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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

reet this is just simply fab

Sanyukta is randhir's jiju😲😲
the whole story is gonna be something different and interesting


Rahsi one corrcetion dear
Rnahidr is Sanyu's jiju ...😆
ya, concept is different so we can think story will be a bit different,.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Param_love

Hey! Reet

Not at all boring dear
Lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely update👏⭐️
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
Love it😳
Keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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thanks a lot dear
will update soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: randhirsanyu014

it's not boring dear...i love it...the concept is so strong...pls update soon


thanks a lot dear
will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: coolishparul

loved the first chapter
it was not boring rather I liked it


thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

i almost forgot to let you know...

the title...
is so perfect...
the innocence and the feelings it holds towards the story is really emotional...
this journey is going to fantastic... :)
u rock...
please create your corner for writings naa... :)


yaar i don;t know how to create decorative corner...
Thanks for liking the title...
and i am expecting your updates...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: reet21


yaar i don;t know how to create decorative corner...
Thanks for liking the title...
and i am expecting your updates...


shall i do it for you??? didu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Gunseerat


shall i do it for you??? didu


will be waiting dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Thanks or the overwhelming response guys...i am really touched ...

Just hope you all will love this chapter too...

The New Life

It was morning Seven AM when Sanyukta woke up finding herself closer to Randhir who was still stuck to his extreme right corner, but it was Sanyukta who had moved closer in night, her legs almost on the legs of Randhir, while her one arm was on Randhir's chest, she immediately jumped away from him shouting Oh My God...

Kya...kya huya? Randhir got up immediately not knowing why she jumped... what happened? Why are you so upset? He looked at her...

N...nothing...she sighed relaxing he was sleeping deep...so he didn't know she had moved in his area... Area? Yes, she had divided their areas mentally...a bad dream...she muttered...

Hummm...fine...saying he got up from bed checking time and moving towards balcony cum terrace for his daily routine exercise, while Sanyukta went to washroom to get ready...Soon she came back after bath wearing her usual Kurta Patiala drying her hair.

When Pihu entered the room...Good Morning Sweetu Mom...she kissed Sanyukta...

Good morning jaan... Sanyukta too kissed her back...

Then Pihu went to Randhir...Good morning Sweetu Papa...

Good morning sweetheart... Randhir stopped exercise and hugged her picking into arms...why are you not ready for school by now?

Umm...aaj school nahi jana... Pihu made a puppy face...

But why? Randhir caressed her cheek...

Aaj Pihu mom ke sath ghar pe rhegi aur mom se khoob sari batein kregi...She made puppy face again...

No Pihu...bad habit... school jao, aa ke apni mom se baat karna...Randhir tried to make her understand.

No...she started crying when Renuka knocked at door and Sanyu opened it...

Aunty good Morning... Sanyukta smiled...

Good morning beta, but not Auntie now...call me Mom, as Randhir calls...

Yes Auntie...oh... Mom... Sanyukta smiled...

I have come to take Pihu, aj jid kar rhi hai school nahi jana...Renuka smiled...

Nahi nahai nahi... Pihu was still shouting, I will not go to school...

No Pihu. Randhir was also angry now... just go to your school...

Pihu started crying and ran from Randhir's arms, when Sanyukta picked her and made her sit in her lap...

Kya huyaa sweetu Pihu ko? Sanyukta too imitated Pihu making puppy face...

Mom... Pihu sobbed...ye sab gande hain, kal meri mausi meri mom bni aur mujhe mom se itni batein karni hai...gande pappa aur gandi dadi kehte school jao...

Esa nahi bolte betu... Sanyu hugged her..ok, Pihu aaj school nhi jayegi...

Sachi sweetu mom...Pihu jumped with joy and hugged her showing thumb to her papa and dadi while Randhir was giving killing looks to Sanyukta ...

Han, Pihu will not go to school...fir kya huya, aaj Pihu ki dancing competitor Avni Pihu se jyada dance seekh jaygi aur teacher ki favorite ban jayegi...hena?

Are...Pihu looked at Snayu...ye to maine socha hi nahi...

