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Posted: 11 years ago
THANK YOU 8K+ WORDS WELL DESERVED FOR SUCH AN IMPORTANT CHAPTER. THANK YOU AGAIN
Part 1 Thank you for not making Khushi run, from him, from everything that had happened and the fact they the two of them will be there for each other, their love has endured and hopefully it will do do even though your next chapter sounds like a toughy. Loved the way he made sure that Khushi got back safely to her parents, also ensuring that they spent more time together, as you said, words are not needed when you want someone to know you love them. I'm glad that her parents were completely honest with her, and told her everything. They way she felt hearing what her mother went through, I don't know how a daughter can even digest that it happened, even worse it wasnt JUST a one off. And poor Gareeshma wasnt the only one. How many more kids had the malik men sired no one knows and that is the sad thing. It happened in the past, even accepted so sad that women the world over have had to live through this type of abuse only to be told its something not unusual. 😭 putting a crying smilee here doesnt do the subject justice. WELL DONE, such an awesome way of showing how women coped. I loved how eventually Khushi realised that these two were her parents no matter what, blood is not thicker than water its the nuturing, the love, the respect and finally the good virtues an adult gives to that child that makes a parent and child bond. BAS
In fact Part 2 was just as good, first Arnav running around looking frantically for his nanni, his other mother.the love he holds for her undeniable. Although he realises he is a malik not a Raizada, it makes no difference, the love is and always be there, for his nanni and his sisters. Knowing that Garima went through so much and still wanted to keep him, will hopefully,make him accept her in his life. Im sure Ahlaya would want that if she was looking down on him. Arnav has been keeping so much inside himself, thinking that he undeserving of love because of what he heard that night, thinking he was the cause of his mothers death. Thank god this man also had Gareeshmas blood in him, like her he made something of himself, he took care of hix sisters, his nanni.

The last scene was fab, the mother with her children around her, reminising of ghdir life together as a family. VAH 👏 👏 👏

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was fabulous update...
No words to explain about my views on update... I must say Kushi is too lucky to have Shashi and Garima as her parents.. they are such a lovely and understanding parents...Hats of to shashi, he is so understanding and gave/ giving his support to Garima when ever she needed...

Coming to Arnav, poor boy, he is going througt a hell since long... but the convo between Nani and him is a relief for him and hope to get rid of that burden from him...
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Posted: 11 years ago
AAAMAZING!!!!
Beautiful update!! I love the way you split the update into two part, i think that was very important and made things so much more clear and got me to see both sides of the story of what happened after arnav and khushi split.

It was clear, concise and to the point...amazing update.


I think out of both of the part, i preferred reading arnav bit only because i thought there was more new information given to the readers about ajun malik and arnav mother...it also shown how strong arnav is...and it got nani to understand her chottey for the strong and powerful man he has grown up to be. It was an eye opener for both.


Lovely update!!! I can't wait to read the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
S,
To be honest,both parts were so overwhelming that I am not sure what to write... My thoughts are swirling too much to write anything coherent...

Beautiful! Loved everything about the update.

- Arnav's panic after waking up thinking Khushi left
- Then the relatively normal morning after they had with light teasing.
- Arnav's conviction about dropping her off at her parents' suite
- The hug and emotional first minutes of Khushi with Shashi & Garima.
- The talk about adoption and the reveal about how Arnav was given up. (Guess you closed all the loops on this side)
- The way Guptas assured Khushi about their thoughts about Arnav.
- The second panic attack Arnav went through when he couldn't find Nani.

Everything from here was just heart wrenching. You captured it brilliantly.

and thanks for writing so many words and not compromising the story... :)
Edited by thumbi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
just one word AWESOME
u made me cry thru ur update today.
very nicely written
hats off dear
keep up ur fantastic work
now eagerly waiting for ur next update
& thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update Sandhya but
the last line is scaring me.
Emotions are running high.
men such as the malliks should
castrated.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sandhya, you made me cry!!!... again!! Hey, very well written and I really enjoyed reading both the parts of this chapter. Definitely worth the wait!! Big hugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing..
Marvelous update..
Lovd it truly..
They provd that there are many relation which cn be made with love, purity..
Hope they overcome this situation together..
Thnks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written and repeatedly read(by me) chapter.High on emotions...dont we all love it(emotions).I cried more than once,and was smiling when the chapter ended.Again wanted to cry coz the name of the next chapter sounds like we are nearing the end of this beautiful story.Please never stop writing and before you wrap up this one...please start a new one(FF)
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Posted: 11 years ago
And they came through👏
Although I had anticipated Shashi and Garima's reactions towards Khushi, I was thoroughly taken back with Devyani's formidable character and strength. I found Arnav and Devyani's conversation more emotional and I was proud of the way she took away the little boy's guilt with her love and soothing words.
And yeah, no matter how much the highs and lows, Devyani is the one standing strong for her three precious children and still is. She has totally redeemed herself in my eyes.
loved the chapter.

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