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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pari1995

disappoint...never yaar

it was soo danm nice yaar,i soo loved it
thanx for the pm dear
update soon
love
pari


thnks i will upload soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chowanisha

aww it was lovely and awsome update


thnks dear last time thuna comment nahi kiya
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Awsm
full of romantic.
Love in air 4 sandhir


ya love is in air...
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GUYS ANY ONE WANT NXT PART TELL ME ?
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Hi frndzz... Thnk u 4 ur lv n support.. Here I m wid nxt part..


So spare mi mistakes n here it goes..


YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - 38 - the 7 days XV


I request my readers once again not to throw rotten eggs on me as this part is more filmy than previous 1...


Recap: randhir helped sanyu for fixing her earring. They had a romantic time while sanyu helped a woman to carry water pot. They went to siddhi vinayak and wished their prayer in the ears of lord shiva's ox for which an eyelock occured. Next...


She spinned her eyelids and broke the eyelock and asked "ab...mujhe sunane k liye keh rahe the ya dil se bola???". "apne dil se puchho kya kehta hai", replied randhir. Saying this he smilingly left inside the temple leaving dumbstuck sanyu out. Due to his abnormal activity, she blushed hard and followed him.


"ahhm, meri baaton se tamato hui ho ya mere baare me soch k???", asked randhir in which he got the same answer as he stated "apne dil se puchho kya kehta hai". Now it was his turn to blush. "ab bolo kaun hai tamato", she said teasingly and moved ahead running playfully clutching her saree. He hid his left hand inside his pocket and adjusted his specs through right one with a bright smile. His eyes followed her till temple with the same music..


Kaise Hai Yeh Doori
Kaise Majboori

Mene Nazaron Se Tujhe Choo Liya


She bent on her knees infront of the idol folding her hands and so did he. Her eyes closed as she was deep inside her prayer, whereas he was busy admiring her.


Kabhi Teri Khusboo

Kabhi Teri Baatein

Bin Maange Yeh Jahan Pa Liya


When she was busy in her prayers, he shifted her pallu upto her forehead covering her head. His sudden action reflected a reaction of turning her head towards him where he was still staring her for which ones again their vision stuck.


Tu Hi Dil Ki Ha Rounak
Tu Hi Janmon Ki Daulat
Aur Kuch Na Janu
Bas Itna Hi Janu


By this time her folded hand moved towards him and she sung...


Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai

Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu


He clutched her palms with his and she kissed his hands..


Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu


They were now disturbed by the pundit for prasad, they stood and forwarded their hands at the same time and the plate got placed in one one palm of both. They were again locked due to their eyes. The situation was looking just like god's prize as if lord was blessing then with all his hands opened. The air was blowing according to their waves and music was dancing with its rythms...


Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi...


And finally randhir broke the lock.

R: chalo kanhi aur bhi jaana hai.
S: kahan???
R: tumhare 24 hrs khatam ab no question. Aur chalo.


In car..


S: are aaj pari ne cl nahi kiya. Kahan gayi wo.
R: kiya tha. Surprize ki wajah se maine ye keh k taal diya ki tum nahaane gayi ho.
S: tum bahut jhute ho gaye ho.
R: kya jhuta??? Tum nahi chahti ki use surprize mile???
S: haan. Chalo thik hai. Is jhut k liye maaf kiya kyunki meri pari isse khus hai. Warna tumhe to main.
R: kya lar logi zyada se zyada galaa dabaaogi. Actually tumhari problem nahi hai ladkiyan hoti hi aisi hai. Ye mat khao wo mat karo waise kapde mat pehno aise baat mat karo.


S: oho. Tum girl power ko jaante hi kitna ho. Yaad nahi...
And their fight continued till they reach baba haji ali dargah. And as always it was still continuing..


S: oh pleas tum rehne hi do itni bar haarne k baad bhi tum ye keh rahe ho. Tumhara na aj bhi samajh me nahi aata.
R: jitna samjhi utna kaafi hai. Ab utro. Hum pahunch gaye.
S: dargah???


R: haan wo kya hai tumhari bak bak zyada der tak handle nahi kar paaya aur yahaan rok diya. Ab chalo.


She got down from car making a face. Suddenly wind flew and her pallu started flying and came infront of her and she recalled randhir adjusting her pallu in temple. Her anger flew in that wind in seconds remembering that sequence. She stared at the well built six pack figure purchasing 'chaddar', smiled and pulled over her pallu to cover her head. He came with the 'chaddar' and stared her who was still admiring him. He ticked infront of her eyes and she came of her dreams.


