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Posted: 11 years ago
AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY NO RESPONSE... YOU ARE ALREADY ON THE SECOND THREAD! ... -.-...
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Posted: 11 years ago
If you're expecting like Sams... then you got to be joking! I mean nooobody! NOBODY ELSE ON THIS FORUM HAS THAT KIND OF RESPONSE... don't be unrealistic yaar! PLEASE GO AND UPDATE... .it's not cool when you keep on wanting to discontinue it... I love you yaar... don't mind me getting mad... I am just hurt that you always pull this "discontinue" thing... I didn't have the response I wanted for AHSS... but I haven't discontinued it... I have put it on hold... because I am working on a TS... but other than that, I try to keep my head up and update anyways... at least for the people that actually like my work... and you are ki... YAAARRR DONT DO THIS... I will be katti with you... forever the next time you do this discontinue drama.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey plz don't discontinue it 😭 😭

We all luvs it

Plz dear continue kr loo
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey di sorry for late reply apna muja pm nahi kiya tha to muja pata nahi cala.🥺
coming to the part its superb awesome lovely amazine relly fab part tha.😃👏
and please don't discontinue di.its relly awesome ff.😭
updet asap.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

yaar... stop it... you're just seriously not cool... you can't discontinue it because "no response" ... 😭 people have school, college... and all other stuff, when they can read it they do... and I always try to comment once I have read it... yaar... please stop it and update the next part... if not update the next part... finish the ff in the next chapter and epilogue... it's too beautiful for you to stop. grrr. you're making me mad now. like legit.


REALLY NO RESPONSE DEAR... 😭😭

I M WAITING FOR THE REPLY FOR MINIMUM 3 DAYS BUT ALSO NO RESPONSE
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY NO RESPONSE... YOU ARE ALREADY ON THE SECOND THREAD! ... -.-...


BUT ALSO NO RESPONSE...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kri1

If you're expecting like Sams... then you got to be joking! I mean nooobody! NOBODY ELSE ON THIS FORUM HAS THAT KIND OF RESPONSE... don't be unrealistic yaar! PLEASE GO AND UPDATE... .it's not cool when you keep on wanting to discontinue it... I love you yaar... don't mind me getting mad... I am just hurt that you always pull this "discontinue" thing... I didn't have the response I wanted for AHSS... but I haven't discontinued it... I have put it on hold... because I am working on a TS... but other than that, I try to keep my head up and update anyways... at least for the people that actually like my work... and you are ki... YAAARRR DONT DO THIS... I will be katti with you... forever the next time you do this discontinue drama.


K I WILL CONTINUE...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutikag

pls dont discontinue it


K I WILL TRY TO NOT TO DISCONTINUE...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Hey plz don't discontinue it 😭 😭

We all luvs it

Plz dear continue kr loo


YA I WILL SOON...
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Posted: 11 years ago

HI GUYS SRY TO SAY THIS

IF AGAIN I DIDNOT GET RESPONSE THEN I WILL CONFRM TO DISCONTINUE IT I UPLOADED BECAUSE OF JUST TWO MEM...


PART 34:


They reached to car. Randhir was in the driver's seat. Sanyu came there and asked him to leave driver's seat.


S: side please.
R: kyun???
S: aaj main drive karungi.
R: what???
S: 24 hours my sweetheart.
R: uff. Ok.


She started driving the car.


R: aj kahan leke jaa rahi ho???
S: secret hai. Tumne bahut surprize kiya. Now its my turn.
R: oho badla!!!!!
S: jo chahe samajh lo. Ab lo tumhare liye.


She handed a packet to him. He unwrapped it and his eyes popped out looking a bracelet and a goggles.


R: ye kya hai???
S: uff randhir, chashme k saath apni aankhen bhi chood aaye ho kya??? Dikhta nahi goggles hai.
R: par ye kyun???
S: kyun aj tum mere husband nahi boyfriend ho. These are so cool. Please pehno na.
R: shut up sanyu. Bilkul gunda lagunga.
S: koi gunde nahi lagoge. Jo bhi ho remember your 24 hours my sweety.
R: aghhh...
S: achha chalo. I'll make you wear.


After wearing those.
S: look at the mirror. How cool!!!! Faltu me shart yaad dila k meri energy waste kiya.


