#3: ArHi SS: !!Eclipse!! *Chapter 18, PG 57* 09/Sept/14

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Vivek Prakash

@Vivek_IBMIndia

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#341

whatever the end of this story, you titled it as #Eclipse, and that eclipse cloud was beautifully ended by you, so i guess its fine and apt. ending...and i dont think its rushed...

I would like to #ThankYou for presenting us this beautiful journey ...

Now as you will be concentrating on #AgainstAllOdds , i will have to go through the whole story once again... as i voted for this story at the time of poll but majority wanted #Eclipse so i too have to read it from start...

will be glad to read AAO once again...Waiting

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#342

that was a lovely ending...

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#343

finally they married

lovely story

thanks for the pm x

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Maghinalls

@Maghinalls

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Can't beleive it's last chapter

Epilogue pls

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

yes u have ended it abruptly
but it's good that way
but can V get an epilogue with their kids in the picture
beautifully written

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Azra Zaidi

@AzraZaidi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Awesome update !!! will miss it !!

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Dt was really a gud enclosure to each one related to arshi n also themselves...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

agree that this is perfect ending to !!ECLIPSE!! but we do have right to feel sad as we will miss the story.. loved it a lot.. thanks for the story.. it was awesome story! 😃

thanks for pm 😊