R: ise padko main hanky nikaalta hun.
S: kyun???
R: kyunki ander sar dhak k jaate hein. Khud to tumne daal liya wo bhi mere sikhane par.
S: tumne kab sikhaya???
R: mandir me.(he said widening his eyes as he saw her silence)
S: tooohhh kya ho gaya. Maine bhi bahut chizen sikhayi hai tumhe.
R: achaa??? Jaise???
S: jaise love belief etc. ab bolo.(twinkling her eyes)
R: haaan...ab chalo late ho raha hai.


She understood his waywardness and followed him as he went inside. He presented the 'chaddar' to baba and they prayed raising tgeir hands and palms. After that the baba blessed then both through his peacock wings beating on their heads.


They now stood up and sanyu went to tie a string. When she was going for it he was following her..


Cham Cham Aaye


Mujhse Tarshaye


Tera Shaya Ched Ki Chumta

While tying she was not able to tie a knot there. He came from behind and placed his palms on her hands and tied the knot surrounding her whole body within his arms. After tying the knot they again had an eyelock and again music supported them..


Tu Jo Muskaye
Tu Jo Sharmaye
Jaise Mera Hai Khuda Jhoomta
Tu Hi Meri Barkart
Tu Hi Meri Ibaadat


He released her and placed his palms on her shoulders and packed a light kiss on her forehead for which she blushed and buried herself within his arms.


Aur Kuch Na Janu
Bas Itna Hi Janu

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu


"aise hi rehna pade puri life to koi problem nahi. Bas satisfaction hai ki meri life meri sanyu mere saath hai", saying this he tightened his grip on her. She smiled and said "aur mere liye ye world ki sabse safe jagah hai. Bilkul tumhare dil k paas."


Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu


Finally he realeased her from his grip and said
R: chalo chalo ek aur jagah jaana hai.
S: kahan??? Mandir fir dargah aur ab church le k rab ne bana di jodi shoot karoge???
R: tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe ye idea movie se mila???
S: aghhh.. Chalo..


She turned and was about to step back but he clutched her elbow and pulled her over him so that she and her palms cracked hard on his muscular chest. "8 saal tumse alag raha hun sanyu, aur nahi. Ye jhagde, tumhara gussa ye sab meri zindagi hai. Inhe firse khone ki himmat nahi hai mujheme. Isliye main har us darwaaze pe jaana chahta hun jahan tumhare saath rehne ki prayer kar sakun. Aur haan koi movie tumhare liye mera pyar badal nahi sakti", saying this he sheded a tear drop from his eye. She kissed that rolling tear from his cheek with another drop from her eye. He wiped it out and music again. This time another world was blessing them with all its blossoms..


Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi.


Soon they sat in the car and reached the mount mary church. This time they both got into the church with a number of candles. They prayed and then stood infront of jejus. Finally randhir bent into his knees and presented a bunch of roses to her with his words "i love you". She was speechless to see his action and accepted the rose. Her eyes were wet and a chain of tears fell on fresh grown roses looking like pearl shining on leaf. Looking her wet cheeks he stood up. Once again their emotion were bound within a song.


Na Kuch Poocha Na Kuch Manga
Tune Dil Se Diya Jo Liya
Na Kuch Bola Na Tola
Tune Muskura Ke Diya Jo Diya


With her husky voice she replied "i love too randhir". He hugged her tightly.


Tu Hi Dhoop Tu Hi Chaaya
Tu Hi Apna Paraya
Aur Kuch Na Jana
Bas Itna Hi Janu


Finally she released him from her warmth and at the time finishing the hug she caressed her neck and poured her love through her lips onto his. She kissed him and so did he. They kissed again and once again and after few minutes finally their lips parted.


Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karun
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta H
ai

Yaara Mein Kya Karun


There was no place of anger or revenge. It was the complete pleasure of love. They were looking like a newly married couple infont of the great almighty. They had now got all possible blessing from every such place where there was space only for love. He collided his forehead with her and smiled..


Sajde Sar Jhukta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karun
Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karun


He now tangled his fingers with hers and they filled their gaps between their fingers. They turned and music followed while they were moving out of the church.


Rab Ne Bana Di Jodii


God was the witness of their togetherness and collecting all blessing from all gods they came out of church. He was now satisfied to have the priceless treasure of his life...


To be continued...



I hope u like it... Like or dislike watevr it may b plz do cmnt as I eagerly w8 4 result..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey! Purnima di
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear
lovely, nicely n beautifully written
love it to the core
Beautifully you've described the scenario
SanDhir awww...cute couple
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
lots of love
Bushra
Edited by Param_love - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc update yr

Dey went all holy place
Sandhir dey r so adorable

I luved it to the core

Wtng for next update soon

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was awesome update they visited all religious place it was nyc :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome lovely lovely lovely fab superb.
amazing lovely fab.
love it. update asap.😃

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