They reached the INOX..
R: movie !!!!! Seriously???
S: yes. Al pure din tum mere boyfriend and only romance.
R: par yahaan???
S: Tumne bahut kuch diya mujhe. Ek din aur sahi. Please.(making a, puppy face)
R: anything for you. My love.
S: thank you so much.(She hugs him)
R: sanyu. Sab dekh rahe hein.
S: to??? Mere paas official rights hein. Meri property hai. Main kuch bhi kar sakti hun.
R: to meri kiss dedo.
S: nai(releasing him)


He brusted out laughing and she blushed.
R: mujhe apna blush dikhane k liye bulaaya hai???
S: nahi.


She grabbed his elbow and dragged him inside. There he saw the poster "YAARIYAAN".


R: sanyu hum 20 saal k fite me padhne waale teens thodi hein jo tum mujhe ye movie dikhane laayi ho.
S: remember aj hum yahi hein bf-gf.
R: hmm.. Chalo.


They sat in their respective seats and movie started. The entire time randhir was busy admiring his beautiful pearl which was twinkling like a star at every romantic scenes. Whenever those scenes continued, she tightened her grip on his arm and rested her head on his shoulder and stared him. They had 100 of eyelocks during the entire movie. Sometimes she rested her head on his chest and sometimes they placed their elbow on their armrest and placing their chins on their palms faced towards each other.


This time everyone was there to complement theie love. The music was supporting them.


Yaariyan ve... Yaariyan
Yaariyan ve... yaariyan ve..
Yaariyaan... yaa...

Dil mera hai nasamajh kitna
Besabar ye bewkoof bada
Chahta hai kitna tujhe
Khud magar nahi jaan sakaa

Is dard-e-dil ki sifarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhigaa de poori tarah (x2)

Yaariyan ve... Yaariyan...

Kya huaa asar tere saath reh kar naa jaane
Ki hosh mujhe naa raha
Lafz mere thhe zubaan pe aake ruke
Par ho na sake woh bayaan

Dhadkan tera hi naam jo le
Aankhein bhi paighaam ye de
Teri nazar ka hi ye asar hai
Mujh pe jo huaa

Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah

Tu jo mila
Toh zindagi hai badli
Main poora naya ho gaya
Hai be-asar duniya ki baatein badi
Ab teri sunu main sadaa

Milne ko tujhse, bahaane karun
Tu muskuraaye, wajah main banun
Roz bitaana saath mein tere, saara din mera

Is dard-e-dil ki sifaarish
Ab kar de koi yahaan
Ki mill jaaye isey woh baarish
Jo bhiga de poori tarah


With every bit of music, they were loosing their loosing their sense.


Gradually it reached to the kissing scene. She was busy inside the movie. He stretched his arms and moved it towards her shoulder. He rested his palms there. She suddenly got out of movie due to jerk. He placed another palm on her hand and came closer to her.


S: randhir ye kya kar rahe ho???
R: shhh.. Chup. Sirf suno. Pata hai jab tum mujhse baat nahi kar rahi aur mujhe ignore kar rahi thi, I was such frustrated ki main tumhare us parth us kamakal chomu ko laat maar k side kar doon aur sabke saamne tumhe aise chhin k le jaun.
S: achha tab to badaa bhabi bhabi kar rahe the.
R: tab main khud ye nahi manna chahta tha ki I had already started loving you.
S: to itna late kyun kiya???
R: ab bhi ye kar sakta hoon.
S: bakwaas band karo randhir, sab log hein yahaan pe.


She was about to free herself but he tightened his grip on her and pulled her closer. He lovingly placed his palm on her neck and brought her more closer. She now fekt his warm touch of lips on hers. His devine gesture made her forget everything that where they were and what they hand come to do because they were in another world where only two people and two things exist and those are love and pleasure. The pleasure of being loved, the pleasure of being with each other, the pleasure to feel someone's love and touch on themselves. They got inside the depth of love sea so that they forgot of people around them. Her hands touched his soft hairs. She was moving her fingers so lovingly that if he would not be kissing he would have slept. His hands gradually slided from her neck to her back and rubbing them lightly. They tongues tasted each and every corner of their mouths. Their lips melted more and more on each others and they broke it when they heard claps. It was the climax scene where the hero wins the race. They came into sense and noticed that there were people around them. After a few minutes of silence, he started laughing hardly.


