The unknown son (An Arjuna-Iravan FF) Part 8B-Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

awesome update

loved it

waiting for next part

continue soon

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sorry Yajnaseni for late comment... it was beautiful.. liked the Draupadi part too... 😊 Your writing style is really unique...!!! :D Keep writing... 😊

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Cotswolds

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

This story is refreshing. I dont know much about Iravan and loved all touching interaction with Arjuna. Both father and son share passion of excellence in archery and loved how they bond together during archery practice. You captured very well his interaction with nakul, yudhi, initial awkwardnes with arjuna, feeling of aloofness amongst all pandavas and uppandavas and great kind heart of mother Draupadi..👏

Looking forward to his interaction with Drau and heroics in battlefied.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

OMG... dear it's great. Actually I initially read your FF but later I was broken up in between. So you see it didn't took me long to catch up. I still have to read part five... But couldn't resist after reading part four. I love the way you are shaping the story.😳

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proteeti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Arjun-Iravan Were Too Cute Together !! Loved How Draupadi Had Asked Iravan To Meet Her !

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Angela Grokes

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Okay dear. Just finished reading the fifth part. It was so touching. Just Arjun and Iravan it was really refreshing to read. Do continue soon dear, I'll wait eagerly.

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luv_sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Very Refreshing Story!😃Nice work with all the writing!👏..You're good at this..😉..I didn't know much about this character, but got some great perspectives from ur FF..😊..Great updates!😃..Keep it Up!👏

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Yajnaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: luv_sakshi
Very Refreshing Story!😃Nice work with all the writing!👏..You're good at this..😉..I didn't know much about this character, but got some great perspectives from ur FF..😊..Great updates!😃..Keep it Up!👏

Thankx for reading. Iravan is not a well known character of Mahabharata. But he is worshiped in parts of South india. His story (as I read from Jaya) intrigued me. There are two versions of his story- the Ved Vyasa one and the Tamil folk version.

This story is partly my own imagination and partly the Ved Vyasa story.

NOTE: Thanks everyone for reading, commenting as to encourage me to write more.

Edited by Yajnaseni - 11 years ago