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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: havi

hey nice part yaar

liked it.
update nxt part soon
geeth


thnku i iwill soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow new thread... Nvr expected ds...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi frndzz... Here I'm again wid nxt part.. Thank u 4 ur enomorous support..


Pehle se bol rahi hoon grlzzz bahut filmy hai.. Chappal mat marna..


So spare my mistakes n gere it goes...


YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - 37 - the 7 days XIV



Recap: sanyu planned a surprize for randhir of old memories. They had a romantic love making at night as well as a lovely morning together. Next...



As usual randhir gifted her something to wear. This time there was a yellow saree in it. He was waiting for her as she got late for her pallu. She finally came out adjusting her earring. He was numb to see her. She was looking like sun in that yellow saree with a golden sliveless blouse, whose hotness was felt deep inside him. He shivered when she was coming. Day by day her looks were developing to a new beauty or it was the effect of yesterday night, he could not decide. Within this he heard something bt his mind was not with him. He was still inside his dreanland. She came and stood right infront of him. "mujhse ye earring lag nahi rahi hai help karo na please", said sanyu, adjusting her earring. But those words were effectless to his ears as he was still staring her like dumb. She shook him and said.


S: randhir.. Help karo meri.
R(still inside in his dream): mann to kar raha hai sab, kuch karoon.
S: uff randhhiiirrr... Bahar aao sapno se. Lagta hai utri nahi kal raat ki.
R(finally came out): haan..aa..bb..main..bb..hoon..bb..yahin..pe..
S: haan dikh raha hai. Chalo meri earring lagaao.
R: haan waise bhi tumhe kahaan lagaana aata hai khud se.
S: o hello mr. husband mujhe puri tarah se ready karne ki responsibility tumne li thi na. Bhul gaye kya???
R: yaad hai. Wo bhi tumhe aata nai isliye.
S: uff randhir khud se kyu karoon jab tum ho.
R: haan waise bhi tumhe jab main ready karta hoon to tum zyada beautiful lagti ho.
S: to kya aj me beautiful nahi lag rahi???
R: maine aisa kab kaha, aj bhi to final touch maine hi diya hai.
S: how funny. Ab tumhari bakwaas khatam ho gayi ho to chalen???
R: 1 min


And he clutched her waist and pulled her closer. He hands covering his shoulders and took his lips near her ear. "mere sapno me bhi tum itni beautiful nahi lagti ho jitni aj lag rahi ho. Abhi jab tum baahar aa rahi thi aisa lag raha tha jaise koi golden angel meri taraf chali aa rahi hai" whispered randhir, rubbed his nose against her and released her. She was numb and lost in his eyes with music..


Tere naina bade qaatil maar hi daalenge
Tere naina bade qaatil maar hi daalenge
Qaatilana.. qaatilana adaaon se ek din is dil ko..
Hansayenge, rulayenge maar hi daalenge

Tere naina.. naina, naina!
Tere naina.. naina, naina!
Kaatilana bade naina.. naina!
Tere naina.. naina, naina!
Tere naina.. naina, naina!
Kaatilana bade naina.. naina..


Finally he broke the eyelock, smiled and wore his spectacles. She was still in the same position and blushing. He again came in front of her and said "tum chaho to blush khatam karke gaadi me baith sakti ho". She blushed even more, adjusted her hairs against her ear and sat inside the car.


He was wearing a brown jacket and pant with orange shirt. He looking as hot as a fireball released from his sun sanyu. Her jacket buttons opened while driving the car. Both were equally complementing each other just like nature and its beauty. His look was attracting sanyu in such a way that her eyes never missed any view of his. On her uncontiousness she said "wow" and suddenly he moved his seductive sight towards her. His vision made her numb and stopped the car.


Qaatilana.. kaatilana adaaon se ek din is dil ko
Hansayenge, rulayenge maar hi daalenge
Tere naina bade qaatil maar hi daalenge..


"Sanyu..sanyu", he called her two times then he shook her.
R: kahan khoyi ho???
S: tumme.
R: kya???
S: mera matlab hai in aurton ko dekh(indicating to women carrying pots on their heads) rahi thi.


She got down from car, reached the women and asked one of them to give a pot. She took a pot on her head and started dancing...


Ga ma pa sa.. sa
Ga ma pa sa.. pa
Ga ma pa sa.. sa
Ni sa re, re re


Bichance the pot fell from her head and her palms came upto her mouth. She apologized the woman. The woman said"koi baat nahi bibiji rehne do" but she denied and helped her. She puchased a pot for her and brought water in that pot for her. In this whole session the music was playing and he was enjoying her action standing cross legged. She,was carrying that pot on her head exactly like those women and she became half wet due to overflow of water from the pot on her head. He never inched his vision from her.


Shararat naina karte hain

Tadapna dil ko padta hai
O dheere-dheere haule-haule
Silsila bhi badhta hai
Teri yaadon ki garmi se
Mera lamha pighalta hai
Dard ko teri baahon mein
Bada aaraam milta hai
Bada aaraam milta hai


She came drying her face through her pallu. Her face was showing she was tired but happy. She came and stood infront of her. He stroke his finger on her face to drop down the water drop stuck on her nose.


