new story on arsu- meeting of two-souls part 24 page 58, pr- pg 59 new - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: santhiyaa_J

wow loved it hmm Arjun came as Sanyaasi😎



thank u dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

The Whole Update Was Sweet ! But This Line Made Me Laugh !

Subhi was shocked seeing this scenario... thinking ye teesra kahan se agaya?





hehe kya karegi bechari already she was in dilemma between her love and reality and suddenly oone sanayasi come tab kya hoga

thanks for the complement with word of sweet☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
tini mini promo

subhi was shocked who almost faint and sit back with tears remembering arjun😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wish u a all an happy friendship

updates in few minutes😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65



happy friendship day and this update dedicate to all my reader s
plus don't except much logic pls.. and it doesn't have 😉 because it s all about loving 😆

this is also to my sweet paarav and their friendship
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Subhi was like yahan kya horaha hain? Ye muje kyun maang raha hain? Kahin brata Krishna ka kehna ka arth ye to nahi?kahin meri shaadi nahi ye mein kya soch rahi hoon...

Krishna calms balram down and then balram ask the sanyasi to ask something else.. when sanyasi says agar dena hain aapki behen ke saath mera vivah karwadiiye warna mein yahan se bina kuch liya hi chalajavoonga aur aap apni vachan se mooh pherna ka aur vachan bang karne ka... aise kuch emotional dialogues kehta hain arjun and balram sees Krishna who keeps his head down agreeing to the sanyasi.. balram then fold his hand and tells sanayasi of subhi being engaged to get married to some one else.. when sanayasi remind of Krishna kidnapping rukmini before marriage and it was fair that he was asking her before marriage to get married...(just rem the convo of krishna and arjun where krishna told about marriage and love ) to him so it was not wrong. He also says that he would have kidnapped subhi but he wanted the girl's brother to marry her to him seeing his shaurya not for any other reasons...

balram was like oh no kanha ki kartoot hum par hi ulta baari padgaya... He also know subhi was not interest in marrying duri but don't know the actual reason he was in dilemma and sees Krishna and ask him ab tum hi upay batavo kanah... he says upay to ek hi daav brata.. subhi ka shadi is sanayasi se kardiya jay... koi aur upay muje dikayi nahi deraha hain filhaal keliye.. varna log kya kahenge balram ne apna vachan bangh kiya... apni behen ke pyaar mein.. wo kaise achha raja banega... he confuses balram and at end balram sees the sanayasi and request him for last time...

Hey bhrahaman dev muje nahi pata aap koun hain parantu vinnati karta hoon ye mat maaangiye mujsejo mein dene ki stiti mein na hoon... he smiles and says agar muje aapki bahen se shaadi nahi karani hain muje agya dijiye mein chala javoonga... and turns when balram stops tehriye... mein apne vachan se mooh nahi pher sakta.. mein apni behen ki shaadi aapse karvavoonga... he smiles seeing balram and sees Krishna who pretend to be sad but smiling all naughtily ... arjun as sanyas se teek hhain aaj hi karwadijiye... kuch hi samay mein ek achha mauhrat hain... balram was shocked and ask how come he marry now ... when he replies when the marriage has to take place why not today and that to now when the day is auspicious...

subhi was shocked who almost faint and sit back with tears remembering arjun... that her life was just burning down in front of her eyes she closes the eyes and when she open her eyes like any other typical show.. fire were burning and she was next to that sanyasi getting married to him.. Krishna was secretly laughing and throwing flower over paarth wontedly and paarth was like madhav in his mind as it was distracting him from seeing subhi..they get married... sanaysi dress was on... The marriage ceremony get over.. balram was sad. He then decide to keep that sanaysi with them for his sister safe guard.. balram says it to that sanayasi.. when subhi says what ever it now she was married...she will live with her hubby n whatever state he is.. she will manage her life all in anger way.. balram ask forgiveness but she doesn't speak and says she will live any circumference but will not return to dwaraka... and goes crying and sees Krishna and rem his word of surprise and sees him with question look ..

What will happen now will she know whom she got married?😉

sorry for spelling and also for mistakes


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Edited by shavii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Shavii:
Another Update that made for Great reading!👏...Love Govind's Playfulness..he can be really Naughty and still look Innocent!😳😳...And does Govind Love playing little tricks and pulling his Parth's legs..😉😆...Nice one!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
beautiful part dear!👏
finally they got married
feeling sad for shubhu she could not be happy in her own marriage 😭 but then now there is a big surprise for her😉
i loved the way shubhu gets angry on dau bhaiya and says she won't visit dwarka ever😆
parantu usse kanha ki yojna ka kya pata?😉
keep updating soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
thank u guys for the comments😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: shavii



thank u

thank for reading and also liking it

she is cute as she is innocent yet brainy combo😆

thanks for commenting🤗

Cute+Innocent+Brainy combo..😉...yeah!😆

And no probs dear..😳..keep writing!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Wow !! But, Kanha Should Have Told Subhadra Na ? He's So Naughty !

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