||LEAP YEAR|| SS! :') (chapter 6 , pg 35) updt 24 NOV 2014 - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: archakan

wow dear u described their Kiss so magically... I love the way you portrayed Sanyu's emotions... i really enjoyed this part especially Sandhir kiss hi hi Eagerly waiting for Next part... Pls update asap dear...


omgee!! thank yu sooo very much! really!
overwhelmed!!!

ill updt sooonish :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing story.
loved it.update soon pls
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres



<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#3399cc">thank yu for those extremely flattering words :*</font>

Yar nothing like that ...
I surely meant dat
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres



<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">OH MY GOD!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">*blinks eyes twice*</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">sudeshna!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">omg! do yu realize how sweet you are ? :O</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">yes yes! whatever you interpreted is right!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">hahha... love yur muhawra! xD</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">i am so ecstatic and overwhelmed! </font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">thank you in a 1000 words! :"*</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">you are soo sweet!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">omg!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">magical is too high an adjective! though all i can say is that i will continue to write , no matter what!</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#9966cc">love yu :*</font>
arey arey itni bhi sweet nahi hu 😛
itni tareef karogi toh mujhe Diabetes ho jayegi🤣
and BTW you're writings are super awesome😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
awww god...!!
that awesome feeling when you imagine sandhir .. lol 😳
loved it

pm ke liye thank youuu ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago

I sincerely apologise for such a late update :(
Exams .. I hope this explains it all T.T

I am sorrier I haven't replied to your comments .
This Sunday ! I will surely try.
As for the next update , I'll try to deliver it sooner !

Lots of LOVE,
Preeti :**<3

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He turned back , only to see her running towards him and into his arms, sobbing.

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Randhir was almost shaken.
So much had happened in less than 24 hours that he almost believed everything to be a nightmare.

He was just waiting somebody to pinch him out off this reverie.

But WHO would do that?
He didn't even had someone to refer to them as his own.
No matter how successful he had become , he always returned home to an empty house, an empty bedroom , an empty hallway.

Only if he had the guts back then!

Randhir wasn't sure that he loved sanyukta or not 4 years back.
Although he always knew she was someone different.

Strong headed and arrogant.
He couldn't tolerate her at first , then eventually he couldn't tolerate her with anyone else.

What caused this change?
He never dared to introspect.

But then came Parth.
His sole support.

Parth had helped him overcome his loneliness, he helped him come to terms with his parents divorce.

Though Parth had always been modest , Randhir knew he owed Parth huge time.

So when one day Parth told him about sanyukta and him being a couple, Randhir had forced his feelings down the drain and congratulated him profusely.

This was the best way to pay him .

Because sanyukta had never given him a sign .

But after all these years, having her in his arms was mind boggling.

He wanted her!
Too bad!

And her reactions were such that she wanted him too.
Even worse!

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But he couldn't do this Parth!
After four years of sanyukta and parth living together , him doing this would be immoral !

He would once again , repeat HISTORY!

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Randhir closed his eyes for a minute.
Involuntarily pushing her further into him. He buried his head in her tresses , smelling roses.

His hands crawled up to the dent of her waist and felt her tears smudging his shirt.
He would not wash it , he would preserve this shirt for a lifetime no matter how crazy it sounded.

Her sobs grew louder .

He so wanted to soothe her.

Sanyuktas grip around him loosened as she faced him.

He looked at her.

She was so beautiful.
Her eyes were shimmering due to tears and her face had a pained expression.
He saw her eyes widen as she traced his cheeks with them.

He felt her hesitate as she brought one palm to his cheek , lightly sketching it.

He winced instinctively.

More tears fell from her eyes .

''Sorry ""

This was the right time.

He pushed her back with a jerk and snarled.

''Stay away from me you pathetic woman''

Sanyukta was taken aback by the hostility in his voice.

''How dare you!!?"

''You ask how dare I!? You have been trying to touch me ever since!

Why!? Doesn't your lover boy satisfy you? Haan sanyukta?" He smirked perfectly.

He was mentally prepared for another slap , but it never came.

She just stared him wide eyed.

''Listen sanyukta! I don't know about you ! But I am least interested in you! That kiss , out there? It meant NOTHING! OKAY?

Its an everyday thing for me! I have kissed thousands of girls , and its all the same! ''

His heart broke into another million pieces seeing her frozen.
She wasn't responding , and he knew she absolutely abhorred him till now.

He turned back to leave , blinking his eyes furiously .
He had successfully desolated himself AGAIN.



''Liar!"

Her voice sounded confident but meek.

He closed his eyes again. He so badly wanted to hear this Frm her.

His he wanted her to not believe him.

He turned back to see her smiling sadly.

''You can't even lie properly.''

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He ran up to her and hugged her tight.

He was sobbing .

Randhir had her hauled into his arms.
Her feet weren't touching ground.

He buried his head in her neck and inhaled deeply.
Sanyukta rubbed his back warmly , hanging on to him.

His eyes had confirmed her that he had been lying.

He lowered her on the ground and cupped her cheek.
removing the locks of her hair , all he wanted to do was to lock themselves here and throw the keys so far away.

''Kiss me Randhir'' he heard him mutter.

He gazed deep into her eyes , as if he wasn't sure of what he had just heard.

''You heard me '' she whispered confidently.

He didn't even wait for a second before pressing his lips on her's for the second time in a single night...

Not caring where it might lead them ...
Edited by DamselinDistres - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
soo emotional...and soo beautifuly written...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!!!!
i used to stalk dis ss!!!
loved it...
update soon~
keep up the good work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg chapter 4☺️☺️
its so sweet dear☺️☺️
moi tamator ban gayi thi read karte vakt🤣
sanyu slap rd😲🤣
awesome dear👏
Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

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its so cute chapter😳😳

sandhir amazing😃😃

and parth yaha bhi aa gaya beech me😡😡

next part sooonnn😉

Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago

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