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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#891

awesome. ...don't have words now..as im crying buckets

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aaee

@aaee

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Thank you for a fantastic birthday gift- your update.

I loved how both Khushi and Arnav have matured in this chapter. Loved how parents came clean, showed how they are flawed but how they will always stand for their children.

Now it is all picking up the pieces, cleaning up the debris and marching on. Just like you said S, cleaning up after a storm.

Now excited to read what happens next, hopefully real soon.

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#893

The positivity just keeps on flowing! I love that through the misery, there is sense and hope for better times.

The wounds are raw at the moment and there is a lot to process, but you get the feeling that Khushi and Arnav uniting is just as much about correcting a past as it is about building a bright future.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#894

Arnav and khushi are anchors for each other in tough times . The passionate night helped the lovers to forget their dark past for time being . But the talk is not over . Khushi and her parents reunion were penned emotionally . No mother should be in place of Garima who had to explain her dark past to her child , for me Garima is khushi's mother who gave up her own child owing to circumstances and left no stone unturned to raise the child she adopted like her own . If khushi is lucky to have mother like Garima she is blessed to have father like Shashi . In those times where divorce was a big issue and traditions , culture ,society held more importantce, Shashi turned out to be a gem of person . He not only understood and comforted Garima but also adopted a girl whose fate would have been down the hill who was in a orphanage . khudos Shashi Gupta

Nani's explanation throws light on people's thinking , mindset and society before three decades . Nani explained Garima's plight when she had to give up on Arnav . Arjun Mallik is the worst scum on earth , now Arnav would have understood why Greeshma shed her honour before a powerful Mallik . . Knowing themselves as orphan is better than knowing themselves as rape child . Here the former is khushi and the latter is Arnav .Ahalya's love for Arnav over shadows the tag of illegitimate child from Arnav's mind .

The serious conversation came to an end with Anjali and Anya's entry , everything can wait for now family time is all needed for Arnav and nani .

loved it

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#895

Thanks for the update

Loved it

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namita11

@namita11

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#896

Water is getting cleared. ..finally

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Greyasr

@Greyasr

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#897

Yes yes yes.. U made my day and definitely redeemed yourself for posting the update so late but could not ask u for more..

Super super and love The wayArnav portrayed his emotions and Devyani's

Guilt and everything too good.

Thanks for the wonderful update..

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#898

This was a difficult chapter to write. But you did a wonderful job of explaining every small detail of what they felt and why and how they reasoned with it. I loved it. Thanks for your hardwork and giving us such beautiful chapter.

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#899

I just loved it...👏👏👏

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#900

You again made me spellbound with this chapter!

I'm so happy that I came across this story and a ardent fan of yours.

What an amazing way to put everything in order. The dawn which brought lots of promises in all the broken hearts.

The love between Arnav and Khushi that is willing to share each others pain and support them to overcome their problems.

It was fabulous how he missed and panicked when he couldn't find her next to him

Loved the way he dared Khushi to change in front of him 😛

The bonding of Khushi and Garima and Sashi too. I love this Sashi who is portrayed as selfless. Him goimg to make the tea giving Garima and Khushi to acknowledge each other after the revelation. Cudos to you.👍🏼. I loved it when she stood up for Arnav.

The best is the part of Arnav and Nani's bonding. Especially when Arnav is worried about missing Nani. What a loving grandson Nani has got and she knows that for sure. Though not by blood he is more than that.

It's true DNA does not matter.

And them sharing their pains. and you finished it up well with all three siblings together with their only pillar their Nani!. This love and togetherness is rare and should remain the same always.

It was an amazing chapter and you have a way with words and your writing is excellent.

Sad to know this story will finish soon.

Have you got anything else planned for future?

Please do not stop writing.

Thanks for the PM and all the best.