DDBEDS- KRIYAANSH FF updated part 10 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey guys long time ago sorry for taking so long was very busy

Ooh and in part 7 I said rohan was kriya her stepbrother I meant half-brother.

Here u go J

Part 8

All: supriiisseee.. everyone was down stairs and there were a lot of bags and suitcases in the corner.

Rey: guys yeh sab?? What are all the bags for?

Shar: because u idiot we're going on a vacation.

Kri: kya?? Vacation? When, where and why?

Shar: or flight is in 5 hours ,we're going on a vacation because we deserve it , we worked very hard and because next year will be our last one of college this vacation is 3 months long.

Rey: I get that part but where are we going and why did everyone know axcept us?

Shar : because it was a surprise and we're going to...

All: MIAMI

Kriyaansh: OH MY GOD SERIOUSLY???

All: YESSS!! Everyone was jumping of excitement

Rey: but wait wait guys.. whose idea was it.

Swa: ur parent's

Rey: what?? He looked at his dad

Ran: haan beta.. a few days ago me and ur mom talked to everyone's parents and we decided it would be a good idea if you guys take a break from everything

Rey: dad u guys are the best he hugged his dad

Ran: now u and kriya go pack all ur stuff and ahana archana please make some food for these hungry kids na ..

Ah+arch: yah yah we'll go

(oke m skipping a whole part now continue reading)

They reached Miami around 7p.m.and directly went to their hotel.

At hotel Fontainebleau Miami beach.(I REALLY WANT TO GO THERE!!)

They stood in front of the hotel

All: wow

Swa: guys let's check in

Everyone was sitting in the lobby while ReYam went to check in.

Rec: hello how may I help u?

Sw: we have a reservation for 3 suits on the name of Reyaansh Singhania.

Rec: yes that's right here are ur room keys and I will call the person who will escort you to ur rooms and will help u with everything u guys need during ur whole 3 months stay...

Reyam went to the gang and they were talking for five mins when a girl came to them.

her outfit:

G: hello guys

The whole gang except kriya was in shock

Gang: TAANI??!!??

Ta: yah guys mai. And i will be helping u guys during ur entire 3 month stay.

Sw: lekin taani ur husband(sorry don't know his name)?? And how did u came here when did u came here? How did u even get a job here?

Ta: Bhai chill.. I came here last month because I wanted to be independent and a friend of mine told me she could get a job for me here so I accepted and now I'm here.. bhai dad didn't told u?? he died in a car accident.

Sw: what??!! No dad didn't told me. Ur oke na taani?

Ta: yah bhai I'm perfectly fine.

By now everyone was still busy trying to come out of the shock but kriya... she was having a lot on her mind right now..rey saw kriya in deep thoughts so he just squeezed her hand to assure her that he loves her and he isn't affected by taani. Kriya now also calmed down a bit. Taani was now standing in front of kriya.

Ta: hey ur kriya right? I heared a lot about u, it's so nice to meet u. She forwarded her hand to kriya which she accepted and said

Kr: yah same here.

Ta: oke guys let me all show u guys ur rooms. Please follow me.

in the first room: nil, Vicky, amar, bharat.

In the second room: aashi, simmi, rinni.

In the last room: Swaron& Kriyaansh.

the rooms

all the rooms are the same only add another bedroom in it.

...

more of hotel fontainebleau:

lobby:

bar(belongs to the lobby):

lounge:

spa:

raintunnel (part of the spa):

pool side:

video about the hotel:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=scBTNL0tKyo

...

Short chappy again sorry for that and for updating after so long. Very busy times. I hope u liked it.

And MD take this as a early bday gift as I will be too busy to work on a bday thread for u.. shorry.

Like and comment!

xxShannel

Edited by .ShannelArsha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update!!!
LOVED IT SOOO MUCHHH.
CONTINUE SOONNN
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesum chappy shan...
But y did u mentioned about the thread...?
Now spy queen will become more active...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Tani aa gayi
Waiting for next pls give long update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
tani ki entry
omg
plz no diff between kr
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nce update...N thanks for da PM..
plz update fast the next part...N PM me..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
just came across this story
its awesome
rey's family is interesting specially shreya

update soon
plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Itne din ke baad update diya
Itna chotu sa huh
Huh
But
Its a amazing update love it
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Posted: 10 years ago
just read all the parts and loving the story
love the concept
kriyaansh married
update soon
please PM me when you have updated, would love to read on, thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
ergh... u u u...
itna chottu saa udate
nice 1
luv u 4 d chottu cuttu update
but...
i want an os from each 1 on my bitrthday from u jaanu jaani chipkala & bandar aka pradeep

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