Qaatilana adaaon se ek din is dil ko...
Hansayenge, rulayenge maar hi daalenge
Tere naina bade kaatil maar hi daalenge
Naina... kaatilana... naina re...


She blushed and smiled making her face down in shy. He cupped her face and kissed her forehead. Now she was tomato red in shy now and closed her eyes. He took her in his arms and made her sit again in car...


Tere ehsaas ki khushboo
Meri saanson mein behti hai
Tere deedar ki khwaahish
Mujhe din raat rehti hai
Tere aane ki aahat se
Machalte hain, mehakte hain
Bichhadte hain to har lamha
Teri hi raah takte hain
Teri hi raah takte hain


Kaatilana adaaon se ek din is dil ko..
Hansayenge, rulayenge maar hi daalenge
Tere naina bade kaatil, maar hi daalenge


She rested her head on his chest and he hugged her from one side and rubbed his palm on her shoulder)


R: tumhari yahi bachkaani harkaten mujhe bahut pasand hein.
S: achha to itna kyun tadap rahe the mujhe thik karne k liye???
R: are yaar... Agar nahi karta to kal raat waala candle light dinner kaise hota???
S: you mcp...(removed her head from his chest and hitting him playfully). Tumhe ye sab bahut achha lag raha hai na.
R: aaah.. Obviously what a hot, romantic and sexy night it was.. Haahhh..
S: thik hai ab se aisa kuch nahi hoga.
R(being panic): kya yaar main tumhara husband hun mera itna to haq banta hai na. Tum..


Now she had already brusted out laughing clapping her hands..
R: achha to tum mera mazak udaa rahi thi.
S: aur nai to kya??? Tumhe kya lagta hai tum hi insaan ho.
R: you


Saying this he hugged her in one hand while handling the stearing in other.


Tere naina.. naina, naina
Tere naina.. naina, naina
Kaatilana bade naina.. naina..


They finally reached the siddhi vinayak. And they both got down and went inside the temple. "tum andar chalo, main prasad ki thali leke aata hun", he said and went to the nearest shop. Meanwhile he called home and had a secret conversation with pari and renuka. Then he went inside, there she was waiting for him to go inside.


S: kahan the tum??? Kabse tumhara wait kar rahi hun. Dekho kitni dhoop hai.
R: are bhid thi na isliye late ho gaya.
S: achha chhoro aur thaali do.
R: kitni kaali hui tum??? Jaise bhi ho mere hi gale ho na puri life.(handing over the plate to her)
S: uff randhir, mandir me to kamse kam jhagdo mat.
R: oh come on darling main yahi to maangne waala hun ganpatiji se ki main lifetime tumse aise hi jhagda karta rahoon.(giggles)
S: tum kabhi nahi sudhroge na???
R: never.


Meanwhile they reached the ox of lord shiva.
S: ab inke kaan me jo tumhari wish hai maango.
R: kyun???
S: jab maa bachpan me kahaani sunaati thi tab unhone sikhaya tha. Ab question nahi aur wish karo.
R: ladki ho na, mujhe lagaa apne daily soap se sikha hai tumne.
S: ab taunt mat maaro.


They both went to both ears of ox and she closed her eyes and murmered "bhagwaanji hum dono ko hamesha saath rakhna aur pari ko khus rakhna, use kabhi bhi mere jitna struggle na karna pade". But randhir was again busy in admiring her. He was feeling a music in his surroundings...


Tu Hi To Jannat Meri
Tu Hi Mera Junnon
Tu Hi To Mannat Meri
Tu Hi Rooh Ka Sukun
Tu Hi Ankhiyon Ki Thandak
Tu Hi Dil Ki Hai Dastak
Aur Kuch Na Janu Mein
Bas Itna Hi Jaanu

Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu


When she got off from her position he allerted and closed his eyes and said as audible to her "ganpatiji isne jo bhi maanga ise de dena, meri bas yahi wish hai. Wo kya hai na main ise dukhi nahi dekh sakta aur iski wish puri nahi hui to ye dukhi ho jaayegi na. To please sambhal lena". And now they stared each other crating an eye lock.


Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai
Yaara Mein Kya Karun...



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Posted: 10 years ago
res.
unres
i'm first.🥳
soo nice cute lovely lovely lovely lovely
you describe everything so beautifuly and fably
this part was really romantic awesome superb and beautiful.
its very amazine superb. sandhir are very cute.
love it. update asap.😃
Edited by sudipto-69 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wwooww awesome
The song which u choose was too amazing


will be waiting for next update

love Mahdin ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey! Purnima di
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
love it to the core❤️
Randhir is memorize by her beauty😳
Randhir is so sweet☺️
Keep it up
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was cute and lovely.
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was cute yr

I luved it

Dey both r so adorable
They luvs each other madly

Couple made in heaven
Inki fight me b pyaar h

Wtng for next update soon

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey sweet n nice update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
disappoint...never yaar
it was soo danm nice yaar,i soo loved it
thanx for the pm dear
update soon
love
pari

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