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Posted: 11 years ago
the flow of this story, just captivating as well as dismantling at the same time👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
This has to be one of the most beautiful updates.. I felt it!! Felt every word u wrote!! Was with them listening to their conversations !! This has truly touched my heart and soul.. U can really write ! I mean really touch thru ur writing ... I mean it when I said I felt every word
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was yet another emotional part with lot more hope towards dawn than before. You have again outdone yourself 👏 ..

I loved the natural bonding among each relationship. Weather among Khushi and her parents or Arnav and his Nani. It was definitely night of revealation. Finally Khushi got to know the entire truth of Garima and Arnav, her birth and the reason behind the secrecy. Also she shared her relationship with Arnav. Regarding Arnav, he finally shared the biggest secret of his life with his Nani. It was very sad to see Nani like that but both Arnav and Nani needed to have this conversation for their own sake and closure.

I am already waiting for next part. Brilliant part as always Sandhya 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very beautifully written... you are tying the lose ends of the story so well! Some things which had seemed unrealistic earlier, all makes sense now with the revelations - eg. why was Arnav so reticient about his relationship with Khushi, why Ahalya stayed on with Arjun even after she found out such horrible things about him...
Loved the morning after scene between Arnav and Khushi. A lot has changed between them in that one night. Khushi has finally let go of her hurt and quite rightfully so. Both of them have finally started to think about their love above and beyond everything else. You have written it so well, not just this chapter but all the other chapters leading up to it, that the progression seemed very natural.
Arnav is really strong and so is Devyani. They are looking past their grief and putting others' interest above their own. Loved the Arnav-Devyani conversation. Also loved Khushi's conversation with her parents. Garima and Shashi are indeed her real parents. But it isn't easy to accept that overnight.It just shows how strong and magnanimous Khushi is...
Looking forward to Arnav and Khushi's bond getting stronger and them to become more comfortable with each other. They really deserve that after the torture they have gone though in staying away from each other for so many years.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...was very scared for arnav.. but u handled it well.. wud love to find a new arnav who is free of guilt...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Too Good!!!!!!!!!!!!
Am overwhelmed after reading this...
Firstly... the reunion of khushi with her parents was good...
the frankness with which both Shashi and garima narrated the matters was really nice...
Khushi's feeling for her mother...hatred for Mallick was understandable...
Loved the way Khushi defended Arnav...
She understood his pain ...
his earlier betrayal...that she had felt...but the best was her defending him...
Arnav and Nani's relation went a notch higher...
The way both consoled and comforted the other was touching...
Both convinced the other that they were not responsible for Ahalya's death...
The family reunion was an occasion for celebration...

Want to see Arnav and Khushi ahead together in the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update sandhya...
It is often in hindsight that solutions to dire circumstances seem visible but nonetheless the time passes away...the eye of the storm hides the nearest way to escape it with its sheer brutal speed and force... for an outsider it would have been easy to judge Ahalya, Nani and Garima all just like in hindsight Nani is judging herself but emotional storms are no less than real physical ones. Only few can manage to curtail the destruction by holding on to what is important like Arnav did albeit his young age...he chose to shoulder the burden in silence so that the storm doesn't destroy what was left of his loved ones...he deserves every bit the pride that Nani has in him... As I read this update I realize that ability to be compassionate towards others and towards oneself has an immense healing power ...I hope Nani understands this.

This update reminds me of an advice once a friend gave me " Do not have regrets for the past or label something as a mistake they were just decisions gone wrong owing to either the limited experience u had in life or limited information"

Sandhya the last scene you wrote summarized what Nani had actually achieved inspite of wrong decisions of her past...love, understanding and care that these Singh Raizada's shared...it was Ahalya and Nani's upbringing which made the children Singh Raizada's and not malliks and there in lies the redemption for nani if she seeks one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
A heart touching update...the beginning was perfect...Arnav and khushi's moments...them being there for one another...my heart was pounding when khushi was having her conversation with her mom and dad...she is so lucky to have parents like sashi n garima...I have to agree that the bond of love is greater than the bond of blood...an absolutely beautiful family of sashi garima n khushi...I panicked when Arnav couldn't find nani...she seemed so fragil...I m glad Arnav took the first step n told nani that he knew long time ago...it was a shock to her but atleast it eased her a little to tell the whole truth to Arnav...loved nani for making Arnav realize no matter what he is a Rizada...I admired ahalya for being so sting for her kids...it's unfortunet that back in the days women were a mere toys for man...n no one could stop them...and as sad as it seems a lot of places in India are still the same...if not worse...it sad coz there are parts of India that are up to spear with the rest of the world and stand up for the wrong...but here are many places where people still live in the understanding that man r the ultimate being...nani is one awesome person who even in that day spoke to Arjun...but unfortunetly couldn't free her daughter from that horrible man...I hope Arnav understand that garima never wanted to give him up n that she loved him...I can't wait for Arnav to meet garima...I wonder how that scene would be...ohh the ending to his update was sooo beauiful the mother figure nani with her three children...I can actully picture the scene...so beautiful...again the bond of love cannot be broken so easily...truly heart touching update...I absolutely LOVED IT!!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
'it was simply beautiful!
Hats off!
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏 👏 👏 awesome update dear!!!!
loved each n every part of this update...starting with d lovely start of arshi n there moments then came d realising n understanding part of kushi n her parents...just loved it
n den d convo btw grand ma n her ladla grand son gosh i just loved wen nani said no one should b guilty for wt happend...
totally in love again n again with this ff...u just blow life into d characters!!!!
awesome work!!!

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