Polemic Jackanapes#3: Complete [NOTE + BLOG LINK Pg69]3rd Jan

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

beautiful update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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lakraj80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Beautiful update! Thanks for the pm.

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headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Hey Twiggy... Yet again a very touching update wherein the two protagonists are so aware of each others wants, desires, pain and relief...

A boon for each other.. Just love to see tis couple bask in love of each other...

Kanyakumari... Just been there 2 weeks ago and back !!! It will be really great to read about it in your universe(If you decide to write about the trip at all).. Cant wait to read further...

Love your writing !!

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shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Beautiful update Twiggy :) I love the understanding between this couple, their togetherness, wow. Thanks for the PM :)

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Shamz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Beautiful update give me the butterflies 😳

Edited by hiuytlm - 11 years ago

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janu

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Hot and steamy

All along I was as impatient as Arnav for the update ..

How could khushi be so understanding at such an young age...I really sometimes envy her even though it's just a fictional character...

Somethings are needed to be sorted out in solitude and hope Arnav finds his peace or whatever he is looking for.

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Mirabell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Well Twiggy

Nice followup this time after that cliff-hanger in your last update. :) It was heartwarming to read the comfort and ease that Khushi and Arnav have with each other, both in terms of their physical intimacy and just pain old everyday-run-of-the-mill-kinda-stuff. :) They seem so wise in terms of how they are willing to give each other the benefit of doubt... reminds me of Meera's mention of "soul mates" in The Emerald Isle Tales..Those two sea gulls flying together... :)

Kanyakumari.. what a lovely place to visit... Land's end always has more questions than answers.. But Arnav is seeking answers of his own.. and Khushi, albiet quiet, has doubts.. I look forward to your update.. :)

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Wow, Twiggy! That was so irresistibly hot and sizzling! Felt as if it was their first time, both in each other arms beautiful!

Their bond makes me feel so proud of them, it's admirable and I just love how well they understand each other without words too. Fabulous writing Twiggy, just fabulous!

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arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

I am in love with this couple😊😳. They are just perfect together. The beginning was sizzling hot Twiggy😉😳. They were on fire and the conversation after that was very heartwarming😊. Khushi can understand Arnav so well and his desire to take break from didn't bring any insecurities in Khushi's mind..And his reason to visit Kanyakumari was just very touching. Loved the update as usual 👏

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Whoa! What a chapter for all the Arnav and Khushi lovers out here, like me! It was seriously pure bliss - to see such love and passion between the two was quite amazing. I absolutely LOVED it, from Arnav's frustration, to Khushi's oblivion, and of course all the way to the Khushi's boldness to their overall intimacy. You truly did so much justice to how you wrote that scene out👏 That was seriously how a love scene should be written - it exuded all the passion and chemistry between two lovers without having a hint of something grotesque or tackiness!

So Arnav has made up his mind to go away - I really wish for his sake, and also for the sake of his relationship with Khushi, he is able to achieve whatever it is that he wants from going there.

Thanks for the lovely chapter - looking forward to reading more now😊

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