#3: ArHi SS: !!Eclipse!! *Chapter 18, PG 57* 09/Sept/14

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Anupama Jinethri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Though it was a little rushed I Loved it

I can't believe that it was the last update

They finally had their happily ever after

Anjali and shyam reunited and abhay too let go of his past and attended the wedding.

Do we get to read a epilogue? Would love to read 1

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#362

After all the misunderstandings they have finally made it to the mandap

Such a beautiful ending

Will miss this story

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Amazing update...thanks for the PM

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Deal05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Hi Kiran,

This is really a fabulous story.

Have you consider turning it into a book? I know you may have to do more work on it once an editor reviews but try and look into this.

Are going to get an epilogue?

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Pearl_Oyster

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Deal05
Hi Kiran,
This is really a fabulous story.
Have you consider turning it into a book? I know you may have to do more work on it once an editor reviews but try and look into this.
Are going to get an epilogue?

Yeah, an epilogue is due for this one which I shall post as soon as I finish writing it down (which would take about two more weeks keeping in view my tight schedule) :)
About the book thing, I haven't really ever considered writing a book, let alone conveting this story into one. But I am just really glad you thought this could be a book.
means a lot.
Thank you😳
About the epilogue for "Manipulating The Raizada", that's one silly story I wrote during my eardy days of writing :D
It's stuck where it is. No epilogues there :)

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sreemeera

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Posted: 10 years ago

#366

It really was an awesome story. I like the ending, which was beautiful.

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Huleygirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#367

Lovely ending to a beautiful story

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amita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#368

Hey Kiran just read your second story after destined to love

Must say its wonderful story

Loved it too much

Very beautifully and brilliantly written

Will love to read more of your stories

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Jyothi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#369

A very beautiful end to a very cute story !

amazing job ! 👏

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955548

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Posted: 10 years ago

#370

I don't know how I missed this last chapter.
Loved this practical ending.
Parents being their for their Daughter.
Maturely resolved.
Trusting Khushi. Wanting what makes Her Happy.
And Arnav asking Shashiji for Khushi's Hand.
Respect shown.
I can see the moral here.
Trust & Respect is a Two Way thing.
And Abhay being there to Bless Arnav & khushi Tops it.
Do like Your Style.

Keep Writing.
❤️ ❤️
❤️S 🤗