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Amazing update
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Hey dear awesm update. 😊
Really cute n lovely!
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Hey dear awesm update. 😊
Really cute n lovely!


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lovely beautiful update
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Hi frndzzz... Back wid nxt part.. Thnx 4 ur lv n support.. I recommend ppl who read da 2nd song coz I hv explained wid many thngs wid dat..

So spare my mistakes n here it goes..

YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - 33 - the 7 days X

Recap: after reaching home randhir gifted sanyu her world of engg back. She mentioned him her priorities. They had a romantic night eith machines. In morning sanyu woke up first and prepared tea for both of them. They had a phone conversation with pari, where randhir asked sanyu not to talk with her. Next...

She stood up from her and was going to kitchen. There she got stuck with her salwar and was going to fall but he captured her by her front waist. She faced toward him and so did he and music played..

Tumse hi din hota hai..
Surmayi shyaam aati hai..
Tumse hi.. Tumse hi..
Raaste mil jaate hein..
Manzilen mil jaati hein..
Tumse hi.. Tumse hi..

She stood up and said.
S: thanks.
He nodded in a yes and she went to kitchen for making breakfast.

After preparing breakfast, she went to change. There randhir had just come out of the bathroom in his usual track pant and wet hairs. He was brushing his hairs with towel to make it dry. He was looking like a fireball. Her eyes dumbstuck to see him. She was freezed at the place she was standing. He observed this and evoked his signature smark. He came near her. Her passionate vision was still following him. He shaked his head and few water drops disturbed her by wetting her face. She knew that her absent mind was caught by him. She was confused and hisitated. This made her blush and she could not match her sight with his.

S: wo main wo..
R: haan haan. Wo tum. Kya???
S: aaa...main tumhe bulane aayi thi lunch k liye. Nai dinner k liye. Mera matlab hai breakfast k liye.
R: pehle decide kar lo tum kyun bulane aayi ho. Fir bol lena.
S: sab tumhari wajah se hua. Hamesha mujhe distract karte aaye ho. College me bhi aur ab bhi.
R: yahaan ka to samajh gaya par college me to tum mujhe distract karti thi main thodi karta tha.
S: what??? Tum paagal ho kya???
R: haan kar hi diya tha tumne mujhe. Almost. Mujhse naa baat karke. Fir class me absent reh k aur us parth se chipak k.
S: wait a minute. Abhi bhi parth se chid. Tumhe yaad hai na usne kitni help ki thi humari shaadi me.
R: haan hume dur karne me. Chipku kanhika.
S: come on mcp. 10 saal se shakal nahi dekhi uski fir bhi itni jelousy.
R: matlab tumhe time bhi yaad hai.
S: you are impossible randhir. Waise tum chahte the na ki mujhe parth kabhi na yaad aaye. Mujhe to yaad aa hi gaya. Aww kitna achha dost tha mera. So sweet.
R: haan puri factory hai uske paas.
S(making serious expression and smelling something): randhir suno na.
R: kya hua???
S: breakfast to ready hai fir jalne ki smell kahan se aa rahi hai??? (bursted out laughing)
R: you farzi..

Again after a small tom and jerry run, he lifted her in his arms and said.
R: ab dekhta hun kaise milti ho tum apne best friend se.
S: ahhhaww... Utaro mujhe mcp. Main bas joke kar rahi thi.
R: no way ab jab tak mera gussa thanda nahi ho jaata, tum aise hi rahogi.
S: pakde raho mujhe kya???
R: main tumhs zindagi bhar aise uthha sakta hun.(eyelock)

The music followed their eyelock..


Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

R: Par abhi nahi. Main abhi gussa hun.
S: to kya karne par maanoge.
R: mujhe manaane ka tarika to tumhe yaad hoga hi.
S: itni badi penalty loge mujhse???
R: mann to karta hai din me 100-200 bar charge kar hi doon.
S: you naughty mcp(hiting his chest playfully)
R: are chalo ab manaao mujhe.

She pecks a light kiss on his cheek and blushes.
R: tamaatar hein ghar mein???
S: nahi kyun???
R: mujhe khane ka mann kar raha hai. Ek kaam karta hun tumhare in gaalon ko hi kha leta hoon.
S: jungli kanhike. Utaaro mujhe niche.
R: tumhe to meri god bahut pasand hai na fir utarne ki zidd kyun kar rahi ho???
S: mujhe ready hona hai randhir please chhoro.
R: achha.

He moves and placed her wildly on the bed. He reached near her face and said.
R: tumhe to ready nahi hona aata na. Tum hi to zidd karti ho ki main tumhe ready karun.(more close to her ears and whispered). Should I???

S: nai.. main..main khud ready ho sakti hun. Hato yahaan se.

She blushed and got down. She was moving forward when he grabbed her wrist. Now she raised her eyelids and he stared her from back and sang..

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko taraashe
Meri nazar se tu zara
(deepening his sight on her)

haaye re (coming infront of her)

Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai
Tujhko dikhaaun main zara
(placing both his palms on her shoulders and looking straight to her eyes)

haaye re (bringing her infront of mirror)

Ik ankahi si daastaan daastaan
Kehne lagega aaina
(making her sir)

Subhanallah... (placing his face on her shoulder)

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah (colliding his head with hers and both closing their eyes)

Aisa hua (both opening their eyes and staring each other)

Subhanallah... (smiled)

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua
(kissing on her cheek)

Now he made her stand up.

Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena (untied her dori)

Unki dori se taarifein bun lena (unzipped her kurti)

Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon (kissed her back and she bushed)

Taareef meri hai khaamakha (facing each other)

Tohfa hai tera meri adaa (held his palm which was still placed on her shoulder)

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare
Meri zubaan se tu zara
(sliding kurti from her shulders)

haaye re (making her wear a other one)

Tujh mein chhupi si jo shayari hai (again made her sit infront of mirror)

Tujhko sunaaun main zara (making her wear earing)

haayre (combing her hairs)

Ye do dilon ka waasta waasta (fixing a bindi)

Khul ke bataaya jaaye naa (pasting gloss)

Subhanallah (sroking kaajal)...

Jo ho raha hai (making her wear paayal in one leg)

pehli dafaa hai (other one)

Wallah (chudi in one hand)

Aisa hua.. (other hand)

Subhanallah.. (making her stand and facing towards him)

Jo ho raha hai (going away from him)

pehli dafaa hai (stood still in a position)

Wallah (staring her deep)

Aisa hua.. (showing a perfect symbol through his forefinger and thumb)

She now came to him running and hugged him. The moment freezed and music stopped.
S: humari 1st valentines yaad aa gayi. Tab to try karne par bhi nahi ho raha tha aur aj jo bilkul make up artist ki tarah ready kiya mujhe.

She was dressed in a pink salwar with matching earing, bangles and bindi. Her shining lips added beauty to her look. Her paayal mixed music to the environment. The entire climate was,in their gesture.

No she released herself from his grab and tighted her shoulders.
R: har chiz me tum expert ho ye zaruri thodi hai. Tumse hi sikha par tumse zyada achhe sr kar sakta hoon. Remember na I am no1.
S: haan haan mr. rank no1.
R: tum bilkul us din jaisi lag rahi ho jab main pehli bar tumhe tumhare ghar pe mila tha.
S: tumhe abhi bhi yaad hai???
R: bilkul. Jhuta hi sahi par I love you to jaha tha tumne.
S: oho. Mcp ko bhi romance aa gaya. Achha chalo breakfast karne warna thanda ho jayega.
R: nahi pehle ek kiss baad me.

He forcefully cupped her face and was about to kiss but she pushed her.
S: mmm randhir. Stop. Your 24 hours has started dear husband.
R: what kaunse 24 hours???
S: hmm pataa tha tum bhul jaoge. Yaad nahi hai wo shart???
R: oh shit.
S: haha ab 24 hours mere.
R: are sanyu suno to. Meri kiss???
S: 24 hours baad. Aur suno 5 min me ready ho jao. Main serve karti hoon.

She was about to exit but she thought for a while and turned back.
S: waise gas khatam ho gayi hai. Par yahaan jitna fire bacha hai usse baaki ki chizen bhi aaram se ban jayengi.

Now it was his turn to blush. He did his job and she left him in the room to get ready. He came out of the room with his red hot look. His pink check shirt equally complemented his jeans as well as sanyu's wardrobe. His eyes with spectacles were proving his hotness.

He came like a perfect gentleman and sat on a chair.
S: wow!!!! Superb haan. Bilkul 20 k lag rahe ho. Bilkul fite k hawt randhir.
R: ab tum 1st year ki flawless sanyu lagogi to tumse match to karna padega.
S: mmm.. Par ek kami hai.
R: kya???
S: ye specs. Inhe utaaro.

She came to her and opened his specs.
S: ab thik hai. Lag rahe to bilkul teen.
R: tumme bhi kuch kami hai.
S: kya???
R: he moved his hands behind her back and unfold her clutch.

It created an eyelock again and music buzzed..


Lena-dena nahi duniya se mera
Bas tujh se kaam hai
Teri ankhiyon ke sheher me
Yaara sab intezaam hai
Khushiyon ka ek tukda mile
Ya mile gham ki khurchane
Yaara tere mere kharche me

Dono ka hi ek daam hai

He placed the clutchure on table and stoke his finger on face. Their vision met and again continued..


Hona likha tha yunhi jo huaa
Yaa hote hote abhi anjaane mein ho gaya
Jo bhi hua, hua ajeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Hua ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Their faced in just 2 inches distance.
R: aise to ready nahi kiya tha tumhe maine.
S: ga..garmi lag rahi thi to.
R: bhul gayi kya???
S(cupping his face through her one palm): yaad hai. Kaise bhul sakti hoon??? Tumhe mere khule baal pasand hein na.

Now making a distance.
R: maine aisa kab kaha???
S: tum kahan kuch kete ho??? Tumhari harkaton se sab guess karna padta hai.
R: achha iska matlab main kuch bolta nahi hun???
S: bolte ho. par jab bhi bolte ho ulta hi bolte ho.
R: tum jo ho sida karne k liye.
S: zyada maska mat lagaao. Achha chalo khana khatam karo. Hume nikalna hai late ho jaayega.

They finished their breakfast and went to car.

To be continued...

Edited by purnima209 - 11 years ago

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