The unknown son (An Arjuna-Iravan FF) Part 8B-Page 23 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one dear.. Like it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I liked concept of Yuddhi giving advice to Iravana...
I am eagerly waiting for the next update...😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good one girl...now u will update fast...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welldone dear.Short but affectionate.I loved the way Yudhishtir conversed to Iravan.The hidden feelings were conveyed beautifully.Now eager for the next update.Happy Independence day
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for the PM and Update😃
Wow... Nice that you are showing his bonding with all the other characters too👍🏼...

Amazing👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Loved Yudi-Iravan's Bonding !! Such A Sweet Update !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice👏👏 Pls update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like your writing style... The symbolic comparison with stars is very meaningful. Especially when Tudhi says that he loves being with them. My family.
Another dialogue I liked a lot is when asked by Iravan if Yudhishtir misses his dad, he says "I do. Don't you?" This line has such a deep meaning.
Continue real soon. Will be waiting for your PM about update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

I like your writing style... The symbolic comparison with stars is very meaningful. Especially when Tudhi says that he loves being with them. My family.
Another dialogue I liked a lot is when asked by Iravan if Yudhishtir misses his dad, he says "I do. Don't you?" This line has such a deep meaning.
Continue real soon. Will be waiting for your PM about update.


I will update fast if you all promise to comment faster. I still find all of my readers hv not caught up with this update. And thanx for the encouraging words!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sry 4 late reply dr... was held up...
as 4 d story loved d concept of yudhi giving advice to iravan... he understands every1 ri8...
and do write an emotional meet of arjun and iravan...and write fast too...

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