And Aaj to Pihu ke Friend Aarish ka birthday bhi to hai...Sanyu made a puppy face, fir Wo jo Sanya hai, use sabse pehle birthday wish karke uski best friend ban jayegi...Sanyu nodded smiling ...

Pihu thought for a moment and shouted...Shanti auntie(Pihu's nanny)...jaldi se mujhe ready kro...us avni aur Sanya ki to main chutti kar dungi... But mom, you promise na, fir se mausi nahi bnogi? She looked at Sanyukta cutely...

Sanyukta cupped her small face in her hands kissing on her forehead...Pihu, I am your mom forever baby... I love you...

Love you too mom... School se aa ke na, Pihu aur mom hamari favorite butter scotch ice cream khayenge...saying Pihu ran from there...

Seeing everything , a small satisfactory smile appeared on Randhir's face...

Sanyu beta, only you handle her with so much love, I think could Vidhushi be ever able to if she would be at your place... Renuka wiped her lonely tear...

Jo huya nahi uske bare mein kya sochna auntie...oh sorry mom...Sanyukta smiled while Renuka was about to leave...

Han Snayu, get ready wearing red Saree from cupboard, aj muh dikhayi ki rasam hai aur main aur tumhare papa abhi mandir ja rhe hain, will be back in one hour, till then ladies will also come...

But mom... Sanyu tried to speak but before she could complete Renuka had left hurridly...

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Mom... Mom.. Sanyu ran towards gate, by then she saw Renuka leaving with Harsh...

Oh no... Sanyukta held her forehead in her hands...

What happened? Randhir stepped closer...

Mom asked me to wear Saree... Sanyukta spoke without looking...

To? Randhir picked his clothes from cupboard to get ready ...

I...I don't know how to wear it...Sanyukta spoke hesitatingly...

You don't know, how to wear saree? Randhir looked at her in shock...

Is mein itna shocked expression dene ki kya jarurat hai? Did you ever see me in saree? She muttered...

You were getting married, you could have learnt... Randhir spoke... didn't Anju mom told you how to wear?

Do mom wear or Renuka mom, Anyone from them wear sarees? Sanyukta looked at Randhir, all of them wear suits...aur mujhe to waise bhi saree pasand nahi hai... but what to do now...she held her head again in her hands sitting on bed...

Ok, don't be so sad...may i... Randhir spoke hesitatingly... may I help you? I know...

You know? Sanyukta looked at his face as if she has seen as alien...

Ya...he spoke hesitatingly... Ankita loved saris na, that time, I used to help her to wear...

Ok... Sanyukta nodded, I will just change and come saying she went to washroom, changed in petticoat and blouse coming back to room hesitatingly trying to cover her curves, but Randhir didn't pick his eyes even once to look at her...

Sanyukta coughed slowly to gain his attention... without looking at her, he picked red sari from bed and for a second got numb thinking, he will have to move closer to her...

He closed his eyes and took a long sigh...doesn't matter...all he thought and moved closer still looking away from her face, not even once their eyes met...

Even Sanyukta was feeling comfortable around him now...

Randhir opened the layers of sari and handed her telling her how to tuck around her waist...but Sanyukta being a bit more stupid than he expected made a mess of it...

Demn...he pulled it from her hands and himself started tucking around her waist trying completely to touch her bare part...but soon his fingers brushed her back...

Hehehe... Sanyukta giggled...and jumped back...all the sari, he had tucked got messed again...

He gave her irritated looks and started again...

Hehehe...she giggled again jumping back...

Stop this nonsense Sanyukta...Randhir shouted... Behave properly...

Sanyukta just became numb at his shouting...she stood there like a statue...Randhir sighed and started tucking again.

Ek saree to bandhni nahi ati, Pihu ko kya sikhayogi? He muttered which could not go unlistened by Snyukta...

Pihu ko ek sari bandhni hi sikhani hai kya? She spoke angrily looking at his face...

Randhir had no reply to her question, he knew his allegation was stupid enough, he slowly lowered his eyes...

