The unknown son (An Arjuna-Iravan FF) Part 8B-Page 23

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Yes yes yes me first!
This was such a different update.. It was very unusual but so wonderfully written! Loved it...:):) Please continue writing I would love to read more! Loved every word... 😃

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ElMystique

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I loved this update ...

quite emotional...

I think the best part is you caught Arjuna's emotion perfectly

he wouldnt really accept anyone in the fist look and consider him in the personal space...

Secondly the pride was good because yes it is quite natural when your three year old little son becomes an efficient warrior and a king...he would definitely be proud...

I also liked iravan's inner turmoil...

It is beautifuly written

upadate soon...

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Shriya95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

It was very well written dear...it was my wish to see Iravan n uloopi in ⭐️Bharat but it remained an unfulfilled one😭😭

But ur story more than made up for it...it was very subtle,elegant yet impactful!!!

Lovvvelyyy darling😃

Continue soon!!!

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.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Thank you dear for d pm

The story is very interesting.Looking forward to d meeting of d father and d son.Reading ur description of Vaasudev gave me goosebumps .Do continue

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Brishti Sarkar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Hey Yajnaseni.. whats ur name? 😊
and update soon soon soon I cant wait.. after a long time I am addicted to an OS.. 😃

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subhikrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

this s very emotional... arjun s one of my favourite characters in mahabharat... but the nly thin I dont like abt him is his behaviour towards iraavan... poor soul he dint get his fathers love at all in his whole life... he lived all his childhood longing to look at his father when he finally saw him he dint get the love he so badly wanted and then finally he died jus for his father... update soon...

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Yajnaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: subhikrish
this s very emotional... arjun s one of my favourite characters in mahabharat... but the nly thin I dont like abt him is his behaviour towards iraavan... poor soul he dint get his fathers love at all in his whole life... he lived all his childhood longing to look at his father when he finally saw him he dint get the love he so badly wanted and then finally he died jus for his father... update soon...

Now do not blame Arjun. We really don't know what happened with them, do we? I do not know if Ved Vyasa has described anything to a very emotional level. There may have been contact between them but we would never know. But tell me anyone if they have heard any kind of folktale or anything about the incident. I don't claim to know everything. I just pour out imagination to my heart's content.

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.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Yes dear i missed it earlier.This is perfect.Arjun's and Iravan's inner feelings are wonderfully written.Iraavan's pain touched me Do continue Thank u for d pm.Waiting for d warmth to develop btwn the father and his son to develop after the initial uneasiness melts away

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

this is exactly what i wanted to read about Arjun Iravan relationship it seemed like u have read my heart and giving words to my thought, Arjun's ego dilemma and Iravan's longing for father's love