Infact she has gained herself alot of sawab for changing someone for the better. The whole family proposal was described so darn well that I could feel the warmth and mutual affection between the families all the way from the other side of the world sitting infront of my PC ( rather the laptop sitting on my lap😆). lol. Glad you found this scene radiant. Family gatherings to discuss the marriage proposal is an important part to see a glimpse of how everyone is like in their own homes.

I cannot believe this journey is coming to an end but I know that all good things must come to an end, just thank you for sharing this wonderful journey with us and reminding us to constantly pray for what is good for us in the long run and not for something specific.❤️🤗Inshallah!😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG dear you made my life really i dont think anyone could brief Muslim culture like u described' loved it n im realy trying to be a gud muslim as Khushi is in this role.
And Arnav is a gud muslim cozzz khushi effected him as a good muslim thats really a positive thing...!!!!
Allah bless you zara for the research and effort you did for VH
Its mind blowing...!!!
And last but not the least This SS can effect any single person who's religious belief is weak or dead in his/her life. Plzzz read it carefully..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
a very thoughtful and beautiful update...
never expected a leap..
Love the way how arnav approached the proposal...
Update soon, thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Speechless! From the start where Khushi replied to Arnav's proposal to accepting his proposal for marriage!
Everything was written exceptionally well!
You remember the first time i sent you a pm asking if you are a professional writer! I had the same doubt again!
This update was mind-blowing!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nish_alisha

Speechless! From the start where Khushi replied to Arnav's proposal to accepting his proposal for marriage!
Everything was written exceptionally well!
You remember the first time i sent you a pm asking if you are a professional writer! I had the same doubt again!
This update was mind-blowing!


Aww you are very sweet for thinking so. I'm very glad your liking to story. *hugs*
xxx
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Meeshaali

OMG dear you made my life really i dont think anyone could brief Muslim culture like u described' loved it n im realy trying to be a gud muslim as Khushi is in this role.
And Arnav is a gud muslim cozzz khushi effected him as a good muslim thats really a positive thing...!!!!
Allah bless you zara for the research and effort you did for VH
Its mind blowing...!!!
And last but not the least This SS can effect any single person who's religious belief is weak or dead in his/her life. Plzzz read it carefully..!!


Inshallah we all strive to be good muslims, like Khudeja RA and Aisha RA etc. If you liked Khushi then you'll love the women like Khudeja RA and Hajrah RA more as Khushi's character is based mostly upon them and also how I view the world as a Muslim myself. Thank you very much for appreciating my stories sis. It means alot. *hugs*
xxx
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just loved your Maha update...
The best part was where Khushi tells Arnav the difference between love and attraction...
Loved it how she asks whether he knew the true meaning of love and how two people truly love each other when they know each other and that is possible when they live together...
Arnav does the right by proposing in the right way...
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's so wonderful to read about Arnav's changing behaviour. He brought his family back together, re-established his relationship with God and has now done the right thing by Khushi. Khushi is the kind of person we all need in our lives, not necessarily as a romantic interest. Maybe as a parent , or a sibling or a friend. Someone who pushes you to be the best version of yourself. Lovely story, Zara.
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Posted: 10 years ago
so nice to know that arnav is changing and it is true that you cant truly love a person without knowing him fully and properly... cant wait to read more

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