New SS: Will you teach me to love again?Note: Page-24 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
I have read you since you first posted your stuff here!
And I have seen you growing!
This SS is an example of it!
This is your best work till now!
I am looking forward for this SS!
Work hard and give your best! :)
Love you,
Shefali :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Res

UnRes!!!!!!!!

Darling take a hug from me... tight wala hug🤗

this is why I literally became stalker for your stories... stopped writing mine because wanna read ur update first...

such a beautiful piece... Aww... how cutely Sanyu convinced Pihu... so lovely... Randhir is totally satisfied by her...

then hilarious Saree part.. lol 😆 not able to control my laugh when she was jumping feeling tickles... & their discussion... Poor Randhir, because of Sanyu's stupidity in his first night & honeymoon waited... Aww... lovely...

last emotional part... no words...

sweetheart tell me how could you be so perfect?? thank you so much for writing such beautiful piece with awesome idea...

Now will start writing mine... bohot lambi comment haina... kya karu... ur post always make me write more & more...

Love you jaan,
Mickey


Thanks a lot dear
Actually this time i am in no hurry to jump on romance, i wanted to sow her bond with pihu,
i wanted to keep her innocence there as well as to start a new bond with Randhir too... even out of irritation,...s well as wanted to explore their past too a bit...
so the outcome is this one...
thanks for loving...main soch rhi hun, next week se you will be inactive to mera kya hoga yhan pe...kaun pdega mere crap ko...
yaar jaldi wapis ana, will miss you a lot...
Now update yours, am waiting...

Love
Reet..


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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
it's so perfect...sanyu is so childlike but at the same time she is so matured...randhir is reserved but emotional too...i must say u have handled these two characters amazingly...eagerly waiting for ur next update
Edited by randhirsanyu014 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
awww...this was super cute didu...
loved it
the way she handled the situation ..super cute...
and then i m happy at randhir he is ready to give her a chance and admires the way she is...
really glad that you're keeping it simple and not jumping to much drama...
really loved the gradual way of handling the stuff
its sucha sensitive story...
really you write so well... :)
hugsss... and love


Edited by Gunseerat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra

I have read you since you first posted your stuff here!

And I have seen you growing!
This SS is an example of it!
This is your best work till now!
I am looking forward for this SS!
Work hard and give your best! :)
Love you,
Shefali :)


Thanks a lot dear
Personal side My own favourite is the broken soul my first dark story
anyways thanks for loving and hope you will love my future work too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: randhirsanyu014

it's so perfect...sanyu is so childlike but at the same time she is so matured...randhir is reserved but emotional too...i must say u have handled these two characters amazingly...eagerly waiting for ur next update


thanks for liking the characters dear
will update tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

awww...this was super cute didu...

loved it
the way she handled the situation ..super cute...
and then i m happy at randhir he is ready to give her a chance and admires the way she is...
really glad that you're keeping it simple and not jumping to much drama...
really loved the gradual way of handling the stuff
its sucha sensitive story...
really you write so well... :)
hugsss... and love



thanks a lot for loving dear ya, she is both mature for pihu and kido for Randhir...you know...😆
she knows how to handle pihu but doesn;t know how to deal with randhir...
yes romance is a way away pehle kuch understanding to ho dono mein, abhi to he is too old , sadu for her
and she is too childish for him...so love is no where yet...
And i am waiting for your updates
Love
Reet

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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
wowww... wat an update
m deeply in love with this story😊
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
wow so beautiful one
sanyu and pihu is so cute so as sanyu and her sis
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey, it was awesome! Randhir helped sanyu to wear a saree! That's great! And pihu is so cute! Hey, continue soon! Keep writing! Love you! :)

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