Beautiful Mistake | TR Two Shot

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yoyoaishwarya

@yoyoaishwarya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

awesome bakwas actually , tum roj bakwas hi likha karo dear hume use read karne mein bada accha lagta hai , vaise bakwas mein hi tumne amazing ts likh diya hai, to plz update 2nd part soon

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gursharn

@Gursharn3010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

its really beautiful mistake :)

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skfirdous

@skfirdous

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wow cute update
loved it
update soon

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princess1926

@princess1926

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing start...
Totally loved it...
Love at 1st sight.. Aww...
Update soon

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Monika Saxena

@monikasaxena05

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

superb update

aww...its seriously a cute mistake

waiting 4 next update

continue soon!!

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dimple

@dimple_vrinda91

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow.. rey ko hua LUV AT FRST SIGHT INTERESTING.. TAANI'S SAAREE WAS BEAUTIFUL
NXT PART JALDI PLZ

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

it was nice..
i was shocked rey's mom agreed so soon..

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CrazyForAmar

@CrazyForAmar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome concept 😊

Amazing part

The way u have written it is beautiful.

U say - Pta nahi maine kya likha hai but kuch toh bakwass likhi hai. agar thoda bhi pasand aaya ho toh press the "Like" button.

I dont know why u discourage yourself so much,

U r a great writer and a great thinker

U have given a perfect title to the story.

I just loved it.

Keep writing di.

Thanks for the PM and update soon