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Posted: 11 years ago
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There is a difference between having sex and making love... You showed that brilliantly. Also, even amongst couples madly in love and doing it since long, lust and seduction adds that spark... i liked how you added it here through Khushi. A woman too wants it, demands it and can take the lead as much as a man and a man can feel absolute pleasure on handing over control too. It is not about power play in the bedroom. It is only about loving and being loved. Don't your Arnav Khushi just make me want to sigh!

This compatibility of theirs reflects in all aspects of their relationship, such as their open communication and understanding. About that break Arnav wants to take... He spoke so openly about it with Khushi, the connection to his mother... and how well she understood the rest... Seriously nazar na lagey 😳

After all the serious updates over the last couple of weeks, I was kinda scared for this one. Now i realised i was being stupid 😛

All the best to Aman 😊

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Edited to add:

The thing I wanted to mention first... I loved loved loved how you made the distinction between loving a girl and making love to a girl. I mean I loved Arnav's thoughts about Khushi and her maturity in physical and emotional sense and his changing perceptions of her 👏
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Such an arshilicious chp..loved it!!
It was needed actually!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
These two not only love each other but understand each other so much even without much said between them. I loved how Arnav made her take the lead and is seeing her as a woman and not a girl.
Looks like some separation time for both (again), but I think it will be good for Arnav to think over things. Much needed break for him and I hope this will be Khushi's last field trip.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a hot chapter, loved it! I'm glad Khushi is starting to feel more confident and powerful in all aspects of her life!
So glad that Arnav is taking that trip and trying to figure out who he is, for himself :) and it's so sweet that he's going to a place his mother loved
I love both of their love for each other, it is so pure and selfless <3
Can't wait for the next one!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Trust Khushi to only think of food while all Arnav could think of were other pressing issues !!! 😆
But loved the way her whole attitude changed when she realized the seriousness of the situation ... 😳
and took charge completely surprising Arnav completely ...

Reminded me of the time when he was thinking that his girlfriend still studying in college and is perhaps too young for him ...
"When had she gone from happy to worried to downright frantic, he wondered. "It'll work out, Khushi" he patted her back awkwardly. These were the times it hit him that his girlfriend was still in college. It wasn't a pleasant feeling..." am sure after today he will never think of her as too young for him ! 😆

"Finally, Miss Gupta is thinking about things other than food."

"And Mr. Raizada is finally looking at my face instead of my breasts." was her fitting reply... 😆


Her understanding his need to get away and that too to a place which his mother was so fond of ...

to be on his own to introspect ... to find direction ...

Truly a match made in heaven ...


Thank you Twiggy ... fabulously written chapter ...

Edited by Kishmish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Kishmish

Trust Khushi to only think of food while all Arnav could think of were other pressing issues !!! 😆

But loved the way her whole attitude changed when she realized the seriousness of the situation ... 😳
and took charge completely surprising Arnav completely ...

Reminded me of the time when he was thinking that his girlfriend still studying in college and is perhaps too young for him ...
"When had she gone from happy to worried to downright frantic, he wondered. "It'll work out, Khushi" he patted her back awkwardly. These were the times it hit him that his girlfriend was still in college. It wasn't a pleasant feeling..." am sure after today he will never think of her as too young for him ! 😆

"Finally, Miss Gupta is thinking about things other than food."

"And Mr. Raizada is finally looking at my face instead of my breasts." was her fitting reply... 😆


Her understanding his need to get away and that too to a place which his mother was so fond of ...

to be on his own to introspect ... to find direction ...

Truly a match made in heaven ...


Thank you Twiggy ... fabulously written chapter ...


Thanks, Kishmish 🤗

And I love the quote in your signature! Doesn't it also go well with PJ ? 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshi67

Purity, patience and perseverance overcome all obstacles. All great things must of necessity be slow.
- Swami Vivekananda

This for me encapsulates your Arnav and Khushi.
Hoping Arnav visits his Ashram there to truly have the quiet around him to help him introspect.


The quote is perfect.. thank so much for sharing it 😊

And your judgement on Arnav and Khushi is also profound :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vgedin


Thanks, Kishmish 🤗

And I love the quote in your signature! Doesn't it also go well with PJ ? 😳


Perfectly Twiggy ...
"What is success? It is being able to go to bed each night with your soul at peace" 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very good chapter and congrats on the new thread.
I'm glad Anjali decided to go to the concert in London. She needs a break. I hope Payal and Akash can mend their relationship before she leaves.

I liked Khushi's and Arnav's SMS talk. Very direct. She took charge in the bedroom also. Good for her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sizzling chapter but the way you wrote it, it seemed so much more than just plain old s*x. The relationship that these two share acts as a perfect foil for Aakash and Payal's relationship. Their relationship is almost ideal. One that thrives on compatibility and communication, with these two elements working in perfect sync and continually enhanced by mutual love and respect.

With both couples facing the prospect of an impending separation, their reactions appear diametrically opposite too. Perhaps one is secure in the knowledge of an emotional closeness which the other couple finds lacking.



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