new story on arsu- meeting of two-souls part 24 page 58, pr- pg 59 new - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Undoubtedly our paarth is a very intelligent guy... but around madhav he s d most innocent in d whole world...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bechara Shock Ke Maare Behosh Ho Raha Hai !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: subhikrish

Undoubtedly our paarth is a very intelligent guy... but around madhav he s d most innocent in d whole world...



exactly madhav tricks him to be innocent because he loves to tease his innocent paarth and play with him😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Bechara Shock Ke Maare Behosh Ho Raha Hai !!!!!



haan shock to lagnta

itna simple matter ko madhav ne aise jadke ke saath diya 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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haha...😆finally parth ko hosh aa gya😆ekdum filmy hero-heroine style me faint hua parth🤣😆madhav ki baahaon me☺️☺️lol😃loved it.🤗.❤️hehe parth says dat madhav iss duniya ka sabse bada naughty insaan h..☺️dat was and 🤣..madhav is like tumhare saath naughty hone ka mann krta h parth🤣🤗...madhav tells parth to be in dari mooch roop..and parth was like😲😲kahi madhav ko ye ropp kuch zyada toh pasand nhi aa gya☺️he blushes😳...

cant wait for next part.its superb yaar😎👏.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow finally arjun understood thnk god & i'm waiting eagerly to noe wats the reason behind madhav not identifying paarth wen he came with subhi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anshikashaheer

haha...😆finally parth ko hosh aa gya😆ekdum filmy hero-heroine style me faint hua parth🤣😆madhav ki baahaon me☺️☺️lol😃loved it.🤗.❤️hehe parth says dat madhav iss duniya ka sabse bada naughty insaan h..☺️dat was and 🤣..madhav is like tumhare saath naughty hone ka mann krta h parth🤣🤗...madhav tells parth to be in dari mooch roop..and parth was like😲😲kahi madhav ko ye ropp kuch zyada toh pasand nhi aa gya☺️he blushes😳...

cant wait for next part.its superb yaar😎👏.



faint to hona hi ta.. madhav jo itna tease kiya😆😆 madhav ki naughtiness paarth ki innocents😆

haha sach hain.,.. paarav ek dusre ke saath kahi bhi naughty ho jate hain.. hehe brihu is super hot na isliye😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pamalo

wow finally arjun understood thnk god & i'm waiting eagerly to noe wats the reason behind madhav not identifying paarth wen he came with subhi.



hehe yes he understood finally

madhav will tell

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the lovable comments from u people 🤗

this story is purely frictional which had run into my head😆 so don't expect much logic because i had almost skipped lots of it 😆 just enjoy as fan-fiction sorry if i had disappoint u

this is purely love story of arjun and subadhra so as madhav's naughtiness😆


Subhi was sitting sadly thinking what will happen? Who will help her? If she tells her elder brother he wont agree as he has given his words to his priya shishya duri and Krishna... she knew Krishna won't go against his daav bratha.. . who else her parents nope... how will she says when she doesn't know whether arjun was even ready to accept her.. with which hope she will go and tell them? What if arjun reject her... she was soo worried and lost sitting in her palace's garden when suddenly her friend disturbed her thought saying balram was organizing an talent showing game or jashn and who ever win it will be given the prize they ask for... subhi think why suddenly? When she ask her friend why it was organized she says it was plan of balram to celebrate her for coming wedding and Krishna ji gave idea .. she wondered why Krishna gave such ideas? She knew not one meaning was present for her brother's words.. for sure something is running in his mind but what? She goes to communicate with her brother who was welcomes her warmly and ask what was the matter she says about her thoughts where he smiles and says I don't have any other meaning balram brata wanted to do something spl for u so I gave this thought and he decided to go ahead... with it. Subhi was disappointed but Krishna tells her one thing to her..

Subadre chahe kuch bhi tum apna vishvas mat kona.. kya pata zindagi kounsa naya rang dikadein hamein jo hamein bahut ache lagne lage... And smiles.. subhi did not know why he said that but knew one thing for sure something is about to happen but what she did not understand... she sees him with question look which was more of confusion and he smiles as usual an smile which had all answer.. she just needed to trust him . madhav smiles thinking subadre tuje kud nahi pata agye kya hoga but fikar mat karna sab teri ichha se hoga ... jo hoga tuje us mein kushi hi milega... He was smiling the usual madhav smile with showing complete set of teeths... subhi was all in confused state spl after talking to her bratha which usually get solved but today her confusion was increased.. what was stored for her she din't know but an surprise is on the way she realize

Balram was smiling seeing the jashn when the thing means games were heating up and the round come where one has to fight against the person who boast himself of doing all and enters the sanyasi agreeing for the challenge

Balram was surprise but not madhav who was calmly sitting down and smiling and subhi was also present seeing the things.. she witness the person and feels she has seen him somewhere and lost I n thought balram think how to allow and sanyasi but Krishna says it was nothing wrong for anyone to show talent and matter is to stand against the person who is boasting himself of being best.. it is matter of who is standing infront not of that what caste he belongs to and convinces and balram announces who ever win that person will be given award whatever they asked and arjun comes and fight with the boasting person with sword archery so as with hand (raudra roop yaad to nahi ara ha hain?) he wins of shocking all but time comes for giving the prize... arjun in sanyas comes smiling he ask koi bhi mangloon dedenge kya aap.. balram says haan kuch bhi.. maanglo.. ye hamari izzat ka swaal hain... he smiles and sees his madhav in side eyes who blink slowly indicating to go head... he says muje aapki behen tofe ke roop mein chaiye hum unse vivah karna chate hain.. balram got anger was getting g ready to smash him when Krishna stops him.. aaj muje rokna mat kanha.. himmat kaise huyi ise hamari saamne aise prastav rakne kooo.. behen hain hamari koi tofe mein dene wali cheez nahi... he says shant hojayiye daav bhrata.. meine manta hoon subadra hamari behen hain aur kisi ko koi adikaar nahi hain aise tofe mein use mangne kii.. agar ye maangliya to kya hum dedenge .. koi bhi sanyaasi ayega... aur kuch bhi kahega hum usski baatein maan lenge... har kiz nahi...

Sanayasi says to kya aap apni vachan ka baangh karenge? deklijiye balraam jise apni vachan se badkar kuch bhi nahi hain wo aaj vachan baangh karenge...

Subhi was shocked seeing this scenario... thinking ye teesra kahan se agaya?

Ab kya hoga?


sorry for mistakes and spellings 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The Whole Update Was Sweet ! But This Line Made Me Laugh !

Subhi was shocked seeing this scenario... thinking ye teesra kahan se agaya?

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