Apse badiya handle karti hu Pihu ko, abhi dekha nahi kya? She muttered in her mouth... Pihu ko Pyar se mnao to sab maan jati hai... you know just one language, language of anger...pta nahi itna gussa khan se bhara huya hai... I still don't understand what did Anki di liked in this man? Angry young man...

Will you stop muttering now? It's annoying... Randhir spoke irritated...jo kehna hai saaf saaf kho...

Fighting but still Sanyukta was following his orders to hold pleats as he was saying...

Apko to meri har baat buri lgt hai, Sanyukta whispered... Pehle bhi di ko mere against bolte rehte the, aur ab bhi main hi galat hun...

Tumhari di ko tumhare against? Randhir looked at her face, their eyes met for second and she lowered her eyes...

Aur nahi to kya, you never liked me from the day you both got married, Sanyukta spoke in annoying mode...

Oh really, so how would have I felt when on mine and Ankita's first night, at one AM in the night, you called Anki to ask what should you wear on our pag Phera? He looked at Sanyukta...

Sanyukta chuckled at his question...Wo to...mujhe adat thi har baat di se puchne ki and I was unable to decide, so I called her...simein galat kya hai, she was my sis, I could call her any time...

Ya, you could call her any time...Randhir sighed setting her sari ...and what about our honeymoon to Singapore, you used to make international calls to her for minimum two hours daily just telling her what you ate, what you drank, what you wore, how your friends fought with you and deciding what to do next day...and I was sitting there like fools waiting for her to get free form your stupid blabbering...

To kya huya... I was missing di so badly, for the first time in life , we were so much away from each other...aur to aur mera hi bill aa rha tha, apka to nahi... Sanyukta spoke irritated...

Bill? Ahan? Randhir looked at her... who had paid that mobile bill of Rupees seventy thousand?

Wo to...you know...Sanyukta looked helplessly at him...means that was paid by?

Tumhari di ki ek hi to tension thi...uski Sanyu...Randhir shrugged his shoulders...how many times, due to you, I had to sleep in guest room? Because madam ko to whan darr lagta tha? He taunted Sanyukta...

Wo to mujhe di ke pass sona hota tha...is liye... she blurted suddenly... Randhir gave her 'I know you well" looks...

Ok...ok...i am sorry for all that...but it doesn't mean I am that stupid... Di mujhse pyar hi itna karti thi, I could not... a tear rolled over Sanyukta's face...I could not stay away from her for long...suddnely she had turned quite serious...she used to take care of my smallest needs...kept me so much pampered always...

Randhir was also turned serious as Ankita's discussion...ya, she loved everyone so much... Aaj agar wo yhan hoti to... shayad life kuch aur hoti...meri bhi aur Pihu ki bhi...

I can't take di's place ever in your life...nor I want to... Sanyukta looked at Randhir who too had tear in his eye... But I promise, Pihu will never feel void of her mother... I will love her a much as Di loved me...She smiled in tears...

Ya... Randhir too smile din tears..i know...you will...otherwise you didn't need to sacrifice your life like this...their eyes met together but this time neither Sanyukta lowered her eyes nor Randhir...because they both were sharing unknown bond this time...bond of pain...of losing someone, who was most loved person by them both...

Its...it's done...saying Randhir left and Sanyukta too went to hall for the guests coming to meet her...

Edited by reet21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Res

UnRes!!!!!!!!

Darling take a hug from me... tight wala hug🤗

this is why I literally became stalker for your stories... stopped writing mine because wanna read ur update first...

such a beautiful piece... Aww... how cutely Sanyu convinced Pihu... so lovely... Randhir is totally satisfied by her...

then hilarious Saree part.. lol 😆😆😆😆 not able to control my laugh when she was jumping feeling tickles... & their discussion... Poor Randhir, because of Sanyu's stupidity in his first night & honeymoon waited... Aww... lovely...

last emotional part... no words...

sweetheart tell me how could you be so perfect?? thank you so much for writing such beautiful piece with awesome idea...

Now will start writing mine... bohot lambi comment haina... kya karu... ur post always make me write more & more...

Love you jaan,
Mickey

Edited by amulbaby06 - 11 years ago

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