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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG, the kiss was awesome. Hope Arnav and Aakash Patch up
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Congrats on the new thread
Superb update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update..

Waiting to see mischievous arnav wink wink..
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Nice update. Loved arshi scenes.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww loved the chapter..loving this flirty Arnav

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Superb Update Dear!!! Loved it...
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Hii... Wonderful update...
Underestimating children isn't a very good thing... I mean, of all i know, children are not just very perceptive but are very clever too... No wonder they get away with everything... And here in this case Manyata is an excellent example... But my heart really goes out to her as all she longs for is a happy and normal family.. Something that most of us take for granted... I hope things settle down a bit, at lest at the home front for manyata's sake...

Anuj Raizada... Me kya kahu uske baare me... His shallow power hungry malicious being sickens me... Who on earth plays with their own children? And what for? An heir?that's just pitiful... What would he gain if he gets an heir who turns out to hate him dor being the sick manipulative person he's being? Hell! I really don't like taking extreme stances... But whatever demons of the past haunt him and whayever he's trying to prove isn't worth loosing gems of people like Arnav and Anjali... There's something seriously wrong in his core character...

Aman... you know what i like about him? He is a well wisher, friend, business partner, and a lot more rolled into one. He's grounded and he's level headedness is appreciable... The relationship he has with Khushi is good...

Arnav and Khushi... I can't even say what they do to me.. Even in so formal a relationship they have, an intimacy that they have is not just heartwarming but also mesmerizing... Arnav never fails to care.. No matter what.. Im glad Khushi decided to share her plan with him.. Which is very mature of her..

That's about tge story... And now about your writing... You've done a very good job with the update.. Swinging between characters and different settings of the plot and yet nit loosing touch of the baseline.. You've done a good work.. The way you stick so close to reality and how no character is perfect is... It's so real... Very well done... Keep writing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb awesome. ..lovely. ..update. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am kinda scared that Khushi is also going to club.. There's a lot going on.. I hope they all will be okay...
One More Kiss good going ASR... I hope to hear Dhak Dhak from Khushi real soon..
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loving arnav, he is so cute, this was an amazing update, eagerly waiting for the next one

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