||LEAP YEAR|| SS! :') (chapter 6 , pg 35) updt 24 NOV 2014

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Anupriya

@anuaskif

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

This was one amazing update. IT was as touching as it was hor and sensuous.

I loved the last portion of the update where Randhir realises that she is a Virgin "After all these years with PArth'...

Wow... i mean I got equally overwhelmed as the two of them while reading it.

But please this time update soon.

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don girls

@don girls

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Nice hot update after ages
Update soon this time

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Nitra

@Nitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Waooo hot and emotional but plz update next part soon...

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Wow

u updated

that too after so many days

but the update is worth to wait

simply loved it

you describe Sandhir moments so beautiful

they are meant to be

can't wait to read more

so plz continue soon

Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

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namya

@namya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Beautiful update!
Its amazing the way u described each and every thing
Update soon

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KAJAL

@foreverhers

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

This is sheer brilliance!!
I'm so in love with this story...
Do update it soon.

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Sandhir143

@Sandhir143

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

When will you update???

:'(

Please jldi se kro naa..

Dieing to know ki aakhir aagey kya hogaa..

Happy Writing!

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Sonali Shivkumar

@ChasingLiberty

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Oh My God !!!!!

Preetikaaa !!

you are driving me crazy with this FF

what the hell was that !!!

that is the best piece of work i have read in a long long time !!!!

with Randhir's every movie ..every dialogue .. i was literally like OH MY GOD !!!

just when i think it doesn't get better.. it friggin' does !

man i am going to faint !!!
LOVED ITTT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Hahah... You know i love you... Thank you :*

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-chocoangel-

@-chocoangel-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Yesss finally here tha update came
omggg
meri wait is over phewww
n ur ff's wait is over too finally me commentin on it lol
Its burning hot here isnt it dunno why
Hawww now i got it its ur update mane it ws hawwwt
But still beautifull
tha whole make out ws sensous but still not vulgar
The last para tht she ws virgin cuz she ws waitin fr him
N thn rds rkn awwwieee
We could feel hw much they were cravin fr each other
I jst hope they dont regret it later specially rd
I must say u r back with a bang dear
keep updatin soon
UPDATOSHHH SOOONISHHH

Ps. Ignore typoos