DDBEDS- KRIYAANSH FF updated part 10 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 9

Everyone settled down and they decided to just rest for today and eat separate.(I will only focus on kriyaansh) in the room of KriShaReYam they were getting ready.

Meanwhile a few rooms further(taani's room on the same floor)

T: so... kriya and rey phirse ek saath hai.. kuch toh karna padega lekin kya? I need to do something to get rid of kriya ! I killed vishesh(taani's late husband) toh yeh kriya kya cheez hai.

Flashback

Vishesh came back home from work late at night he walked in his room looking for taani.

Vish: Taani?? Kahan ho tum?

He was about to turn around when he felt a knife piercing in his back. It was taani who was stabbing him in his back 11/12 times. He was lying on the floor bleeding to death when he looked at taani.

Ta: m sorry vishesh. But I have to do this ! I want my love back and I can't get him back until ur stil alive. You were a good man but I can't help it. Rest in peace my friend.

End of flashback!

Back to kriyaansh

They were on their way down to the restaurant. They decided to eat Chinese food. Kriya was wearing a simple white yet beautiful dress. They sat down and ordered. The food was delicious. They were still eating when taani came to their table.

Ta: hey guys is all well here, like the food?

Kri: yah the food is awesome.

Ta: great m glad u liked it...rey.

Rey: yes?

Ta: if u don't mind can I talk to you later when u guys finish your dinner?

Rey: uhmm sure.

Ta: great meet me at the lobby when ur done. Bye kriya

With that she left.

Rey: kriya

Kri:hmm?

Rey: kya hua tum chup kyun hai?

Kri:m eating and u know most people don't talk while eating..

Rey: yah I know but u always talk...should I have denied talking to taani?

Kri: no if you guys want to talk you can talk rey.. I trust u mujhe pata hai ki u won't do anything wrong. And chill ur just going to talk not going on a date.

Rey: pakka na?

Kri: haan baba pakka!

They finished their dinner paid the bill and left. When they reached the lobby rey saw taani sitting he looked at kriya.

Kri: rey tum jao I will go upstairs.

Rey: u sure?

Kri: yah you go.

Rey: oke I'll come soon.

Kriya was waiting for the lift doors to open and looked back at rey. She saw him walking towards taani.

Rey:taani...

Ta: rey ! uhmmm wanna go to the poolside? It's less crowded there.

Rey: sure lets go.

At the poolside rey and taani were just walking side to side.

Ta: soo u and kriya are back together huh?

Rey: yup

Ta: that's great m happy for u guys.

Rey: thanks. But what was it that u wanted to talk about.

Ta: ok listen rey I don't want you to feel awkward.. I mean with me being ur ex and kriya ur girlfriend. I want kriya to know that whatever we had was the past. So that she also doesn't feels awkward..

Rey: kriya knows that. She trusts me and I won't ever break her trust. And anyways there are no awkward feelings. You and I are just friends now and everyone knows that so you don't have to worry about that.

Ta: thanks rey. I know what I did with u wasn't right and m glad that all is fine now. But just to be sure.. she forwarded her hand

Friends?

Rey : friends he said smiling and accepting her hand.

After that taani spread her arms

Ta: friends can hug right?

Rey: yes they can he said and hugged her.

Meanwhile kriya was standing outside her bedroom on the terrace. She looked down and there she saw rey and taani hugging as their room had a full view on the poolside.

She walked back in the room and checked the time 22.30 pm

Kri: ugh I need a break.

She walked into the living room where Sharon and swayam were sitting on the couch watching tv.

kri: Sharon get ready call all the girls and tell them to be ready in 30 mins. we're going clubbing.

With that kriya left getting herself ready.

Sharon looked at swayam who just shrugged his shoulders and went back to watch tv again.

And just like kriya said 30 mins later all the girls we're ready to check out one of the clubs downstairs. While rey and taani we're still at the poolside not knowing what all the girls were up to.

It was 00.15 when rey and taani were walking back in the lobby towards the lift when they bumped into swayam.

Swa: rey where were you I have been looking for you everywhere.

Rey: I was with taani . kya hua is everything ok?

Swa:yah everything is fine but I was getting bored on own an all the others guys are sleeping.

Rey: what do you mean on ur own? Kriya and Sharon kahan hai?

Swa:woh all the girls went clubbing.

Rey: they what?! When did they left?

Swa: uhm about an hour ago.

Rey: they went clubbing alone?

Ta: rey they are old enough to go alone and there is nothing to worry about. Let them enjoy na.

Swa: I think taani is right rey.

Rey: fine.. he said still a bit worried. With that they left while taani went for some work.

In the room rey sat on the couch with coffee

When swayam walked by.

Swa: rey won't you go to sleep?

Rey: nope I'll sleep once the girls are back. You go and sleep.

Swa: nope it's ok I''ll wait with u. he said and sat on the other couch switching channels to see if there;s anything to watch.

It was around 2.45 am when swayam got a call from Sharon he picked it up and put it on loudspeaker.

Swa: ha shar where are you guys?

Sha: uhmmm we kinda need your help..

Swa: help what help and why?

Sha: who kriya.. she's drunk..

Reyam: WHAT?!

Sha: ugh just come fast guys. We're at the back corner in the second club at the left side of the lobby.

And before swayam knew it rey already left.

When the both reached there they saw all the girls around kriya who was saying something like "good friends don't hug like that right?"

Rey: how did this happen?

Sim: who she took a lot of shots at the bar and then she danced a lot and then she was again drinking...

Rey: leave it I don't wanna hear. With that he lifted up kriya who struggled to get out of his hold and walked out of the club while the rest of them followed.

Kri: put me down u pig. I don't wanna go with you!

Baaabyyy I just wannaa daannnccceee I don't reallyyy carrreee I just wanna daaannceee.

Rey put me down!!!!!!!!

Then she started hitting him with her tiny little fists. But got tired and fell asleep in his arms.

Once in the room rey took off her heels and jewelry then tucked her in. after that he went to change and got in bed too after a long tiring day.

The next morning the girls we're still sleeping.

Swayam and rey had their breakfast. And left some for kriya and Sharon in the microwave.

They called up taani to ask if there was a studio where they could dance. And then left.

(their dance you can imagine them as swayam and rey) they were just done with dancing when rey's phone rang.

...

Phew long one finally done

Like and comment x shannel

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Tanni playing games
Can't believe she killed her husband
Crazy with a capital k
Rey is so caring and protective about kria
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Update
Loved it so much
Kriyansh date
But
Date mai tapak gai nani agrhhh
She killed her husband poor soul
Loved it so much
Kriya drung
Jelouse and dance
Wow
Loved it so much
Update next fast

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