S: hass kyun rahe ho???
R: (still laughing)
S: are batao bhi.
R: aj sach me early 20's ki feeling aa rahi hai.
S: sab kuch na tumhari wajah se hua hai. Kya zarurat thi itne logo k bich theatre me kiss karne ki???(pointing her forefinger towards him)
R: are tumne hi to kaha main tumhara boyfriend hun.
S: lekin sabke saamne kiss karne ko nahi kaha tha. Church me shaadi karne jaisa lag raha hoga. Kya doch rahe honge log???
R: are andhera hai, kisne dekha hoga.
S: mujhe kuch nahi pataa, tumhari wajah se hi sab log humare baare me pataa nahi kya kya sochenge.


Meanwhile the movie gets over. She got up and went out but was silent. He went towards her.


R: are sanyu suno to.
S: mujhe kuch nahi sunna.
She went to car and sat on driver's seat and asked him to seat. She still silent.
R: dekho sanyu tum faltu ka muh fulayi baithi ho.
S: main gussa hun tumse.
R: achha ye to bataa do hum jaa kahan rahe hein.
S: khud hi dekh lena. Huh.

After few minutes they reached the bandra beach. She did not say anything and went off from car and he went behind her for forgiveness. As she stepped her feet one by one, he followed her in equal speed and started singing for her.


Tum Ne Na Jana (she narrowed her sight)

Ke Main Deewana (turned back)

Lekar Aaya Hoon (he bent down)

Dil Ka Nazraana (presented her a bunch of red roses)

Mere Dil Ki Hai Jo Daastan (her eyes popped and she accepted the roses)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (he stretched his arms wide)

Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na (she brought her hand front and oscillated her thumb in a NO)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (she again narrowed her sight naughtily)

Tum Ne Na Jana (she turned back)

Ke Main Deewana (he was following her, she is smiling)

Lekar Aaya Hoon Dil Ka Nazrana (he comes infront of her and starts walking reverse)

Mere Dil Ki Hai Jo Daastan (he was acting like bringing out his heart from his chest)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (showing infront of her like its beating)

Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na (she moved her head in a NO again)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (she stepped forward and he is stood there and staring her)

He again followed her now.
Tum Jo Gumsum Ho (showing a teddy and making a sad face)

To Main Hairan Hoon (nodding his and teddy's head)

Yeh Raaz Kaise Tum Ko Bataun (making an unknown face)

Tum Jo Gumsum Ho (he made her sit and himself sat down)

To Main Hairan Hoon (moved his fingers in how and placed his palm on her shoulder)

Yeh Raaz Kaise Tum Ko Batao (she made a fake anger face and he removed his palm)

Tum Par Marta Hoon (again nodded)

Main Sach Kehta Hoon (lied down near sea springling some water on his face)

Maangke Dekhlo Mujhse Jaan (acted as something happened)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (she went near him and worried)

Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na (said this waking up suddenly)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (she hits playfully on his chest and hugs him tightly)

Main Bhi Hoon Tanha (placing his arm on her shoulder)

Tum Bhi Tanha Ho (he hides somewhere and she is searching)

Gar Saath Hum Ho (he came from behind tapping her shoulder)

To Socho Kya Ho (making a thinking face hitting his forefinger on his chin)

Main Bhi Hoon Tanha Tum Bhi Tanha Ho (walking together)

Gar Saath Hum Ho (forwarding his palm to her)

To Socho Kya Ho (placing her palm on his)

Jo Manzil Manzil (shaking their joined hands)

Do Deewane Dil (placing her head on his shoulder and both still walking)

Le Chale Pyaar Ka Caravan (he does same)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (changing their state and picking her up in his arms)

Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na (her nod in YES)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (both smiled)

Tum Ne Na Jana (she climbed on his back)

Ke Main Deewana (going to the sea in that position)

Lekar Aaya Hoon Dil Ka Nazrana (he fell and she on his top)

Mere Dil Ki Hai Jo Daastan (both hugged each other tightly)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (she pecked a light kiss on his cheek)

Humsafar Mujhi Ko Chunlo Na (she rested her head on his chest and he tightened his grip more)

Suno Na Suno Na Sunlo Na (both closed their eyes and felt each others presence)...

To be continued...

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