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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
wow shannel.

awesome.
loved the way you wrote it.

the story is new, unique and really intriguing.

i love the way you have showcased the lovely romance between Rey an Kriya.

and now coming of the third person is sure going to add to the spice.

amazing once again and will be looking forward to see you update


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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
nice update
really love it
kr moment
taking from coll fire exit
n too the beach
all are beautifully writeen
n it was feeling really good while reading it
sw ko manana padega
ek se ek palns aate he isse
sab ko aalg kar dia
taaki kr ko time mile ek dusre ke sath
n then
in last i think taani ki entry hui
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

NOTE FOR EVERYONE THAT'S CONFUSED ABOUT ROHAN.+is also part of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Oke so since most of you are confused about rohan I'll tell you all.

Yes rohan is kriya's bhai. When kriya's mom was pregnant of kriya, kriya her dad cheated on her mom. A few days after kriya turned one year the woman with who he had an affair with had a baby (rohan) that's why kriya's dad left kriya and smriti. When rohan just turned 16 he died in a car accident. Archana was a good friend off him so she took rohan with her and legally adopted him as her son. But still both were living as brother and sister. Archana and rohan both knew about kriya. Archana was aslo a good friend of kriya's maasi. And thus she found out about kriya. Rohan and kriya met and became best of friends. Rohan knew everything about her. He was just waiting for the right day to tell kriya that he's her brother.

Just to clear the age of them.

Rohan: 20 soon 21

Kriya:21 soon 22

Rey: 21 soon 22

Shreya: 17 soon 18+ st. Louis.

Swaron:21

Part 7

A few weeks went by, kriya's maasi knew about the marriage and was very happy for kriya. kriyaansh used to romance and kiss eachother openly in front of the gang. The gang had no problem with it at all. The exams were over, all passed the exam.

It was the day after the musical.(same as the show) but those people didn't gave them the affiliation. The gang decided to drop it. They have done enough for the affiliation. They will open their dance academy without it. Kriya also is not part of NYDA anymore.

The only thing left for them was rose day. The party was that night.

After that their vacation will start kriyaansh both received a lot of roses. Rey was waiting in the living room for her to get ready. When kriya walked in he was mesmerised. She looked beautiful.

Kriya:

Rey:

Ah+shr: kriya/bhabhi you're looking beautiful.

Kr: thank you. That's when rey came and hug her from behind.

Rey: of course she's beautiful, make-up does wonders. Warna without make-up she'd look like the monster I see every morning I wake up.

Kr: what do you mean monster??!! Do I look like a monster?? She did a little more of her drama to make him say sorry. But rey knows better as she did this a lot. First she would react shocked then act as if she's about to cry and then give him stupid tasks to make up to her. Once he had to do 50 push-ups while singing a song with her laying on his back and the other time he had to go to the rehearsals with lipstick on his lips and do the whole dance routine on heels. The gang laughed at him and she even filmed it. He's so not falling for that again.

Rey: yes baby you are. And if you are ready can we please go?

Kr: fine as she understood that rey won't fall for her tricks anymore.

Both said goodbye and went. When they reached they went to the gang and all were praising eachother. The guys went to get something to drink for their girls when they came back the host spoke.

H: ladies and gentlemen it's now time to announce rose day king and queen of this year. He was handed an envelope while rey went to stand next to kriya with one hand around her waist so did swaron and some other couples.

H: And the rose day king and queen of this year are... one of the most cutest couples and former rose day king and queen 2 years ago KRIYA AND REY... Everyone cheered for them while they went up on stage.

H: will you both please do the honours of the opening dance? Kriyaansh nodded went down and did their dance.

Almost every girl was jealous at kriya for having rey as her boyfriend and boys were jealous of rey for having kriya. Later all joined and everyone had an amazing time.

Next day they all went to bharat's garage as they decided that since he doesn't use it anymore they could make their own studio there.

They separated in groups and got to work kriya sharon and aashi where painting the girls changing room she only had to paint one corner now but couldn't reach it. She looked back for the ladder but found aashi using it. She tried again. Rey walked bye and saw her struggling. He came and lifted her from behind. She knew that it was rey and finished her work.

When he putted her down both were lost in eachother rey was about to kiss her when he was pulled away by the boys.

Sw: rey control yaar.

Rey: why? it's not the first time that we kiss in front of you.

Sw: I know but..

Kr: leave it baby swayam is feeling a bit shy.( yes everyone by now got to know the bold side of kriya.

Sw: oye let me finish na. you know what rey chose the right name for you. Baatcutter.

Kr: oh realy.

Sw: yes realy

Kr: swayam youuu... And she started running after him. The whole gang sat down watching them and laughing. After a few rounds both pluffed down on the floor both on each side of rey.

Sw: rey your baatcutter has a lot of energy.

Rey: iknow and if you say baatcutter one more time na then see what I'll do to you. Only I can call her that. He said hugging kriya tight.

Sw: getting possessive and all haan. Chal theek hain I won't as I love my life.

That same night kriyaansh had a fight and like always rey went to sleep on the couch as the didn''t want to sleep toghetter after a fight.

Kriya was in bed but couldn't fall asleep.

Kr:rey...

Rey (Sleepy voice): I'm coming. And he slipped in to bed next to her, and then went to sleep hugging her. It always went like this. They had a fight rey would sleep on the couch and after a while kriya would call him to sleep while hugging her as they both are now used to sleep like that.

Next morning both were laying in each other's arm talking sweet nothings

Not wanting to get out of bed.

Kr: rey we should get up it's getting late.

Rey: baatcutter please just a few minutes more.

Kr: you said that for one hour now.

Rey: okay what will I get if I get up now??

Kr: I'll think about it now go. They both got up rey went to the bathroom while kriya made the bed when he came rey and hugged her from behind.

Rey: tum bhi ao na.

Kr: rey if you don't go right know you will get nothing.

Rey: I'm going. They both got ready and went down. when they got down theysaw everyone (family and gang) sitting downstairs.

All: suprissseee.

...

Oke that turned out realy bad and sorry for the short update.

I just wanted to update before my vacations are over.and I have no idea when I will update next but my first month I just want to focus on my studiesso please understand.

Like and comment

Promo for future:

Kriyaansh: OH MY GOD SERIOUSLY.

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Sha: swayam rey... kriya is drunk.

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H: and the winners are...

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Person: Taani tum.

Edited by .ShannelArsha. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
nice update
chota tha par acha tha
so rohan kria ka step brother hai
promo is so interesting. looks like alot of drama is on the way

waiting for next part...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
it was great.
and yes a bit short but fine.
i enjoyed it.

and you do take your studies seriously this time pari.
and i'll wait till you update next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Nice update...update soon..i wanna read abt kriya drunk...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Awesommm...
Luvd d update...
Aww they sleep widout each othr...
Awesom...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
res
unres
awesum update
cute one
especialy when they fight n decide not to sleep together bt after sum time kria call's him
Edited by Meghna_kriyansh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Kya yaar Ittu sa update 😭 this is not done 😭 I want to read more 😔 Bt study comes first so its ok next update sooonnn nd big bala ok Nhi toh dekh lena 😡 Btw Updte was adorable Kriyansh r really bold haa 😉 Rohan is kria's step brother 😳 Did she knew about this ? Any i love their bed room sceen ❤️ its Beautifulll Plsss give long update Thank u for the PM 😳 loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome update...

they are too adorable..

Amazing..

loved it..

really interesting precap..

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